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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position and thought on driverless cars is that it would be great to have them. Plus better on fuel that we use so that would be good. I also think alot of people could get hurt using these cars, reason are they still need humans to watch the road and pay attcation and some people might not watch the road if they have a driverless car. Thats why i think people could be hurt with these. I think these cars would cost so much to make that only a few people would own one of these to use. Too repair this cars if anything happened would cost so much money people would be sarced to drive them.\n\nIf they get to a point where all cars drive by themselfs i feel there would be a lot less people being killed from cars and people around cars would be a lot safer. Reason i feel this way is because some people go over the speed limit and drive around people because they are in a hurry but if you have a driverless car they would do the speed limit and there would be no problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Saeng vows end story show adapt change like hibiscus bud She knows hard take time end achieve approval happiness We see already hard way breaks crying And way talks mother She symbolizes planting hibiscus things going get better stuck past", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studing Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents the author thinks that because it says in paragraph 4 it says that astonomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-lke planet in our solor system.\n\nLong ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth today. Today,Venus still has some feature that are analogous to those on Earth.The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit.\n\nAlso some more reasons the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it persents in paragraph 8 is that we should be striving to meet the challenge preented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be grained on the plant itelf, but also because human curiosity will likey lead us find more stuff out.Also our travels on Earth beause we are scared should not hold us back from our imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Whenever architectural work put act thoughts potential consequences thought beforehand In The Mooring Mast builders Empire State Building faced several obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock The blimps consist dangerous chemicals dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen extremely flammable A possibility flames could result ruined building even worse destroyed city Although fires problem consider greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature This building extremely high sky therefore winds get quite brutal If blimp tied mast back ship continuously swivel ruin fabric aircraft A mooring mast bright idea large city like New York The population large area crowded The obstacles architects faced serious helped team kill idea allowing dirigibles dock Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day mom came home work She came said CAPS want go shopping clothes later I chose So mom changed clothes store It around rush hour It seemed like taking forever I getting mad Then mom said patient soon This time I patient After ten minutes things started clear It still took getting better In less twenty minutes pulling parking lot There cars lot didnt seem like much When got store thats I really mad The lines purchase items lead way back store Then mom said CAPS look The lines long see Are sure handle patients Ill try I said After got store looking clothes looking long lines also see went We got clothes got line We spent hour worth time line made mad Not make mad made hurgy I skipped lunch When got store happy hungry We left store went When street traphic line got closer closer realized line line We got lot I knew sure I going patients So waited line went really fast We got spoorker mom ordered fish sandwich chicken sandwich We got next window gave us food When got food lady said CAPS patients Then asked us would like free frie size wait We told yes take large frie My mom turn said Do see happens patient I said yeah patients good thing That time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a definite possability for the future, However there are many issues that need to be addressed before driverless cars go national. Having a fully driverless car is not possible as of right now. As of right now, the closest to a driverless car is, a car that requires hands on the stering wheel by the driver. These cars can stear, accelerate,and brake themselves, but every one of these cars are designed to notify the driver when the road requires a human driver. These cars can not drive through construction sites and the scence of accidents by themselves. So this requires drivers to always be alert when in a driverless cars. Threre are many issues that need to be addressed before driverless cars can be released to the public.\n\nOne issue that needs to be addressed before driverless cars are national, is what will the car do when it arrives where there is constrution in the road. Will the car know if it has to take a detour or will it try to continue on the orginal path that it knows. This can cause an issue because if a road is closed due to constrution, the car may not be able to find another way around and could cause damage to the passengers, the car, and any constrution workers on site. BMW has created a \"Traffic Jam Assisant\" car that can drive by itself to spends up to 25mph. This car however requires that the driver's hands be on the wheel at all time. Before driverless cars are a thing this issue needs to be addressed.\n\nAnother issue that needs to be addressed is what will happen if this car crashes. Who is to blame? The driver, or the car manufactuer? These cars would need some way of letting the authorites know if the crash was due to driver error or manufacture error. If this issue is not addressed there could possibly many lawsuits out for the driver responsible of the car or the manufacture. As of right now. Only three states and the Diatrict of Colimbia allow semi-autonomous cars. In other states these cars are illegal. Before these cars are able to be driven publicly, there is a need for new traffic laws to be put into place. These cars are liability risk, and this issue needs to be addressed before they should be allowed on the public roads.\n\nDriverless cars are defiently a thing of the future. They are possible as some are already created and driving, however not one of these cars is one hundred percent driverless. BMW \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" requires a drivers hand on the wheel at all times. There are many issues that need to be addressed before these cars should be allowed on public roads. There need to be laws put into place for these cars, because as of right now these cars a libablity risk. There are only three states plus the District of Columbia that allow thses cars to be driven and tested. More states will legalize these cars once they are proven to be reliably safe. In order to have these cars avaliable to the public, authoriteies would have to be able to tell who was responsible for a crash. If there is a crash with one of these cars, would it be the drivers fault or the manufacture. This is a big issue that needs to be addressed, because if we are not able to tell who or what caused these driverless cars to crash, there could be many law suits of the driver sueing the manufacturer. Or a victim from a crash sueing the driver or manufacturer. Before driverless cars are avaliable to the public this issues needs to be addressd so it gives authority to knpw if the driver is to blame of the manufacturer. All in all driverless cars is something that this generation is capable of doing, however these cars are not hundred percent driverless yet. One hundred percent driverless cars will probably something that comes in the next generation not this one. Manufactures such as Tesla are projecting to have a driverless car by 2016. However this car will be able to drive on autopilot for about 90 percent of the time not 100 percent. Other car companies are planning on having these cars by 2020. But before any driverless cars are put on public roads some issuess not to be addressed to keep driver safe, manufactures safe and the public safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, sometimes called \"Evening Star\", is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun. Lots of people often referred to as Earth's \"twin\" because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel. But numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\n\nOne of the challengings is that the coulds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our planet. Another challenging is Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Those are the reasons why we said that Venus has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\n\nToday, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many believe that majority of the senior positions are held by men, hence, it is suggested that certain percentageof these jobs to be observed for women. In my opinion, I disaggree that a percentage of jobs tobe observed for women, and the reasonsfor my deductionis given below.\r\n\r\nThe main reason is that, it is step towardsdiscrimination men. In certain countries, such as Sri Lanka, particular Governments post, eg. Secretary of female Affairs is set a side ofr a woman, and men are discourage from applying to the post, this is gender discrimination. Such seggregation should not be allowed as it is unfair to men.\r\n\r\nAdditionaly, some job can only be performed by men. It is proven by both medical studies and sphycological studies, jobs such as Head of Armed forces can only be sucessfully performed by men only. Therefore, having resstrictions to such positions may become an invalid action.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, the best person to the job must be appointed, and it should not be a matter of the gender. For an instance, Heinze Company 'a the current Chief Executive Officer is a female, a position that was formally held by a man. As such it allows the the company to benefit from the bast leadership. Therefore, gender should not be deciding factor in occupying a senior post. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I disagree that there should be a percentage observed for womenn in senior levels, because, it is discrimatitory towards men, it avoid the best person for the job and last but not least, certain jobs can only be performed by men.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of a driverless car isn't safe to me. Sergey says that driverless cars are coming in the near future, but the cars aren't even one hundred percent\n\ndriverless. The car is still required to have a driver take control if a dangerous accident was happening or if you had to pull out of a drive way. Why can't this \"Driverless car\" handle dangerous situations and pulling out of a drive way without human precaution? Driverless cars aren't cable of doing human things because it doesn't have a mindset of a human on the road.\n\nSergey explains in paragraph 5 that the driverless cars have sensors, but even sensors don't always work. If the sensor was to stop working and the car wasn't be able to alert itself an accident can happen. None of the cars developed are completely capable of being driverless without a driver in the car and paying attention, so why name them driverless cars? If the car requires a driver to still be alert at all times and be ready to take over the wheel, shouldn't the driver just drive their own car themselves? It's no point of a driverless car if it still needs a humans caution while it's driving. People who hear about a ''driverless car\" would idmmediatley assume they don't have to drive or pay attention at all to the road and the car will do all the road work for them.\n\nI don't agree with the driverless car invention because just how humans can have accicents when driving while having knowledge about driving on the road so can a car that is knowledged on driving by technology, humans crash and computers crash. This driverless car isn't even proven to be reliably safe. Humans are more capable of driving because humans are meant to drive. You can't have a car without a driver. Why teach a car to drive and have the ability to alert themselves if a accident occured like a human when thiers billions of people that can just drive on thier own?\n\nA driverless car isn't needed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created memoir greatfulness Narciso telling story honor parents selflessness They came selflessly many immigrants They worked hard could made home childhood could happy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author set mood memoir The mood set love kindness The reason love kindness mood says loves parents self sacrifice could grow The mood kindness thinks parents kind letting anyone door", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people are concerned about the quality of education in high school, they suppose that teachers should be evaluated by students, while others hold a contrasting view,saying that it will harmful to teacher’s reputations. In my view, I hold a positive view of the effect of evaluation from the student, which will dramatically improve the education quality.\r\n\r\nAdvocates for students rating their teachers, me included, often argue that it will lead to higher education quality for several reasons. To begin with, as the receptions of class learning, students spend more time with their teachers than other people,therefore, they are the best person s who can give judgment to their teachers. The students' judgment may seem disrespectful to a teacher, however, the quality of education sometimes determined students' intellectual development, so the judgment is necessary to improve the education quality. Furthermore, this practice can give useful suggestions to teachers, since students are more familiar with their teacher, they can understand the shortage during teaching previously, so that they can show valuable advice.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there is a concern about criticism from students may lead to some psychological impact on teachers. If students are encouraged to criticize teachers, they may exploit the opportunities to judge the teacher by using rude words as they hate their teacher for personal reasons. Hence, some teachers may feel disrespect while seeing this feedback. It can be handled by setting up the rules and checking the judgment, making sure the feedback is useful to improve the teaching quality.\r\n\r\nAll in all, I believe that letting students take part in the evaluation of their teachers can improve the teacher’s performance during teaching.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays we live in the digital age, where technology has become crucial for our day-to-day lives. Technology is helping as well developing a lot of prosthesis that can totally change the quality of life of people who were subjected to amputations or neurological diseases. Moreover, surgery has becoming less invasive thanks to new instruments that allows surgeons to be more sophisticated during their work. \r\n\r\nFirst of all, during my practice I’m discovering as well some negatives effects of machinery. For example, the increasing difficulties that children have in doing coordinations’ exercises. In fact as they spend a lot of time playing with digital games, they have less time to play normal and real games in which they normally discover new movements and improve their metabolic capacity. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there is the increasing number of pathologies related to the use of phones and personal computers. For example, spine diseases or wrists’ Tendinosis. Furthermore, recent studies related the use of technology with stress, that is identified as crucial cause of many pathologies. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, even if the Usage of technology can be used to help the healthcare system To deliver a better service is creating a lot of new illness because of the overuse of it. Afterwards, I believe that we have to take care of how we use tech And do not abuse its use because we Then risk losing our health and the capability of the movement of our body properly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine if you could find a way to improve school. Imagine it only took one simple task and youve raised scores on average by a bit. Over long periods of time we have long had two issues in school. These issues have caused alot of hardships at that in the process of learning and as a current student I would personally know. These issues are boredom and confusion and I would say a solution is here.\n\nThe first of these two issues to speak about is boredom. Myself as a student and im sure many of others have had problems with is boredom. Those monotone voices from teachers, and old lessons made fifty years ago make it hard to keep on track. Imagine having a highly intelligent system in place that knows when your bored. A system such as this could easily asses the students individually and tell who is bored, to then reorganize the lesson and teach it in a more profficient way. This would help students stay on track, which then means more focus on subject the more that is learned.\n\nThe second issue that would be at hand to fix is the confusion. Many students do not always understand things depending on the teacher and how they teach it which can cause confusion. Even more so troubling is many students don't say anything to the teacher about it in fear of embarassment. With a system to be able to pick up confused traits students needn't say anything to get help, because they already know that student needs help. Using this system would reduce how many students leave a class confused which ultimately helps the teachers and students both.\n\nIn conclusion of this I would like to point out something Dr. Huang noted. \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional cummunication, so computers need to understand that, too.\" I believe that this is true, With technology being able to understand us better, that it will benefit us all as a whole more in our teachings. Ultimately a system who understand us better is for the better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus may be easy to spot in the nightsky, being nicknamed the \"evening star,\" but it's not so easy to examine. There have been attempts to land spacecrafts on the planet; however, none have survived more than a couple hours. There are many factors that contribute to the difficulty of exploring Venus, but that won't stop NASA from trying to get as much information that they can get. The author thinks that it would be beneficial to explore Venus, but is it really worth trying to explore the planet despite all of the difficulties?\n\nWhat factors exactly make the exploration of Venus so difficult? Although Venus may once have been \"the most Earth-like planet in our solar system,\" it no longer appears to be that way. According to the article, the atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide, and the clouds contain highly corrosive sulfuric acid. Also, the average temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. These conditions are nothing like ones that are found on Earth. This environment would crush a submarine and would liquify metals, as stated in paragraph 3. Along with the atmospheric difficulites, weather difficulties also present themselves. The article states that volcanoes, earthquakes, and lightning strikes would be a danger to anything looking to land on Venus's surface.\n\nWith all these difficulties, how was NASA planning on examining the planet? NASA wanted to study the planet from above. They want to send a vehicle to hover over Venus in order to avoid the ground conditions, as stated in paragraph 5. However, this would limit the amount of information NASA could collect about the ground conditions of the planet and would restrict them from bringing back any samples.\n\nOverall, I don't think think it is worth trying to explore Venus with all these difficulties, and I don't think the author did a good job supporting the idea that it would be beneficial. If anything, I think the author explained why trying to explore Venus would be nothing but harmful. In the artcle, the author discusses the dangers of trying to explore Venus much more than the benefits we would gain. The author provides no imput as to why we should explore the planet other than the fact that curiosity is what lead people to wanting to explore it in the first place. If people took the time to explore everything they were curious about, nobody would have a life and imaginations would be pointless.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine: it's 2050, and all around are cars buzzing and swishing through the streets, quickly roundng corners with expert presicion. Then, upon closer look, one can see that every single car has come without a steering column; they're self-driving. This idea may seem far-off, even alien now, but could very much be a realty. Companies like Google have had independently drivng cars since 2009. But before we can introduce waves of driverless cars to the road and every day life, the most important aspect has to first be perfected: safety.\n\nA driverless car has the capability to replace a manual vehicle as the safest cars on the road. But to acheive that, manufacturers need to break down laws that have been set since automobiles have set wheel on the roads. Most states it is illegal to operate a driverless vehicle due to the assumption that the only safe type of car is one driven by a human. Only California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Coulumbia allow use of semi-automatic vehicles, and they are high restricitve about it. To address how to deal with possible failure in driverless cars, new laws must be drafted to cover the case of an accident.\n\nHopefully these accidents can be avoided, however. Even though the driver themselves is not operating the vehicle the entire time, all manufaturers are implementing warning signals that will alert the driver in the case of a hazard. In 2013, BMW announced the Traffic Jam Assistant, a feature that can handle speeds up to 25 miles per hour by itself, with special touch sensors that make sure the dirver keeps hold of the wheel. Gm developed vibrating drivers seats that warn the driver when they need to take over. Other variables include are flashing lights in the windshield and in possible heads-up displays.\n\nEven despite legal setbacks, maunfacturers are hopeful in their development of self-driving cars. Some, like Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan hope to have these types of vehicles on the road by 2020. Even sooner, Tesla is predicting a car that can drive autonomously 90 percent of the time by 2016. Hopefully, these vehicles will not just be able to drive themselves, but also us the pedestrians into a safe future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting essay Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit three ways One way baren shade stop sun beating cyclist body adds dehydration lack focus Another way setting affects cyclist terrain rolling hills desert bikes hills make work harder using energy exsusaing ater supply desert also enemies heat make trust thinks mirages sees The last way affects ghost towns sees get hope relief might get water heat passes finds nothing leaves chrested think death", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Challenge of Exploring Venus an article that shows shows imagintion and motivation of Venus. In this article the author did a well job on showing both positives and negatives of this idea. He talks about Venus and the most information about this planet. In his Introduction he has a hooking sentence getting the readers attention by saying the nickname for the planet. He backs up his idea by showing facts and history instead of saying his opinion. It is said by the author that its a good idea on exploring Venus.\n\nThe negatives and positives about this planet are well explained and shown by the author. The author first begins talking about the negatives about the planet to show that it also has negatives and is clear about the information and still supporting his claim. He begins by mentioning the failure of humans sending numerous spacecrafts to land on Venus and only lasting few hours in paragraph 2. The author also talks about its climate and atmosphere in section 3. Which on average overs 800 degrees Fahrenheit and and is 90 times greater in atmospheric pressure. After talking about the negatives and cons about Venus the author then dives into the positives and shows more postives then negatives. He begins by telling the readers in paragraph 2 that Venus is referred to as Earth's \"twin\" showing that Venus is worth exploring if it is compared to Earth and feeling safe about it. In paragraph 4 the author talks about Venus possibly having life when he tells the reader that long time ago Venus was covered in oceans and could have supported life.\n\nThe author backs up his idea by showing facts on the possibilities of sending humans to explore the planet. He gives informations and in paragraph 5 talking about NASA's idea of sending humans to study Venus and developing solutions to the hostile conditions. In section 7 the author brings more research from NASA that is testing simplified electronics and lasting 3 weeks in such conditons. To reinforce his idea he talks in paragraph 6 of scientist going to to Venus to conduct important research such as samples from rock and gas.\n\nThe author madehis idea clear and showed it with good information. He showed the cons about his idea and then the positves. He gave the readers basic information in his introduction. He tehn dived into his idea and backed it with many important research information. The author showed his idea with him never saying his opinion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article that I am writting I am against driverless cars. There no way the car would be able to deal with recks like humans are taught too. If the car was driverless im assuming its electrial so what if it rains and the water messes up the car while its driving? the car would malfunction and put the life of the people in the car in danger. The cars may not be able to be trust worthy on the streets either. What if the traffic light changes in the middle of the road and the car is programed to stop, while the other cars go. These are just some sutiations indicating that driverless cars are not safe and shouldn't be used.\n\nIn the passage it staes that the car is required to alert the human when its skills are needed to work around construction and accidents. Therefore the driver must be alert at all times and if thats the case they might as well and put it on cruse and forgot about the \" driverless cars \". It also states in the passage that the necessitates the car being quickly get the drverd atten whenever a promblem occurs. This could be a huge promblem because on the tv we have in cars now a days. Plus texting and driving is a huge issue. They migth be in the middle of a text and the car just stops waiting fro the driver to figure out whats happening.\n\nThe passage also states that Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result in most states it is illegal even to test computer driven cars. The most important question is what if there is an accident. Whose fault would it be? So in coulsion i feel the driverless cars are not safe and should not be use.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author showing mood happiness The mood happiness author talking Narciso childhood use little The enviroment home cuban culture He mentions family came dinner sometimes cuban heritage filled air Also cuban music brought enjoyment And brought happiness", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Helpful But Not Needed\n\nHow far is too far? Sometime we as a human try to improve our ways of living for society, while some are good there are also some that go too far. Like the one Prof. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe try to create, they are making this a new software that they think will be an step toward the future. What they don't know is that they are also giving away some of our rights. We will be giving up some things Facial Action Coding System into the school system.\n\nThere are some unintentional consequences that will be caused by the the new software. The Facial Action Coding System will be ignoring our privacy as stated in the 1st paragraph. The machine knew exactly what the painting was feeling, it even know what percent of that feeling she was feeling. There are somethings that we want to keep for ourself, but how do we do that when a machine scans us and know exactly how and what we are feeling. There are things that some of us want to be kept hidden. You can't just change someone's emotion that easy, there are also somethings that you let a person go through on their own. We feel this way because we want to. When someone tells a bad joke, people might still laugh at it. If the software were expose us, the person who told the joke would lose confience and could be hurt. Lets say that someone was feeling disgusted but not because of something but because of someone, he/she(the person who is not feeling disgusted) will feel really sad and hurt. This software might have some bad to it but there are also some good side to it.\n\nSome of the good things this software would be good for was stated in paragraph 6. This software could help shopers and companies to sell their products. A good example would be for small companies that are not that popular or known, this new software would help them out a lot. This is all sunshine and rainbows but what about our privacy? This would mean that the software would constanly be scanning us for our emotions every single second we are on a device. It is stated that our PC can't handle this comples algorithms in paragraph 7, but that they would stil have simple instructions. This is even worse as it might only be able to tell one emtions unlike the Facial Action Coding System, and we would still be risking our privacy.\n\nIf the Facial Action Coding System was acepted into the school system this could be bad news. Imagine a classroom with this software in it, it could show if the students are bored or confused like what this article said in paragraph 6. Lets say the students were bored. What if the teacher is trying his best to make it intresting but also make the students learn at the same time, or what if this was how the teacher was taught to teach and was teaching like this for as long as he was teaching? What now? Won't this crush the teacher? The teacher tried his best, but the students are still bored, this will also make him want to try his best less and less. So what if the software can shows emotions? The Facial Action Coding System can be put in school, but it will just be a waste of money and it also have the potention of hurting more that it does of being benefitial.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a software that makes humanity closer to the future but at a price. It seem like a great idea but it bring unintentional consequences. This can hurt our peers feelings, and will cause the people around us and even us to have lower self esteem. It is invasive to our privacy and it might not as effective when it is used in PC, which is where it would be most effective. If it was put in the schools it won't be benefitial to the student or the teachers as it will just have negative impact on the classroom. The Facial Action Coding System might sound like a new amazing invention that is out of this world, but the impact it have will not be good.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear editor Have ever would know something badly ca nt focus anything else Have ever tried find information ahhah moment What use search knowledge You probably used computer All need type request hit enter viola Your screen fills choices information sites Computers help many people everyday questions Our country gotten smarter computers You converse friends moved across state country even world At every click mouse new things learn You even use computer personal enjoyment Computers opened many opportunities world needs lake When I four years old best friends time moved florida I devastaded At first tried writing letters ohter Then grew older became busier busier connection halted As technology computers advanced friend I text email instant message time It made long distance friendship easier closer Because computers communicate friends thought longlost You also meet new people one many sites available How would like talk someone way World communication also opened many business opportunities Since economy failing computers open job spaces help college students study futur career hopefully help improve lives many people Communication needed many things make world better generations came Instead going noisy arcade play exciting games right privacy Any game think probably found From simple game solitare advanced level shift games age difficulty level found New people think kids going sit front computer play games There going peole refuse go outside spend time friends read outside There definitely people like I ca nt help What refuse go outside I know many people spend budget time wisely still great time We also encourage kids use exercise programs computers video games improve health There many fun games help better healthier person still fun The computers homes right equipped much information tried take would overwhelmed popular search engine gives power look anything could ever wait know vice president s birthday price eggs wide found click button knowledge helps homework assignments incredibly Most reference books date information inaccurate computers updated frequently facts time I think country gotten much smarter computers So whether want talk longlost friend talk expert osprey find answer computer While re play couple exciting games learn best movies ever released Have fun learn lots", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is an irritable fact that newspaper has a phenomenal impact on building and moulding the outlooks of the readers. I believe that it is overall a healthy stich. Hereby, I will discuss my opinion in details along with relevant examples.\r\n\r\nBeyond doubt, newspaper is the commonest means of mass communication throughout the world. This is because, it is not only affordable but also available in the areas where full-fledged technology is absent. For example, in countries of South Africa there are frequent power cuts which leads to disruption of Wi-Fi connection every now and then. Thus making it quite unreliable. Besides this, newspaper fetches news from all over the globe which is also arranged under appropriate headings such as sports section, cooking section, celebrity section and many more. Hence, keeping the public even more engaged in it. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, printing press provides information regarding various available jobs along with the requirement criteria. This helps the people especially from the lower socio-economic class to enroll. Apart from this, business tycoons use newspaper to advertise their products. Since it is the most effective way to convince people about the necessity of that item in their lives. Finally, it is also used by the government departments like police either to spread the word regarding a missing person or to warn the laymen about various frauds and fraudsters around them. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, newspaper have enormous benefits to offer starting from bringing news from around the world to highlighting job opportunities as well as different new commodities. Therefore, considering all these factors I totally emphasise newspaper as a positive influence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, more teenagers like to find a job. In certain countries, the populace persuades adolescents to look for a temporary career. However, some adults support it, whereas some do not support it. This essay agrees with the young people to have a few hours job and will depict that it is a good opportunity to understand a social experience and hardworking experience.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the juvenile can assimilate several positive effects of a part-time job to experience the reality of society. In other words, the studying students sometimes are difficult to understand how teamwork is an essential skill to support a company. Hence, they can learn how to cooperate with their co-workers so as to achieve the firm's goal. To cite an example, in rush hour, each employee in a restaurant plays an important role to distribute their duties in terms of sending a bento box to a customer in a short time with maximum profits. Hence, the teenager can learn about efficient group work which is a fundamental task that a corporate requires.\r\n\r\nTo make money is a way that the young pupils know how their parent's diligent work is. That is to say; this is an excellent method for the children to appreciate their parents and cherish each penny in order to avoid unnecessary expenditures. To exemplify, my brother perpetually prefers to require my mother to purchase several toys; however, he stops spending money on toys after he has a job. Because now he comprehends how difficult to earn each coin. As a result, young teenagers enable to acknowledge the contribution regarding great efforts to work. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, spending a few hours to proceed with a career is a viable way for the young generation to have a practical experience in efficient teamwork of a company, and also have gratitude for their parent's industrious work. Hence, the aforementioned reasons are excellent points to have a temporary job for the children. I suggest that most parents are willing to have their young teenagers seek a part-time job.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The way live today is different from how our ancestors have lived fifty or sixty years ago. Thanks to modern technologies it provides a comfortable life. A fair amount of people believe that automation has made our activity too complex. They feel that must be the end. Is it possible? Let's figure it out.\r\n\r\nModern machinery may have made our activity difficult. But it must be admitted that it improved our growth in several other ways. For example, cars and buses made it easy for transportation. House utilities are a boon for housewives. Electricity literally brightened our soul. The air conditioner made summer months breathable. Cell phone and internet allows us to stay connected whenever we are. Innovation also dramatically improved our productivity.\r\n\r\nOn the other hands, industrial sciences made our activity difficult. Since there is no escape from a permanent connection. Before the advent of mobile phones and the Internet, taking break much easier. However, people just pack the bags and go to the place where they like. But in current society, mobiles become a priority in folk's living. Modern innovation has made us physically inactive and prone to developed health problems. Does this mean that we must do without modern machinery? By the way, it is not as easy as it sounds. automation is addictive. It is not easy to live without the technological innovation that we are used to enjoying. Can anyone now imagine a world where we don't have access to electricity or telephone? The truth is we can't.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, After analysing the situation, it seems that although modern machinery is made complicated in our existence, we cannot do without it", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the last two or three decades, the way people live and work has changed dramatically due to major advances in technology. As a result, it is believed by many that robots play a significant role in the development of the nation whereas others think that it is a negative advancement and has adverse impacts on humanity. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion.\r\n\r\nTo start with, why do individuals consider the development of machines beneficial for society is the advancement of lifestyle because they have made life easy and time-saving. In addition, robots have the ability to do error-free tasks which results in the productivity and efficiency of the task. For example, automatic machines are used in all industries to fasten the work and reduce the labour force. As a result, companies can increase their productivity and growth. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, using robots in every field can have detrimental effects on people's lives because they do not have the ability to distinguish between right and wrong and work on emotional intelligence only which can result in the loss of lives. Moreover, the unemployment rate will increase with the growth of robots in every field which is harmful to the public because they will take the place of human forces and people will no longer be required in industries to perform various tasks. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I consider the evolution of robotics as a well-needed development as it has increased productivity and adaptability but it has affected society negatively as they are not reliable and people will become unemployed with the use of automatic machines in every field.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days Internet plays a vital role as a means of keeping and delivering the knowledge while books did in the past. Although storing information in books is preferred by some people, I strongly believe that storing knowledge online will be more beneficial. This essay will highlight those views and reasons behind my thoughts.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, some people argue that storing information or knowledge on paper has its own merits. They are likely to love the smell of paper and the texture when they read. Those who prefer carrying books to searching online tend to think it has the value of owning a book. Also, those who love books love to collet them as a hobby. It reflects personal tastes and choice.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, storing knowledge on in the Internet has plenty of positives which allow people to store information permanently.\r\n\r\nUnlike paper, online information does not require any physical or chemical maintenance work to preserve it for a long time. It even does not disappear for good. For example, back in the past, we have been through a tremendous loss of valuable and historical books due to the terrible accidents such as war, fire, or natural disaster. In this regard, people are aware of the significance of storing information safely and permanently. \r\n\r\nMoreover, online information or knowledge is accessible by everyone and everywhere. All we need to do is just searching the Internet to look for the information that we want rather than going to book shop or libraries. It allows us to save physical time and effort to travel and get it. Even though I need a particular knowledge, it is available anytime and anywhere if there is connection with Internet. This easy accessibility to knowledge can enable us to improve the quality of life.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, those beauties of storing knowledge or information on the Internet makes it possible to live more convenient and effective world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The auther concluded story paragraph shows Saeng willing change wants time spring comes By change Saeng wants feel comfertable able remember things used live break cry Also author use geese need leave home earely year deal Saeng deal well", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear editor In opinion I think people spending much time technology many people I know stay technology nt even work Also spending much time computers others things taking time exercising enjoying nature interacting family friends People stay close technology addicted start kill brain cells Some times people get locked much information given somthing werent suppose Downloading certain things also bring harm computer like viruses crash downthe computer hard drive system There many good bad thing computer like bad things stalkers hackers seizers blindness Then good thing computer teaches handeye coordination give people ability learn faraway places people even allow people talk online like friends family In life helps little I play lots army games I go cousins friends go label tagging sports complex I use tactics learn beat teams It hurts people eye site stairring durectly eh screen one experience like months ago last time I stayed aunts house cousins stay th ga till take bath clean eat They nt even go sleep till eight Some parents least give hour day say game For I go computer like twenty minutes log go back online later day", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think driverless cars should be allowed on the streets. I believe that driveless cars will only cripple drivers, and make future drivers have less experience on the roads.\n\nDriving takes experience and years of practice before mastering the ability to navigate in different weather conditions. If we have driverless cars, it might be come more harzardous in the winter to be on the roads. For example, in the article it states that navigating through work zones and road accidents require human skills. In the winter, when there are accidents on the roads from spin-offs or sliding, it would require humans to take hold of the wheel. If a new driver has driven only a few times on good road conditions, and now has to take the wheel on an icy road, it may have a bad consequence.\n\nAlthough, it would be nice to have driverless cars, and would make it easier for the elderly to continue to drive and get around. Also like the article said, it would help the environment by reducing the use of gasoline burned every day.\n\nIn conclusion, people should continue to drive themselves, because practice makes perfect and driving is a part of life. People should never choose to make themselves ignorant to any knowledge and skill they can aquire.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A furture with driverless cars is certainly possible and also very near to us.It would be a great advancement to our society, increase the saftey and effiencey of transportaion in our world; also, it would save gas and move our world forward as a whole. I support the inquasition of the addition and creation of these driverless cars into and onto our streets and lives.\n\nOne good aspect about these driverless cars, is the ablitly to increase the saftey of the drivers and the passengers in the cars. These autonomous cars bring with them many sensors that would held keep us safe from the dangers of the roads and other cars around us. Their are antilock brakes, rotating sensors, radar sensors, and also the LIDAR, and all these high technology systems are all used to keep us safe. They are made to keep total aware of the cars surroundings, which most human drivers cannot do. It eleminates the human error from our rodes and keeps us all alittle more safer.\n\nThe addition of these new cars would allow people to use their time more effivently. With the driverless cars, the people inside would be able to focus on other activities instead. Also people in the taxi business would be able to go out and find other jobs, hopefully better ones. They would be far more flexible according to time than a bus or other forms of transportation. These cars could and would majorly create a more efficient life style for us as people.\n\nAnother good and actually important detail about these cars, is that they would actually help save gas as well. Gas has become an increasingly talked about and discused topic in today's society. The cons of using so much as we do now a days, is a mojor topic. But the idea of the driverless cars would actually save help us us less gas. They would use half of the gas of today's taxi, and imagine the savings we could have in our cars themsleves if they were driverless. Those times when we took the wrong turn or missed our exit would no longer happen. The cars and their gps and numorous sensors would be able to make the fastest and most direct trips toward our destination. The ablilty to save gas is one of many bounuses of these high tech cars.\n\nThe advances we make toward the construction and usage of these driverless cars, truly are the future of our world today. They would drastically and fundamentally change the would as we know it. We as a civilazation would become much more safe and effecient, also save much of the gas we use today. All these factors would make the world a better place, allowing us to move forward and achieve many more world changing advancements.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article\n\n\"The Challenge of exploring venus\", venus is sometime called the evening star beause it is closer to the earth and also he brighet points of the light in the night sky. Venus is the second planet from our sun and also humans are curious about studing venus because venus still has some features that analogous to those on earth, also venus won't be more of a risk instead the challenge of going there to see. The author support is idea of studying venus by explaning that venus still has some feature that are anlaogus to those on earth and it allows scientists to float above the fray.\n\nThe author supports is idea of studying venus by explaning that venus still has some features that are anlataogus to those\n\non earth. in the article it shows that the venus is the same thing as the earth surface, venus was coverd largely with oceans and it could have supported varrious forms of life, just like earth. In the article is stated that venus has the hottost surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even through mercury is closer to our sun. Studying venus is a good idea because it make them look for futher history or information about it. in the article, in paragapnh 4 it says that \" the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and inclides familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters\". This explains that venus can be consudered by studing it because of all this featureand how safety they as the earth it self.\n\nThe author also supports is idea of studying venus by explaning that it allows the scientists to float above the fray despite the dangers. In the article it shows that the NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow the scientists to float as they want to, for example a vehicle hovering over venus would aviod the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and going out of their way and they will all be safe without any danger or any conditions on their way. Furthermore, the researcher can't take samples rock, gas, or anything else, from the distance so they are seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand that \"venus would need to get up close and despite the risks or maybe we should think of them as challenges\". mordern computers are enornously powerful, flexible and quick but tend to be more delicate when the physical conditions comes. This explains that\n\nwith all this equpiment listed here it can be made useful for any conditions on there way and have their own safety.\n\nThe author supports this idea of studying venus by explaining that venus still has some features that are analogus to those on earth and it allowas the scientists to float above the fray. Striving to catch up with the challenge of venus has values not only that of more opporunity of seeing or curious about the earth and not to be afriad of the risk but instead let make explorates by our ideas and imaginations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As we are growing up riding in the front seat of our parent's, friend's, brother or sister's car we desperately can't wait until it is our time to achieve our license and follow their footsteps. The thought of having the responsiblity of someone else's life while driving can scare some people, but not me. Even though there are many different types of laws enplaced in each state following driving, it is a priveldge to be able to drive, not a right. Some people are able to drive, some are not. My parents often say don't rush to get your license because driving isn't all it seems to be but I don't care to listen, I will see for myself.\n\nThere are many different occassions in movies that take place in the future that include floating cars, driverless cars, all types of advancements in technology. We all have imagined that in the future that this would be an amazing invention that everyone would love but actually in reality, not everyone favors this. People speculate the consistency and safety that comes from techonology almost everyday, through their phones, laptops, and even their very own car. But me, I'm all in for trusting driverless cars and depending on technology to ensure the safety of my life. I feel that if these automakers can put together a car that can steer, accelerate, and even brake all on themselves, I'm sure going to try it because it would just make driving all less stressful. Even though I don't even have my license yet, I am surely optimistic in the success and excitement that these driverless cars are to become in the near future.\n\nTechonolgy advancements that have occured just in the past decade have already impacted the quality of life for the normal human being. Inventions such as the iPhone, have made billions upon billions of dollars to Apple because people love the advantages that come with them. This is just one of the many successful technological advancements that have taken place in the past 10 years. A phone really isn't a neccesity to some people but a car on the other hand is, depending on where you live and the status of your life is a need to the average person. So if a new inventions in a phone has affected billions of lives of people around the world, then why can't a advancement in a car making the lives of people less of a hassle succeed? We can only wait and see what type of new improvement in the quality of life is soon to come any day now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In beginning cyclist ready go happy By time got half way losing hope It hot simple alone By end relieved find water found easier way get Yosemite The first old group men didnt help second man", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reasons why I joined the seagoing cowboys is because it gives you so many experenices in the world.\n\nOnce I had been given\n\nmy seaman papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster and headed for Greece.\n\nOnce I got to Greece\n\nI was 18 and could enter the military service .\n\nWhen my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip\n\nthey told me to keep doing that for my service. The cattle boat trip is an unbeliveable opportunity for me\n\nand you if of cource you want to join you can help people, you can go places like greece\n\nand see the Acropolis and take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy. LUke also found some time to have fun on board expecialy on trips were the animals weren't on board.\n\nThe cowboys played baseball and volley ball games in the empty holds were the animals were held.\n\nThey did table tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing,\n\nreading ,and whittling games to help pass the time .\n\nYou can experience that all if you would join.\n\nI'm not forcing you but you can join if you\n\nwant to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is widely believed that public venues are beneficial for the residents of any town or country. Personally, I completely agree with this view for a variety of reasons. \r\n\r\nFirstly, having public spaces located in cities or towns can build a sense of community. An illustration of this is the bonding activities that residents can enjoy together. This can be beneficial as it develops social skills and also allows individuals to have space and create beautiful memories with their preferred members. For example, the United States has shown better mental health rates of residents after placing several parks in their living areas. Furthermore, this is also an opportunity for residents to relax and enjoy nature. \r\n\r\nSecondly, public areas can improve the overall convenience for local residents. Public spaces can reduce the need to travel far to reach a hanging-out destination as the space is free and is located in the centre of the city for everyone. Research in 2019 showed that 30% more individuals come outside to enjoy the local venues instead of staying inside their houses. As a result of this, the overall mental state improved and local economies also developed rapidly as well. Besides, this potentially can improve the environmental state of the city as well due to the decreasing use of transportation and greenhouse gas emissions. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is relevant to have public locations for residents to enjoy because of the convenience and pleasure it brings. In my opinion, having at least one local place in a city such as a park can significantly improve the quality of life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "' The Challenge of Exloring Venuse'\n\nVenus something called the Evenig Star'' it one of the is brightest star. its secon planed in our from our sun. Actually Venuse is palned.\n\nFirstly Vanues closes plnet in the Earth's its also second planet after son this make dengers its present.\n\nour planetary neighbor, arbit sun make different spead this means hat some thing closer to Mars and other time Venus. its make more chalenging planet to our stading.\n\nSecondly A thick atnosphere of talmost 97 percent carbon dioxide blenkets Venus thins make more dangerous such an crash event\n\nVanuse geologly abd warther present additional impedimts The Nationanl Aeronautc Spaace Admistretion has idea sending human to Venus to explore\n\nhower, peering at Venus ftom a ship orbiting safely only limited insight on group conditons because most can provide only limited\n\nFinaly The national Aeronautics and sppace Administration has complelling idea that sending human to the Venus however sending expedition is not safty for humans. Striving to thhbe meet the challenging Our travel on Earth and beyoun shoul not be limited by dengers and doubts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When it comes down too \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\"people think of aliens.That is not true and here are reasons why.The article says things like its a natural landform and if it was aliens or Egyptian-style things you could see it threw the digital image.\n\nAccording to the article it says,\"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site,revealing . . . a natural landform.\"This shows that there was no alien monument after all.Another example is,\"As a rule of thumb,you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\"he added.\"So,if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks,you could see what they were!\"This means that there wasnt no alien or eygtians it was a natural landform.\n\nAn oppser would say it was an alien.Nasa is just trying to hide it and keep it an theory.Thats not true because it has no evidence.\n\nTo conclusion the article says its a landform not an alien or Eygiptian-style anything.There are a couple reasons why its a landform like the research.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today technology has become a major part of our life without it there is not a minute of the day which can be spent other than the time you are sleeping, although, the over usage of technology is making people's life very complex and hard to go around. Each of these has its own advantages and their disadvantages which I will illustrate separately and then give my point of view\r\n\r\nFirstly, without ,technology nothing goes around in the world today.Each and everything today is wrapped around technology such as, from starting of our day when we wake up we check our mobile phones about the weather whether if it is going to pour cats and dogs or else if it going to be very sunny, then we use GPS to travel from one location to another known or unknown places without it we all will be lost. The internet helps us out in every way from suggesting to us the best movies and restaurants around us to giving us up to date information on any topic which we are interested in any other topics. It even helps us to translate manuscripts and languages from native sources to the ones which we can understand.\r\n\r\nSecondly, the over usage of technology has made people forget to have a human bond and connection with others, folk are more interested in watching videos of places than going out and check out the places. For instance, even kids these days have their own personal mobile phones, mac books. Children are not getting enough physical exercise and are sticking their faces inside the gadgets and are becoming couch potatoes. People can't even find the location of nearby stores without the help of GPS.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion , I reiterate, that without the use of technology we all will be lost nevertheless, we will also be lost without human connection and bonding directly rather than through social media. Everyone should have their own limits and their own rules about how long should they allocate the time for usage of gadgets and have a real bond and to go out play, take a hike, trek.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, with the growth of the economy, a large number of buildings are built not only in developed countries, but also in developing countries. Therefore, some historic buildings had to be torn down. It is a pity that our next generation may not have the opportunity to visit some of the places of interest.\r\n\r\nIn order to learn more about the history, many people would like to get to know the history of the house or building that they live in. There are many reasons for this. First of all, many people are interested in the history. They are eager to figure out what had happened in the past, so that they could benefit form it. History is considered as a mirror for them and they could learn a lot from it. The history of the house they live in is the most familiar thing for them. It is a good opportunity to understand what was happening in the neighborhood of their houses. Furthermore, the history of the houses is also important to the future of the houses. When developers want to accomplish urban redevelopment, it will be great to respect the history of the houses on the site and surrounding environment. \r\n\r\nFor the sake of understanding the history of the houses. many ways can be used for people to make some research on it. Most importantly, people can get various information in the Internet. Nearly everything can be founded though the Internet. Moreover, library is also a good choice to search the literature. Some old books may be founded in library but cannot be found in the Internet.\r\n\r\nI believe that it is important to know more about the history of the houses we live in, because sometimes the houses can shape who we are and who we want to be in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The education system is improving digitally nowadays across the world. Some people think that the traditional teaching methods in the classrooms between a teacher and students would disappear by the year 2050. This essay will discuss why the typical teaching demonstration will disappear eventually.\r\n\r\nThe typical form of teaching system has been quite popular in many countries since historic times.This will assist students in learning discipline and respecting others besides education. For example, kids going to educational institutions will wear uniform dresses and reach school on time daily, though there are certain obstructions. Pupils will be demonstrated not only discipline but also how to respect fellow students. For instance, sessions are conducted related to team building activities where students will be taught on how to work in a team and help their members when needed.\r\n\r\nHowever, online teaching platforms are replacing the traditional form in the recent times because they are cost effective and also Eco friendly. Parents will not spend so much of money for school fees since e-learning is cost effective. To illustrate, there are many leading online platforms which offer classes for affordable packages. Moreover, this method also improves the quality of air since the school buses and other vehicles transporting students will not run. To give a clear example, the pollution caused by those vehicles carrying students will be declined significantly which therefore, improves the air quality.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the typical teaching situation of a student and teacher in the class will not exist in the future. I completely agree with this statement since online learning is gradually replacing the current teaching system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do i believe use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuble?\n\nno because a friend can tell when your sad,sometimes the computer can be wrong,and some people look like they are angry but are actually happy.\n\nTechnology is not valuabe for studnets expressions in classroms because a friend would know if you are down or happy or depressed the computer can't see tears on the inside they also don't know your life. An example is\"a kid who is bi-polar they could be happy the one second,then boom anry the next second\". You mean to tell me a computer can't tell if your'e angry one second then happy another second? Another example could be sometimes you just don't know if that person is sad,happy,angry and sometimes the kid doesn't wangt to talk about his or her emotions\". i believe this can prove that the computer doesn't know if the kid is happy or sad,but the friend will!\n\nThe use of technology can't read the emotional expressions of a student in a classroom becaue the computer is not always correct about everything. An example is \"a game like NBA 2k18 they can scan your face,but it doesn't look just like you\". Another big example is \"the computer isn't always the right answer just like the internet the answer doesn't always come out right so the computer won't get your emotional feelings right.\"\n\nAnother reason the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of the students in a classroom isn't valuable because a lid could look angry but is actually happy. an example is \"sometimes i look angry but tkats just my normal face,so the computer would say i'm angry when i'm really happy\". Another examle is \"a kid could have a dissorder on his or her expression so once again the internet is wrong\". this proves that the computer cannot read the emotional expressions of students in class.\n\nAs i stated in the text all those examples prove that my eviedence prves that using computers to express whether the use of technology reads the students emotional expressions. they can't because the computer doesn't know if the kid is happy or, mad, a friend can tell when they are mad,and sometimes the internet is wrong.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, the increasing robots with advanced technologies are invented. Meanwhile, different opinions about them are pointed out that they are considered to be advantageous,the other side being dangerous, to human being. Considering they can increase the length of human life .I think robots are very important for humans' future development and will benefit to human.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, some people think that the sheer use of robots will lead to a lack of electricity. Nevertheless,the robots will be more and more power-efficient as the accumulation of technology,which has been confirmed by a great number of scientists researching robots constantly and proved by them in many science magazines. In addition, they also explained another profound idea that robots would completely control human is extremely impossible,for the simple reason that robots could do nothing without electricity controlled by human thoroughly even though they would be staggering powerful and intelligent.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nRobots can be used in sorts of fields,some of them being dangerous. We can imagine that If fire broke out at a dilapidated chemical factory with a great deal explosive inside, not only would it be inaccessible, but it would be extraordinarily precarious for firemen to put the fire out. However, extinguishing it with robots would be fairly safe for human,which contribute to the increase of human lives to some extent. In addition, robots can be used in some precise operations that patients with severe diseases need. An experienced surgeon, is also human, can make a big mistake leading to the death of the patient,nevertheless,a robot set exactly by program will not. This is another example that illustrate the idea. \r\n\r\nI consider that the use of robots will be inevitable and effective for human development. I have even foreseen a era when the robots do every dangerous work belonging to human originally.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you ever think about what it would be like to live on Mars, well would about Venus? I think that exploring Venus is a good idea and should be done. One of my reason for wanting to study Venus is that Venus has some simullar traits to Earth. Another reason that we should explore Venus is to learn about are surrounding planets and expaned on are space tecknology to explore furher into space.\n\nI think that we should explore Venus is that it is the most like Earth than any other planet in are solar system. In the text it states that Venus is the closest to Earth in terms of density and size and occasionaly the closest in distance too. The text also states that the panet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nI think that we should explore Venus to learn about are surrunding planets and expaned on are space tecknology to explore furher into space.. In the text it talks about how Venus is the closest and would help with space travel times. The text also talks about how Venus's atmosphere is almost 97 perecnt CO2 blankets. The text also talks about how they are looking into makeing a thing like a air blimp to float over the land about 30 miles high. The text also talks about them making a vehicle that can with stand the surface of Venus (which is around 800 degrees fahrenheit and enough air pressure to crush a submarine) for three weeks.\n\nIn conclusion I think that we should explore Venus more. For these reason of exploreing Venus for both its simuliays to Earth and for scientific space tecknology advances; I believe sending missions to Venus is important.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Seagoing Cowboys program is a once in a life time oppertunity. You get to be with animals, get to ride in a boat, and also get to see many archetectial designs, such as the Great Wall of China or the Eiffel Tower. If you ever get the chance to participate in the Seagoing Cowboy program, I suggest that you do.\n\nSeagoing Cowboys lets you stay with animals when you ride in the boat. When I was working, I got to work with animals such as horses and cattle. There are many animals to work with. There are also many things that you must do for the animals. You must feed them, water them, and clean out their stalls. The animals usually eat oats or wheat. Animals can be hard work, but they can also give you something fun to do.\n\nSeagoing Cowboys program is all by sea. You pick up the animals on land and then, you set sail and hit the water. If you have never ridden in a boat, then I suggest that you take this oppertunity in life. Boats can be very fun. They rock back and forth like a rocking chair and float on water. Boats are proably the most important thing that we need for the journey. If we did not have the boats, then we are out of luck.\n\nIf you have never seen any national landmark, the Seagoing Cowboys program is a great way to try to see a landmark. On the trips I have taken, I have gotten to see the Acropolis, parts of China, and have done and seen many other things. One of my favorites was riding in a gondola, in the city of water, Venice. The landmarks are important because they remind us of friendship. For example, France gave us the Effiel Tower to us as a peace treaty? Well, now you know.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboy program lets you be with animals, get to ride on a boat, and gives you the oppertunity to see national landmarks like the Great Wall of China. So know that you know more about the Seagoing Cowboy program and what you do, think about signing up at the age of 18 to participate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people have stated that we should search for strategies to live with climate change without fixing it. I fully disagree with this idea and for this essay will examine the reasons that can prove this statement is not right.\n\nFirst of all, Climate change can cause the huge damage on animals such as extinction and lack of places to live because due to climate change the world is getting hotter and most water bodies are drying so there are not many places for water animals to live. Even, for animals which live on tree because of burning forest it does not have many places for them to live and it can lead to extinction. For instance, For polar bears, they live only in cold place such as pole but most of the coldest places are melting and it can create a huge impact of losing polar bears in the future. Climate change is the biggest reason of why many animals have extincted.\n\nSecondly, There are many problems for the Earth in the future if we do not fix it now because climate change can cause many serious problem only if we keep on trying to living through it without finding a way to help the Earth. Nowadays, there are many serious problems that have damaged the world already if more problems to come, it can affect humans and animals even more. For example, Climate change changes the weather to hotter. In addition, In 2019, there was a burning fire in Australia and it killed a lot of trees, plants and many living animals that can lead to many more problems such as extinction of koalas and the increasing of toxic smoke. Another way to say that many problems are ready to arrive and damage us all if we do not find a way.\n\nIn conclusion, Climate change is much serious than we can think of. Therefore, The statement is totally wrong because it can make animals extinct and cause serious prolems if people keep on ignoring this problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different views as to whether the environment or the world’s economy and businesses benefit most from global cooperation. Personally, I contend that the latter is more likely to enjoy fruitful results from this trend.\r\n\r\nOne the one hand, when the world becomes a global village, environmental protection turns out to be a common concern and is addressed on a global scale. Kyoto Protocol, which is an international treaty that imposes limitations on CO2 emissions on member nations, helps to reduce a significant amount of the gas into the atmosphere. Were this treaty not brought to life by concerted efforts of many nations, our carbon footprint would be much greater and the damage we did to our planet would be more severe. Moreover, given countries are inexorably linked to each other economically and politically, the wealthier ones could introduce environmentally linked aid to poorer countries with a view to curb their uncontrolled paces of industrialization. Whatever the results of these practices, at least collective attempts made worldwide brings a great impact on individual consciousness, which prompts individuals to act environmentally responsibly.\r\n\r\nHowever, I believe that economic prosperity is the main by-product of global integration. Thanks to an increasingly free global market, a number of undeveloped nations are being lifted out of poverty through either exporting their strengths or foreign investments. This is not likely to happen in times of political isolation had been the norm since the flows of goods, money, and humans were limited within national boundaries or regional borders. Furthermore, global cooperation enables transnational or international corporations to locate their manufacturing facilities on the other side of the world where cheap and abundant labours could make a huge difference in price production, leaving them an edge over their rivals.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I think, even though international cooperation could bring about some initiatives regarding environmental preservation it is the world of business that benefits most from the development.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having this complex system know your emotions could be estatic. It could change the way we feel about technology. Modifying animations, making us happier, and surfing the web are all results to the new update. Way more people would enjoy interacting with the media. It could change the way we live our day to day life using technology.\n\nWhen video games just came out, you could barely see the facial expressions of any of the charcters. As time evoled, we started to update how 3D features were in the game. With this technology, they could make computer- animated faces even more expressive. This involves updating video games or video surgery. When we can see more of the features, it starts to feel more like real life.\n\nOur facial expressions speak louder then our words. Using muscles like orbicularis oculi, zygomatic major, and risorius we can create a smiling face. In fact if you see yourself smile or someone makes you smile, it can make you happy. While seeing someone else's facial expressions can make us imitate that person and have empathy for them. Facial expressions can change a lot for humans.\n\nJust while you are on facebook or any social media, the coding system is watching you. If you smile at an ad that appears on your screen, the next ad you see may also catch your eye. This technology is making sure we do not get bored while surfing the web. If you frown or look confused, the system will recognize it and change the next topic to something that interest you. We all know we use some type of social media and find something we do not like.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is an amazing update. Seeing someone's facial expressions making me happier, modifying animations, and changing unwanted ads are all great factors of the new technology. As most of the world uses technology, this is what we need to keep it going. Everyone likes an evolving world and likes a new change. It is amazing how the 44 major muscles in our faces can run how our technology is.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever seen the face on Mars? Do you think its real. Is it really a landform or is it form by aliens. Well im here to tell you about the face on Mars.\n\nThis person thinks that the face on Mars was made by aliens. He said that other scientist belive that the face on Mars was made by aliens. And he said that people started to put the image on \"books, magazines, radio talk shows and etc.\" Another thing that happend was that people thought the \"gorcery store checkouts were haunted but some people thought it was just a bona fide that they think it was evidence that there was life on Mars.\"\n\nI have evidence that the face is not real. One of the evidence was that on \"April 5,1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time and took a picture that was ten times more sharper\". Then another evidence was that on \"April 8, 2001 Mars Global Surveyor went closer enough for the second time the took a picture that was expan to 1.56 meters compared to the 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. So the picture of the face was actualy a butte or mesa that was a landform\".\n\nWell I told you the evidence about the face on Mars. So do you think it was form by aliens or it is just a landform? Also do you think its real or fake. If you haven't seen the photo of face on Mars then go check it out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this world many people or students were being suicide and some people they just don't have hope. Many people are facing many different kind of difficulties and sadness. For instance some people might be upset because they don't have families and can be because they are not as smart as other people in school. Some people are facing difficulties while other are living happily. But we people don't know how other people feel and we don't understand each other how we feel inside of our heart.\n\nFirst,using this technology to read students' emotional expressions is valuable. The reason why i think it is good is because sometimes some students are not as smart as other students and some students are afraid to ask question that they don't understand and afraid to discuss with their teacher. But if we use this technology to read students' emotional expression in class, it would be really useful thing and meaningful for students. it would make students even better and smarter. As we can see in the articles it says\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" If all teachers use the computer that knows students' feelings that would also help/make student to improve and develope their knowledge. Second,some students keep skipping class it can be because since they don't understand the lessons that they learn, they feel bored and stress and they behave bad in class so it makes them want to skip class so that they can stay away from stressness. But if teachers use technology that can read studens' emotional expression so that teacher would know which student doesn't understand and confused the lessons and teacher can explain those who didn't understand after school or during their lessons. Finally if they keep using this technology,one teacher can change a thousand studens' bad behavor and mind.\n\nIn conclusion,making useful things for those who feel hopeless and helpless are one of precious thing in our lives. Even though we all are came from different countries we have similarities things in some ways like how we face difficulties and that thing makes us one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is America's current method of election. A process created by our founding fathers that consists of the selection of electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. Many Americans believe that this method is crucial because it's certainty of outcomes and the way it avoids run-off elections. However many people believe it creates more of a problem than a solution. Problems created under the electoral college system include, big states recieving more attention than small states, the disaster factor, and the winner-take-all method which causes unfairness among voters.\n\nEach state has a different number of electors based on the number of members in it's congressional delegation. A lot of the time bigger states tend to have a larger amount of electors, for example the state of Hawaii has four while the state of texas has 38. This causes more attention to go towards the big states. Another example of this dilema is shown by an excerpt from Bradford Plumer whcih says \"each state casts only one vote, the single representative from Wyoming, represetning 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters. Given that many voters vote one party for president and another for congress, the House's selection can hardly be expected to represent the will of the people\".\n\nThe current system of election leaves room for multiple disasters to occur. Disasters such as the 2000 fiasco in which Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency. Another issue caused is a question of the electors loyalty to their candidate. Perhaps the Elector of a certain state decides against the election of their party and casts a deciding vote for whoever they please. This creates an unreliable system they could change the fate of an election in an instant. Even more serious issues could arise such as a state sending two slates of electors which Hawaii did in 1960.\n\nLastly, the Electoral College is a faulty system because of it's winner-take-all method. Most states have this method in which the winning presidential candidate is awarded all the electors. Due to this the candidates don't spend time int he states they know have no chance of winning, and only focus on tight races in the \"swing states\". As stated in an article by Richard A. Posner \"During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, icluding Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single ad.\n\nAll in all, the Electoral College is an unreliable system of election. It causes many issues to arise and is all around unfair to voters. Many important people such as Richard Nixon, and Jimmy carter agree that America should abolish it all together. The issues caused such as unequal attention on states based on size, unfaithfulness of electors, and an unfair winner-takes-all method prove the the Electoral College undeniably, causes more problems than solutions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that it is preferable for adolescents to participate in volunteer work in their spare time. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement. Since it has a clear positive impact on themselves and society. This short essay focuses on why should adults volunteer during their break time. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, young adults should be involved in social activities without getting paid in their spare time, since it enhances their self-confidence. To elaborate more, teenagers will be exposed to various new things. Therefore, a piece of new knowledge will be gained. Accordingly, they will develop their self-confidence in doing similar activities, in addition, adolescents will have the motive to try different works without having the fear of making mistakes. Considering myself, I used to have a fear of speaking publicly. \r\n\r\nNevertheless, I overcome this dilemma by being involved in cleaning my village. Luckily for me, I was chosen to be the leader of a group of ten people. Therefore, I was forced to chat with them. Consequently, I found it not a big deal to be afraid of. Therefore, now I can speak in front of others. \r\n\r\nThe second reason is that it enables teenagers to be engaged with others. To illustrate more, by being exposed to different works adults will meet one another. Therefore, it creates a strong relationship with them, in addition, to with the whole society. To put it another way, today’s adults are isolated from one another. Considering the area where I live, most of them do not know the names of the individuals who live next to their doors. Furthermore, everyone lives alone. However, it has a negative effect on every individual. Since if help is needed no one would help one another due to the lack of relation. Nonetheless, by being in social activities everyone will help each other. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is claimed that adolescents should be exposed to social activities as it has many benefits for them, as well as, for the whole society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you ever question why an object was made or even how it was made? When people had first seen this \"face\" on the moon, many questioning theories had been aroused. Some believe it to be made by aliens, but through scientific proof we can show you that it was not. Although, through this essay, I am here to explain to you what the Face actually is and what makes it appear in the shape of a human face.\n\nOnce NASA unveiled the image, they had made sure to include what it was and how it was formed. In the section before the arcticle starts, you can see the pictures of the Face in different times. In the 1970s, there cameras did not have clear resolution, so it was easy to believe that any alien had sculpted the Face. Although, as you can see in the photographs, as technology expanded and cameras developed, they were able to take clearer snapshots of the landform. Comparing the pictures, you can see that it was indeed shadows that had made the form look like a face, creating the illusion of eyes, a nose, and mouth. In paragraph 12, Jim Garvin stated, \"It reminds me of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" This proves that the Face was a natural landform that was created by natural disasters or features, not aliens.\n\nBased on the evidence above, NASA was able to prove that the Face was indeed a natural lanform. NASA had taken several pictures to prove that what they were seeing were just shadows being cast over a landform. In 1976, it was understandable to see how they could have thought it to be created by aliens. Despite the fact, a maximum resolution picture proves that the \"face\" is indeed a natural landform. In conclusion, there is no doubt that the Face was created by aliens. Using NASA's evidence, you can clearly see what the \"face\" truly is.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the Face is a natural landform because there really no such thing as a aliens or aliens creating a face on Mars. I seen in the article that the Face was form by a a huge rock formation. I agree with Michael because i would do the same thing try to take more picture to see if it's a real natural landform and show it on the a web site showing people that it's really is a natural landform and it's just not a alien monument.\n\nThe Face is a natural landform because before some people think it's aliens creating the face. The scienctists found out that it's have to be another Martin mesa around Cydonia showing a shadows that could look like Egyptian Pharaoh when they were at the Face. They noted that the face was a huge rock formation showing a human head with eyes, nose, and mouth. The second time they look at it they was discovering a picture they took and the picture of 1976 picture and say that it's grow 1.56 meters. They also noted that the digital image 3 times was bigger than pixel size.\n\nThe conclusion of the Face of Mars is that the Face is just natural landform and not something aliens created. It's was formed by a huge rock formation and rock come from land or Earth. In the article they cluely said that the Face is a landforn that was a Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landform common around the west of American.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author does mention \"a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. There are many challenge's to studying venus. \"On the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit. \" The author mentions challenges that we face in order to study venus. The author states \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" While they are many challenges that scientists, and that people may face, Venus is worthy of being studied. Nasa's possible solution to thhe hostile conditions on the surface on Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. They are many ways Venus can be studied, with NASA's solution , we are closer to discovering the many secrets of venus. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir appreciative grateful The mood memoir appreciate grateful author looking back parents turned three room appartment home I know paragraph author writes I never forget parents turned simple house home This supports mood memoir author grateful parents teaching home really Also mood memoir appreciative grateful author tells community family I know paragraph author writes In neighborhood despite customs elsewhere cultures came together great solidarity friendship This supports mood memoir authors appreciative atmosphere place grew Another reason mood memoir appreciative grateful author understands parents hardships I know paragraph author writes I always grateful parents love sacrifice This supports mood memoir author appreciates fact parents gave much make better life The mood memoir shown many ways", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education is the key to becoming successful in life, however, most of the students find it difficult to concentrate on studying at school. Although they feel distracted, there are a lot of courses that students need to cover, and I will discuss possible solutions for improving their concentration in the upcoming paragraphs. \n\nFirstly, the main reason that the students are unable to attention to study is that they feel fear because of the extra syllabus as they feel they are unable to finish on time. For instance, most learners prefer to complete topics which are easy as otherwise they feel a stress on mind to finish it. Secondly, children love to spend time on the internet where they play video games up to late at night which is the main distraction as they are unable to get proper sleep due to which they have lack of energy to focus on their studies. \n\nThe prominent solution for improving the curiosity of students towards their studies is that they make proper time for sleep which helps for the proper functioning of the brain. Elders have to make strict rules regarding the playing time of the kids so they get enough time to complete the homework as well as get time to revise class work. \n\nTo conclude, children want to play video games most of the time which is the main cause that they do not like studying, whereas, their parents should make strict rules to limit their play time so they can focus better on education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think driverless cars are helpful? Because i think they could just make things a lot worse. Driverless cars are dangerous to me because like the text says \" they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways ordealing with complicated traffic issues.\" Therefore if the car can't safely pull in and out of a driveway by it's self then it should be driving on the streets by itself either. Stating that means the driver has to remember when the car can't function on this rode or that rode.\n\nThey had to put a bunch of sensors in the car just for all the roads. One of those sensors could easily mess up and cause the driver to have an accident. Instead of making something that might really make the driver alert The Google Car just vibrates the seat to get the drivers attention. Even though it does that i still think thats dangerous because some drivers don't even pay attention when driving by themselves and by me saying that means there just gonna have the car as an advantage to where they don't have to do anything.\n\nMany people like to text and make calls while their driving, so having this car will give many of the people who don't care an advantage to just cause many more accidents. If the car can't drive on certain roads and can't get the drivers attention then what is it gonna do? A lot of problems can happen in between time before the driver actually pay attention. Some people in the world have Narcolepsy. What if the driver constantly falls asleep then he/she can end up dead or injured.\n\nwould you want one of your family members to have this? Because i know for a fact i wouldn't want one of mines too. I don't want anybody to end up injured or getting in an accident with their kids. Let alone any other pedestrians in the world to get injured or end up dead. This is basically why i'm saying the Driverless cars can make things worse.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electonal are very impornont for the people in the u. s because they need better leader in which they vote every four years.\n\nThere 270 electoral vores required to elect the preasident well the 23rd Amendment only let's us have 3 elecotor and treated like for state for purposes of the electoral college were 'discussin the word state also refers to the districy of columbia'.\n\nWhy dosen't the u. s just have better party well we only the two great party but what about the other onces? we as people should change that because i don't think it's very fair to have only have two big party somepeople would agree with me if we just ask qustion about why should we should have more big party but why not all of us should change that for the last 300 years we have been vote for the party.\n\n\"In 1976 a shift of just 41,971 votes would have just deadlocked the election 1976 a tie would have occurred if a\" mere 5,559 voter in Ohio state by 3,687 voters in hawaii had voted the other way election 'is only a few swing voters aways from catastrpe\".\n\nDo you know if state have lots of vote on which they vote for the person who is running for president they would mostly be in office by just only four state if they get very high vote lets ask in explan like Ohia they get 50% of the votes most likely they would be the president of the u. s that just a fact right there to show you.\n\nIn 1968 thorw 1992 they both had only a 43 percent of plurality if popular votes, while winning every electoral and college 301,370 respectively invariably produces a clear winner of which they vote for like for explain like obam they mostly vote for him over about 2 years ago back in 2012 well that because big states vote for him and he got to be the president for the last 6 years of office.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ever thought about someone else driving, beacuse your \"too tired\" or just lazy? Well in the article \"Driverless Cars are coming\" they talk about some ways to argument for or against the development of these cars. They state ways why you should buy a driver less car.\n\nSome ways they stated is that it has antilock brakes, the in-car system, and lastly the traffic jam assistant.\n\nThe first example they use, is the antilock brackes. \"Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollover.\" This would help out daily life alot. If you get by truck and you skid or rollover you wouldnt know how to react, but now thanks to the anitlock brakes you wouldnt have to. Of course you would be a little shooken up, but you would still be alive and well.\n\nThe second example is in-car system. Dr. werner Huber stated that \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.That same passage also said that \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment.\" I dont know about you, but that sounds like really great idea. That long and boring car ride to grandma's house can be pretty exciting now. Following up to that last statement, they also added that \"Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over--- something not available to drivers trying to text a cell phone. In this way, the in-car system is actually a safetly feacture.\" With that, the drive to grandma's house won't be so boring.\n\nThe last exaple they used is the \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" They used the statement \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but allare designed to notify the driver whe the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zonesand around accidents.\" This is the best example they used to help them, to get you yo invest in a driverless car. All you have to do is sit there care does work , except for work zones and around accidents.\n\nIn conclusion to this article, you should be wanting a driverless car right now,but those the ways that the article helps you choose for the continution, and for the development of these cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir lave An example text says My mother father come country courage without knowledge language culture They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved example text says I always grateful parents love sacrifice I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever done I ve often told admiration strength perseverance I ve thanked repeatedly But reality way express gratitude spirit generosity impressed upon early age demonstration important family friends In conclusion parents love sacrificed alot could happy good life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College its a process, not an actuall place. The Electoral College process works by a selection of electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president, and they count the electoral votes by congress. I think this should not stand no longer because \"under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\"This is only one reason why the Electoral College should not be in progress. Another reason why is \"If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for [John] Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry.\"\n\n\"This explains why we as a hole nation united in one should change the Electoral College system to election by popular vote this allows everyones vote to be acounted for.\"The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. American people should say there pretty lucky that 2000 fiaaco was the biggest election crisis in a century;the system allows for much worse.\"Consider that state legislature are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.\"Now you might be getting an understanding of what I mean by we need to get rid of the electoral college method to popular vote.\n\n\"Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. But just because we did not get the electoral college removed doesnt mean we cant still try afterall we were close. The main problem with the electoral college is the fact that \"each state casts only one vote, the single representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters. \"And if an electoral tie seems unlikely, consider this: In 1968, a shift of just 41,971 votes would have deadlocked the election; In 1976, a tie would have occured if a mere 5,559 voters in Ohio and 3,687 voter in Hawaii had voted the other way. \"The election is only a few swing voters away from catastrophe.\" That is why the electoral college must end because it lets congress choose who they want to be leader not us.\n\nThat is why the electoral college must end because it lets congress choose who they want to be leader not us. That is my reason why.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage \"Driverless Care Are Coming,\" Brin the Google cofounder has found a way to produce Driverless cars. Since 2009 google has produced cars\n\nthat can drive themselves. Google cars has driven half of a milion miles without a single crash. Should these cars be able to be used in any state?\n\nDriverless cars shouldn't be able to be driven without humans. Driverless cars has been around for a very long time and the cars are very popular in television shows and movies. What about reality? Example one the reality of driveless cars are smart but, cars are meant to be driven the right way and should be in control of a human. Humans have sense and can make good decisions when the mind is able to. Cars have technology fails all the time. So, what if someone gets hurt? \"If the techonology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault?\" Example two Cars can't comprehend how a human does, humans make better judgments in traffic and in tight situations. \"...all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills,\" There off cars can't tell what is going to happen next.\n\nDriverless cars should be able to be driven without human interaction. Driverless cars are smart cars that can prevent accidents from happening in certain situations. Example one driverless cars should be driven without human interaction because, cars can notify the driver when something is going to happen they can aslo accelerate and brake when it is needed. \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but are all designed to notify the driver.\" Example two Driverless cars should be able to drive the human so that the human can have time to text and do other things they like while getting to their destination. Car manufacturers think driving should be fun. \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" Driving should only have human interaction when needed.\n\nDriverless cars shouldn't be used without human interaction due to accidents and glitches. Driving should be safe and operated by humans at all times. As we grow closer to the destination to cars driving themselves we also grow closer to more accidents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a planet that is called sometimes \"Evening star\".The planet Venus is called the \"twin\" of Earth because \" closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size ,occasionally the closest in distance too.\" as said in Paragraph 2 .NASA is trying to explore Venus but, Venus has a thick atmosphere about 97 percent carbon dioxide which covers venus. Trying to persuit of studying Venus is dangerous but it is worthy to perusite the study of it.\n\nNASA ( The National Aeronautics and Space Administration) is currently studying to send humans to study Venus as said in Paragraph 5. The author supports this idea of studying Venus and he makes a lot of really great reasons why. Some include that \" jet airplanes trael at a higher altitude to fly over many storms\" in Paragraph 5. This would not be a bad idea but, this could not happen if they are not able to reasearch.\n\nAnother reason why it is worth pursuiting even though it is dangerous is that Nasa is not only sticking to one idea to explore Venus NASA is looking into more approaches, safer approaches like \"simplifying electronics made of silicon carbide\". \"These approaches has been tested in a chamber simulating the choas of Venus's Surface.\" Have lasted for three weeks in such conditons\" Paragraph 7. NASA got these ideas from looking back to old technology called mechanical computers. In the 1800s is when there were first envisioned.\n\nMy overall claim is that NASA has the potential to explore it just takes time.\n\nSooner or later Venus will be explored I say this because \" Many researchers are working on innovations that allow our machines to ast long enought to contribute meaningfully to our knowlege of Venus\" (Paragraph 6). This statement supports my thought of NASA being able to research Venus soon or later. \" Scientist seeking tto conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risk\"(Paragraph 6). Finally, another reason it worth studying is \" Long ago, Venus was probably covered larely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth\" (Paragraph 4).\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is worthy to pursuit despite it's dangers it presents. \"Our travels on Earth and beyonf should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be exapanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\"( Paragraph 8). These are the reasons why Venus is worth exploring.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, trading businesses are made throughout the world resulting from the increased globalization. Consequently, employees are requested to have a variety of knowledge in their jobs due to remain a highly competitive capabilities in labour markets over the world. Parents have much struggles on the arrangement regarding additional classes out of school to their children in order to gain the competitive advantages in their future career. This eassy attempts to find out the main considerations on this.\nThere is no doubt that school curriculum largely focuses on academic studies, including physical, Maths and organic chemistry etc., Those subjects are designed to connect with learning in a higher education. It is reasonable to say that this curriculum may not enable the teenagers to gain various knowledeges aspects of digital world and our planet. Learning in extra classes out of syllabus is an opportunity for them to really discover what they may be passionate about and in turn, help them develop new skills that may come in handy for a future occupation that is related.\nOn the other hand, it is not difficult to notice a lot of parents forcing their children into learning something that does not interest them. Sometimes, the intensive courses are arranged by parents to their children study at the weekends. As a result, it could lead to undesired results or even negative impacts on the parent-child relationship, so maybe it's best for children to figure it out on their own sometimes.\nMy take on this is that younsters are extremely inquisitive and energetic, consequently, it's really the prime time of their life to explore and learn new things. Studying in classes outside the syllabus are good intention, but children are forced to learn what their parents love to only. This not only ruins the parent-child relationship but also may results in children's resistance to learning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story want s retake test Because wants pass test mother So brought home flower apologize mother", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever tot waiting hour line like We ceder point waiting ride thrill dragster We got first thing decided ride top thrill dragseter line three hour wait went anyway We fineshed first hour waiting felt like three I knew I patient relaxe felt like forever anthor hour stomach started growl I checked watch got I starving tiered I stayed finaly hour later turn I got I knew worth patient In conclusion I learned patience something half lot thing life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you wanttolive in a world where driving is now done by computers? I mean, wouldn't that just be sweet? Well, I'm going to let you on a little secret that I call the \"Three Part Series\". This world would be dangerous, promote laziness, and would be quite expensive.\n\nFirstly, this invention would be dangerous. Not only would these computers have to be programmed to completely analyze and control the road, but new laws will have to be published for these driverless cars. In paragraph 9, it says \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover the liability in the case of an accident.\" which over all make you stop and think. If this tecnology fails or makes a mistake, who is at fault, you the driver or the manufacturer? Will driving tests still be required in case of an emergency or will everyone lack the knowledge of driving? It's so dangerous that California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia has started to limit the use ofsemi-autonomous cars.\n\nSecondly, this invention will not only promote laziness but bring about other inventions that will promote computer controlled programs. These cars will provide a better respose and control than a human, like it says in paragraph 5, so will this push us to be less aware of the roads and dangers of accidents? You might say \"what's so bad about that?\", well not only are you losing your everyday self-awareness but you're allowing yourself to become lazy. No longer will your attention be on the road but instead focused on the lastest updated picture of Justin Bieber, while you drink a sweet tea from the dollar menu. Sooner or later you'll be the girl/boy everyone has seen give their clothes to a robot to wash them or your kitchen to a robot who cooks for you.\n\nLastly, not only will you be lazy, but, you'll be broke too. In 2000, \"Radar\" or these driverless cars we're estimated to cost 200 million dollars. I don't know about you, but I know there's no way I'll be spending 200 million on driverless car when that's all I'm estimated to make for a LIFETIME. With the price of this car, I can imagine how much money these companies will be needing just to manufacturer one set each of these cars. So, just take a minute and think how money these companies are going to blow that can be used towards something else, like charity,at-risk neighborhoods, homeless shelters or even just rehab centers. So, ultimately you'll be spending more on this car then you'll make in a lifetime or even spend in a lifetime.\n\nIn conclusion, I would like to say that I still agree and stand by my \"Three Part Series\" or TPS for short. As you can see, not only will this car be inefficient but it will be expensive, dangerous, and will promote laziness. So the next time you might think this will be a great idea, remember the engraved \"Three Part Series\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If I had to chose between against or for the idea of a driverless utopia. I would be in the middle. But since there is no middle, well I'm more leaning on against driverless cars. many people say it at first. the feeling of riding this mechanical beast, to and fro, from A to B. and I could see it being boring to drive a driverless car, that needs a driver to still remain alert. I mean why have the name 'driverless' in there in the first place? might as well call it the extremly 'cautionary' car. now I'm gonna pull evidence from the text but forgive me if the evidence sounds choppy. \"human skills, such as navigation through work zones and around accidents. this means the human driver must remain alert\". \"the Google car simply announces when the driver should prepared to take over\". \"GM has a developed drivers seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object\". \"while the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver\". my point is that these cars may drive themselves, but to a certain extent. in the end of the day, the driver has to have some modest of self control on the car. cause god knows how much chaos this would have on society itself. just imagine cars slamming against eachother, with innocents inside. or just going off a cliff and into a ditch. computer and codeings can only do so much, before its overencumbered. but also imagine the laws in place. how long and arduose the process it would be. making sure that the bill does not lean towards the individual as well as the manufacturer. \"if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\". and reading paragraph 10 \"Automakers are continuing thier work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved\" I get the feeling of, We'll cross the bridge when we get there, syndrome. look if your gonna cross it. Good luck, cause that is a very, very long bridge. some laws and bills take ten years before it finally goes to all the goverment branches. maybe even more, cause we are talking about bills that deals with innocent lives. everyone going to be scrutinizing this. or loving this. but I'm confindent that there is going to be a long debate over this. and there has been incedents where laws have been revoked. So if there was an accident that did occure, people are going to think \"maybe not\". but hey who knows, I might be completely wrong. And I am okay with the idea of chilling while you car takes you to the mall or something, and no accidents ever occured. which would be cool. But I doudt that. But furtune favors the bold, so lets see what happens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello Mr. Senator,\n\nI was writting to inform you about a topic that has been talked about for the past year, the Electoral Collage. This process has its pros and cons, but i'm more in the con side; you see the reason why the Electoral College needs to be abolished is because people dont really get to choose who their president is, the people who choose the president are the people in the Electoral College. How the Electoral College works is the state has electors and those electors have to be won by the president for the president to have how many electoral votes he gets from that state depending on how many electors that state has. The trick here is that sometimes the electors can deny the will of the people since the election is based on electoral votes not on popular votes, don't get me wrong people's votes do influence electors in deciding which president won their votes. Overall the electoral college is unfair to everyone because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates dont spend time in states that they have no chance winning over so they got to the \"swing\" states since they have more chance of winning them over depending on their campaing. I don't think we should be trusting people to vote for us because as we have seen some electors vote for the candidate they want to win and not the candidate their state wants to win. Thats my rant about the Electoral College and I hope it makes you see clearer.\n\nBest Regards, Alberto", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This all started 21 years ago. Here is how the face on Mars was discovered. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling Mars, taking pictures for possible landing sites for it's sister Viking 2 and it spotted a shadown of a likely human face. It was a great big head shaped face 2 miles apart from end to end. That is how this all started.\n\nHow could aliens make such a thing? There is no way. Some scientist believe that the face was an alien artifact, the photographing from Cydonia became a priorty for NASA when MGS showed up at the Red Planet in Sepmber. The face was not created by some things we like to call aliens that we don't even know if they exist or not, kind of like mermiads or unicorns.\n\nThere is to much evidence of how this face could of formed on it's own. It was so bi it would take aliens so long to even make this thing we say that looks like a face. Some people belive that the face is \"bona fide\", which means that that face is evidence that there was life on Mars at one point. Nobody has that big of a face for it to be an actual human face. I believe it is just a natual landform that just happened to look a lot like a human face. The face is exactly located 41 degrees North martian latitude where it was winter in April '98, a very cloudy time on the Red Planet. This investigation the scientist haas said has been very hard work to figure out exaclty what it is. I still belive with all the evidence we have it has to just be God's creation and it just apeared to look like a face, no aliens or anything like that because if you want to tell me that aliens did it you better be showing me that aliens even exist first.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist say nothing It might make want go faster left inner speed demon Thats I really tell Because personally I dont think setting ride bike doesnt even matter Possibly bicyclist I dont even think", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day I camping friend I asked could climb dunes said would later So I waited hours hours hours hours said acler lunch Then I asked lunch said yes But saw dunes I knew bad idea climb I After I got top I fell stayed like dead animal After five minute I good climbing top dune I got I ran dune friend told stop I stop I stoped But I got seed coat pocket Then I hit rock front flip Then I fell friend carte lauphed back campsite", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should there be driverless cars? Some people may not think so, but I think it would be neat to have these type of cars. There are many things you could do if you have a driverless car like if you have a baby and it needs your attention you can give it a bottle or get it to stop crying when it is just the two of you. Then, if you text and drive now you don't have to put your's and someone else's lives in danger because your texting and not paying attention to the road. Also, if you have a health propblem that ypu need to get to the hospital or doctor for and you very well can't drive you have the driverless car to help kind of guide you to the place you need to go to. Or, maybe, I think it would just be amazing to see a car drive on it's own unless there is road work or an accident.\n\nOkay, say for an example I have a baby in the backseat and it is crying because it wants a bottle, but oh no I'm driving. If I had a drieverless car that wouldn't be a problem I could make my baby a bottle so that way it is happy. Or, maybe my baby needs my attention because it got hurt in the car. How could I pay attention to that if I was driving? There could be something seriously wrong with my baby and if I had a driverless car I could solve the baby's problem. Not only does that make me able to solve the baby's problem, but I am able to solve mine as well. That is one reason we should have these types of cars.\n\nAnother thing, and this I believe is a big problem with the teen and adult drivers of today, they like to text and drive which should be a big no no! When you text and drive your not only putting yourself in danger your also putting other drivers and if you have passengers in danger too. And if i was a person who was texting and driving I sure wouldn't want to be responsible for that. Now, if we had driverless cars I think there would be less acciednets happening due to texting and driving. Who would need to text and drive if you had an awesome car like that I mean come on it drives for you!\n\nThat is another one of my reasons for having these cars.\n\nFinally, these cars would be amazing to have honestly. You could just relax in your car while it drives for you. This kind of car is what my mom would want for her to go to work in so she doesn't have to drive in the snow or any other bad weather. Who knows the car might be neat looking and probably be what we call \"in style\" by the time I graduate. I think car companies would have a better luck selling these then their wifi cars. And this is my final reason for having a\n\ndriverless car.\n\nIn conclusion, when I think of driverless car\n\nkinda think of two things. Like no one is driving and it's like the car Herby. Also, then again, I think of just being in my car and not having to drive and being able to relax. I really wish they had these types of cars now. I think a lot of people could use these cars. I know if I had a baby and it needed me for something while I was driving I would want this car. Or, if I was a person who likes to text and drive. Or just maybe, just because I think it would be an amazing experience with this car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood Narciso Rodriguez subtle undefind I say I read I nt feel anything I thought The article gave comfortting mood As said memoir Growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative CAPS beginning paragraph That quote sets mood little audience head goes CAPS I never thought way This memoir give blunt moobs like happy sad It makes think There never really sad moment whole thing At end paragraph says I never forget parents turned simple house home This quote another example giving undefind mood I say undefind cant put words feel So conclusion mood piece gives undefind", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, I think that the development of driverless cars could be a great thing for people today. As long as they're completely safe to our environment, this invention could be very helpful. With the technology helping with transportation and safety, nothing but positivity should come from this invention.\n\nWhen I talk about the safety, there could be many benefits from the driverless cars. First, With the sensors they talk about in paragraph 4 and 5 to help prevent accidents with pedestrians or bad snow wether, driverless cars could save more lives from accidents that occur with careless pedestrians, drunk drivers, and ice on roads. In addition, in paragraph 6 when the passage gets into the antilock brakes to assist the drivers control whats going on more when they're behind the wheel but, with driverless cars contianing this ablility could benefit safety of passengers and others around them even more. Lastly, when\n\nthe passenger is comming towards danger there are all kinds of signals that warn the passengers on whats happening like for example the vibration of a seat belt which was stated in paragraph 7. With all of these things I've stated about the driverless cars safey I dont see anything going wrong as long as the things about the saftey in the passage are true.\n\nAnother thing about driverless cars are that they can be extremly helpful to some very busy passengers. When car crashes happen it can be because of a driver not paying attention, drunk drivers, or drivers that are trying to multi task and the driverless cars can help prevent these accidents. In the passage that I've read, It says things about entertainment of the driver, or \"wouldn't drivers get bored witing for their turn to drive?\". The reason why most of the accidents occur today is because drivers are being occupied by other things so with statements like the previous one I've showed I dont nessicarily agree. I think that it would be more helpful for drivers, especially ones with children or babies to he able to attend to their children or whatever it may be thats important without having to worry about having to steer a car or watch the road. In addition, with the saying \"dont text and drive/die\" drivers wouldn't really have to worry about this because with the driverless car attending to everything with transportation, the passenger shouldn't have a problem with being occupied with their phones or whatever it is they need to do to keep themselves busy. Also, with the law talking about thinking that the safest way to do things is with a human driver, I dont really agree with that either because, most car accidents that occur are because of the human drivers.\n\nComming to my conclusion, as I've stated before, I believe that driverless cars could have a positive impact to the future because of the saftey it can provide and the help it could bring. Driverless cars could save more lives, make things easier on a busy parent, and make sure that people more safe on the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building immediate problems attempting allow dirigibles dock The media hardship placing mooring mast top already completed building A thousand foot dirigible would add stress building s frame Not mention large dirigible would also placed stress building Completing project would extremely difficult building designed docking dirigibles This means roof top floors would need converted accommodate passengers travel operations Nature also obstacle builders High winds could cause dirigible violently sway Weights used tether dirigibles could also safety hazard densley populated area Fire another safety concern builders The gases used keep dirigibles airborne highly flammable would cause serious concern safety city millions Ultimately factors caused creation mooring mast Empire State Building fail", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently there has been a lot of debate about the necessity of higher education. One side is of the opinion that youngsters should attend university, while the other supports the idea of finding employment immediately after high school. Both pathways have their advantages and disadvantages when a successful career is concerned: a college degree ensures more excellent expertise but is inappropriate for those not into intense studying; and while getting a job straight after school helps adolescents to quickly gain experience, they are likely to miss out on important technical knowledge.\n\nThe most prominent benefit of tertiary school is adequate training to work in a specific field. At college, students are taught available theories related to their majors as well as provided hands-on practice via laboratory activities, internships, and other forms of job simulation. Accordingly, they will be skilled enough to pursue ambitious goals after graduation. Nevertheless, the heavy workload demanded by tertiary institutions might not be suitable for all students. Indeed, quite a few young adults would find daily lectures and assignment deadlines tedious and stressful, hence would probably be miserable and anxious throughout their university years. In short, although further education offers high-quality coaching, it is not the answer for everyone.\n\nIn respect to going to work right after secondary school, it fails to supply youths with in-depth knowledge about their subjects. Without attending an institute, one's access to academic resources, such as research articles or books, is significantly reduced. Moreover, there are concepts that are difficult to grasp if there is no explanation from a professor, which means that self-studying will likely be laborious. Due to these limitations, skipping higher education seems not to be a good choice. On the other hand, entering the workforce early on equips youngsters with valuable pragmatic knowledge. For instance, actually working for a marketing company teaches one more about how promotion is done than any school can. That is to say, getting an occupation immediately after high school compensates for the lack of in-depth understanding with familiarity with real-life situations.\n\nIn a nutshell, when a fruitful career is concerned, there are strengths and weaknesses to both attending university and finding employment straight after school. Tertiary institutions offer young people a sufficient understanding of a subject but might be overwhelming for some. Contrastly, though directly joining the workforce means forfeiting useful academic resources, one can obtain just-as-valuable work experience. As a result, there is no one-for-all formula for a successful career, and individual youths have to decide for themselves what the best option is.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supported his idea very well. He explained how\n\nexploring Venus is going to be a challenge and why it is possible for it to happen.\n\nThe author said it is going to be a challenge because Venus atmosphere is dangerous. In paragraph 3 it say \"Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" It already sound challenging. Also the average temperture is over 800 degrees. That is inhabitable.\n\nThose aren't the only problems. To go further than the tempertures, it also has erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes.\n\nThe author question us. In paragraph 4 he ask \"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?\" He starts to explain how Venus was \"the most Earth-like planet our solar system.\" Then he stated \"what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive?\"\n\nThe author say NASA has \"one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.\" Have the scientists float above Venus. The author said \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\" The author starts to explain the benefits of them doing that. Then he gave some problems it could have with doing that idea. He also explained how the technology from the 1940s can help with this project.\n\nIn conclusion, the author did a very good job with this article. He gave details and supporting details to help us understand the article.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, there are many people who believe that all teenagers have to take apart in the summer camp for their spare time which can be helpful for their society. They also feel that in general, these materials have played a crucial role on their personality. Despite of this idea, I personally disagree with this notion, hence reasons will be analysed in this article.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, it could be a misconception about students and teenagers which are obliged to do an an unpaid job in the summer. First of all, they should have the opportunity to do whatever they want in life. However, if they forced, it may affect on the outcome of their job, because they have done something which they are not eager to do it. Secondly, when students and teenagers attend to school, they have a hectic curriculum which means they do not have adequate time to refresh their mind and peruse on their interest hobbies. Finally, with these situations, if we force them, we will kill their free time.\r\n\r\nMy idea varies widely with this notion which these obligations would be beneficial both for teenagers and their community. Firstly, by following their ideas, students are forced to do things that are against their will. So as a result, they cannot do their best in their work and after a while they will figure out that they have just wasted their time by doing these unpaid jobs. Therefore, it would not have an impact on their personality. In addition, if they are forced, we will increase the number of people who are depressed or have a lot of problems in their lives. For instance, some researches on some students in the UK indicate that those students which had gone to the summer camp, had a number of issues related to their society after that work.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while teenagers may choose to work for free in their spare time, I believe that we should not make this compulsory.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Traditionally, some people hold the belief that pending money on training elite competitors to shine on the international stage is worthwhile. Nowadays, a growing number of people tend to believe that a country should invest more in youngsters’ physical conditions, and therefore stimulate their interest for taking part in sports from\nan early age.\n\nSome people believe that it is not worthwhile to finance sports competitors merely for the purpose of achieving success in the global arena if we take the poor situation of imass sports into consideration. The lack of physical exercise has become a huge problem among citizens, particularly teenagers, as the construction and maintenance of sports\nfacilities is underfunded. Actually, children's sports activities are imore beneficial for the future development of la nation as sports can ensure that children maintain enthusiasm for sports nd keep good physical condition in the future study so that they deserve more financial support from the government las well as sponsors of sports events.\n\nAdmittedly, global sports contests not only provide audience with a_ perfect opportunity to lenjoy the excellent performances of athletes but also provide host countries a perfect chance to present the success of the event in front of global political and business leaders hwho are highly likely to watch hive broadcast via satellite relays, However. squandering money for supporting competitors to take part in worldwide sports competitions seems to bring little actual effect to general public. It is largely because there are only a few top athletes having the chance to win the medals but their routine training demands high-standard facilities which can hardly be used by ordinary people.\n\nIn conclusion, when countries raise fund for sports or celebrate the victory of their athletes, they should not neglect the fact that many children are in great need of sports facilities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a rather intriguing planet that mankind would have a great interest in studying. Venus' great danger is what's stopping us from examining it up close. The author tries to say that overcoming this danger is worth dealing with to explore Venus, however. I believe their claim is valid and that there is value of trying to study the planet, even with these dangerous conditions. There's even a decent chance of working around the risks. The author uses reasons like it's the most Earth-like planet, studying Venus from a ship orbiting around the planet isn't insightful enough to learn much, and that NASA is even coming up with different methods of studying the planet to justify their idea.\n\nThere's a lot of evidence to suggest that Venus was originally similar to Earth in quite a few ways. The planet was likely covered with oceans that could've been able to support life. Venus also had other features like rocky sediment, craters, valleys, and mountains. Venus is also sometimes the closest planet to Earth, often swapping back and forth with Mars being the closest. This evidence shows that it's likely Venus was essentially an alternate version of Earth.\n\nIt's also a good point that hovering above the planet and observing it just isn't effective enough at gathering information. Since the atmosphere is impenetrable to light, photography and videography of the surface is near pointless. The inability to go down to the ground and collect samples of the materials, substances, and gases hinders our ability to understand the planet. Researchers are even considering innovating space technology to allow us to gather some form of meaningful knowledge. We need to advance past observing from an orbital space station and find a way to get down there.\n\nNASA realizes that problems could be solved with the right approach. They've tested how long some electronics made of silicon carbide could survive in Venus' conditions and so far, the results have shown that there is potential. Building resistant computers may also collect information on the planet, but mechanical computers may get this job done the best. Mechanical computers were used in World War II, but they were sturdier than modern computers and don't require any electronics to function. If one method of getting closer to the planet doesn't work, we could always try again with another.\n\nOvercoming the dangers of Venus is currently one of the toughest challenges of space exploration we've seen yet. With enough determination and patience though, we can find a way to work around this dilemma; especially since NASA clearly hasn't given up working on solutions. This may be necessary too; our current method of studying this place just isn't that good. The reward may be worth the effort too since Venus is one of the most interesting planets we've attempted exploring. Let's just hope that this won't stop us from wanting discover the whole universe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think you should join the Seagoin Cowboys program. I got to see exciting new things, and had fun while on the way to return from these journeys. I played games with Luke and these journeys opened up my world. I became aware of other people and their needs.\n\nI had many adventures while I was in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I toured an excavated castle in Crete while on my way to China. I got to see the Acropolis in Greece when we arrived. I also had the amazing experience of taking a Gondola ride in Venice, Italy, through the \"streets of water.\"\n\nI had many moments of fun on the way back from my travels. Luke and I played Volleyball, and baseball in the holds where the animals had been housed. I played table-tennis, fencing and boxing also with luke. I read when on the way back from my journeys, along with whittling. I enjoyed my many games with Luke and made many great memories with Luke.\n\nWhile on these journeys, they opened up a whole new world for me. I became aware of other countries and their needs. The awareness stayed with me throughout my life. My family hosted a number of international students and visitors, becauseof this, it made them aware of the other countries needs also.\n\nIn conclusion, I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. You will have many adventures throughout your journeys, and will make great merories with your fellow Seagoing Cowboys. If you like to help out, you should join and it will help you become aware of the countries that DO need help.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone likes watch movies jam music get lost interesting book Therefore everyone able read watch listen want things people reading listening watching Some things needed look look one project Other people entertained certain peices liturature music In case censor certain things people interested even things research libraries Many people enjoy violent writing gorey movies Reading things also amusses So take away like If library takes certain books shelves could taking away type literature people interested If one removes book twenty people take pleasure reading thats twenty people going want read anything else People different many ways That includes variety things humans interested For example things interested read Humans major differences characteristics meaning nt enjoy things The articles magazines movies suited schools libraries s topic people like s someone needs project reason get rid Some books offten offend certain groups races people book gets uniqueness says Some books writen times racisim This shuoldnt make book worth critisizing way things said time It allows book give feeling living time based On hand magazines writen horrible events wars people find entertainment reading events going world They want know really happening across seas even around home Someone nt able know s happening one lets read magazine Authors writers write things entertainment people want read Due wide veriety interest people many different types writings People shouldnt favorite book taken shelves see guy right next found book loves That wouldnt fare Libraries put shelf people write others enjoy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I think using computers good thing effect exercising enjoying nature interacting family friends Here three reasons support oppinion people learn internet children school go online find homework internet effect everyday life My first reason I think using computers good people learn internet You know people say learn something new everyday Well wondering something re think something internet help find re looking great site find re looking It also images need picture project need My second main reason using internet good go online check subject If nt want homework recessthe next day sick No go online schools website click teachers names see homework This way still time go side play friends interact family members My third final reason using internet good effects everyday life good way If nt tv idea weather like go online see s going snowy rainy This tell need jacket rain jack need use shovel hold umbrella The internet useful everyday life In conclusion I think using internet good effect exercise interacting family To support I stated people learn internet children access homework missed day internet effects everyday life good way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author said that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. He tells us about how nobody survived on each misson but a few hours because of all the problems there and he said\n\n\"not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in 3 decades\". Venus is 97 percent carbon dioxide. It also is very hot, has one of the hottest surfaces and is the hottest in our solar system.\n\nYes it is dangerous goinf there but they want to see if life is on there and how different things are. The only reson they keep going back is because they think there was life and oceans just like on earth. They are all putting their life on the line just to figure this out. I think they want another place to take people and maybe start something there on a new planet. They also talk about how technology today is way better and could help more since its improved.\n\nIt is very dangerous and most of the reaserchers when they go there look for things to take back so they can see if life was there or is life can be there. The author says \"many resherchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus\" meaning they most likely won't give up on venus. \"our thought on earth should not be limited by the dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In last paragraphy reason author uses come back spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test The author uses Saeng finally found comfort moving homeland veelnam united States felt home sick For example comes across flower reminds time spent homeland She remember grandmother s smell plant So finally got home mother showed flower They planted flower got sense relief Thats vowed winter oven spring came would take test sense home gave uncouragement strength also shows even different area chew s always something male remember unemove lime spent", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear,state senator\n\nThe Electoral College voting method is a very debated subject among the people. That is why I am here to explain to you my opinion on it, and why i think that the whole process needs to be stopped. As you can probably already tell, I completely dis like the whole process all together but anyway here is my letter to you.\n\nThe first issue with this process is that there is not that much stability to it. When people vote for who they want as president they're giving their votes to some one else just so the person they gave them to can vote for who they want to,not for the elector that that person actually put down on the ballet. We the people are not even the ones who technically get to pick who we want as president, it's the electors.\n\nThis being said brings me to my next point,what is the point of the people voting if we arent even the ones who get to pick the representatives? Yes, they say that when people are voting,they are actually voting for electors but what if the electors dont listen to the peoples votes and only vote for who they want? It is true that the slate of electors is trusted to vote for the parties person they want to elect but, there is always that tiny percentage that the electors can break that trust. When they take these chances they are setting themselves up for disaster.\n\nI hope that you take what I said into consideration. These are just a few of the things that are wrong with the Electoral College system. Its only a matter of time before people like me start to realize everything wrong with the system we have now, and when they do realize the things wrong with it, they will want something done about it. Please help get a better system going and end this Electoral College crap we have now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I say that making driverless cars would be great you would be able to talk in a car more efficiently, watch your kids, play games do all the things you've ever wanted to do in a car, done! Technically the technology has been out since the 1950s so why not let's move towards the new age!\n\nGoogle seems like the company leading in this technology so far. In 2009 their cars could already handle everything but pull in and out of driveways and navigate through roadwork or accidents. Originally many thought that self-driving cars would begin with smarter roads. Back in the 1950s General Motors (GM) made a concept car that drove on a track embedded with electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the car. Engineers at Berkeley thought magnets would be the answer, using alternating polarity. The car read the positive and negative polarity as messages in binary code. Both of these systems worked well (and I know you're thinking \"then what was the problem) but they were way to expensive.\n\nNow back to Google. Google has recently produced a modified Toyota Prius equipped with lots of sensors. One on the rear left wheel,one that rotates on the roof, an inertial motion sensor and four automotive radar sensors but the most important sensor is the one the spinning one on the roof named LIDAR. LIDAR uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of its surroundi", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The created happy happy got live raised happy shes lived In Same house New Jersey life finally got meet grandparents In When turned years old CAPS Is also happy Is older alot memorys In house Is happy lives In free country", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Materials books music magazines etc removed shelves found offensive It s public library Not many people would like find something seems hurt harm way Libraries people come expected enjoy something whether book movie magazine When people come looking good information something look forward finding good tips let Example something possibly someone racist That s dissapointment Noone walk find something offenses It s fair Now parents children Would like child going library allowed look wherever little heart desires come upon porn anything would bad influence I highly doubt Unless nt care kid reads days ones want child good education well understand statement It s fair ones go library expected satisfied instead let It good could make community look bad Libraries help people information fun facts around good resources So please put bad books music magazines etc away", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars these days can cause a lot of accidents and pollution. This happens mostly because people are careless people. Accidents mostly happens to young teens. Why teens? Well they are immature and most of the dont care about what happens around them. So they will get drunk or use drugs that will mess with their senses and most likely get them involved in a car crash.\n\nSelf-driving cars can be very handy. But it will take some time before they come out and are avalible for the world to use. They have a lot of problems right now, but their are people working on it. I honestly like self-driving cars because there wont be as many people dying and there will also be less pollution. Instead of kids getting drunk and driving then crashing they can get a self-driving car and get home or where ever they need to go safely.\n\nBut there is a disadvantage to this also. The cost of the car will be very high. As the text states \"Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors or the left rear wheel, rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotie radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\" The car is going to be very expensive. Not everyone has the money to buy it.\n\nEventually the price will come down. But it will take many years for that to happen. But it will happen, looking at the cars from the 1900's to now. People will buy the car for sure. The cars that used to exist are out of style for the modern days. Now everyone drives the newer versions or the cars. It can be expensive or very cheap, but I still support the self-driving cars. Like I said, they wont be cheap but the prices will drop. There will be less accidents and less pollution.\n\nCars have changed a lot over the years and they will keep changing. Prices will go up, or they will go down. Techonology is advancing and it will keep advancing. I like the idea of the self-driving car and hope it exists soon.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's society, choosing to have children later in life is becoming more and more common. Despite the fact that a number of reasons contribute to this tendency, the disadvantages of having children later in life likely outweigh the advantages.\r\n\r\nOne of the reasons for this phenomena is that women may now choose to put off having children by taking medicines or using certain types of contraception thanks to medical development. Additionally, many adults these days tend to invest more time in order to put heavy emphasis on growing their occupations than on having children. Therefore, it is undeniable that both men and women lose time when they have an individualized concentration on their careers. These explanations demonstrate that choosing to have children later in life depends on both personal decision and environmental factors.\r\n\r\nOne of the main benefits is that kids can develop in financially stable homes, which improves their quality of life by enabling parents to provide them more resources and opportunities. However, older parents could have many difficulties in giving birth and keeping up with their kids. For parents whose age gap with their children is significant, their enthusiasm and sympathy might not be the same as younger parents’. This means that a child might expect less physical and emotional support than if they were born to youthful parents. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is generally more disadvantageous to give birth at a later age, in spite of the reasons and advantages to support this choice by parents. The ideal time to have a family depends on each person's situation and preferences, but it shouldn't be left too late.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Students around the world are mostly required to show some respect toward their teachers. This cause some people prefer some equality between that relationship but there are also some people who reject that idea. This essay will discuss both the opinions and I personally support that students are encouraged to show their criticism and make comments. \r\n\r\nEncouraging students to think critically will not only enhance their understanding better but also can build up their personality to be brave in stating their opionion in public. Even though it seems impossible for these educators and educatee to be in the equal position in some cultures but it can benefit the students a lot. For example, it was found that rather than just listening the study material passively, high schooler will learn better when they are actively learning by having some discusing or even argue with their tutor regarding the subject. This equal relationship will make the students to be more courageous in stating their opinion during the class as they found their teachers as someone who can accept their opinions well. Therefore, changing the study method will create a better eduaction systems where the students are active learners. \r\n\r\nHigh school students in majority are showing more reserved behavior at class and this mostly caused by the teaching that been done by their culture. For example, mostly in Asian countries, class sessions are where teachers teaching student without being interrupted. They are expected to be quiet and showing a sign of criticism will mark them as disrespect sign towards the elder. However, this might cause the children to develop a coward personality where they are afraid to state their opinion. It is the best if this high schooler still able to give their opinion freely but is still learn on how to show some respect toward their tutors. \r\n\r\nin conclusion, for this high schoolers thinking critically can shapen their ways of thinking and therefore become an active learners but still showing some respect towards their teacher.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a challenging planet for humans to study. Thats why Venus is worthy pursuit depite its dangers it presents. Venus has a think atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide that blankets it. It is more challenging because of the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphere. Venus also has the hottest surface temperature of any other planet.\n\nVenus is a worthy planet despite the dangers of it is that it has a thick atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide that have even more challenging clouds of highly corrosive sulferic acid. Venus has conditions that are far more extreme thaan anything humans encounter on Earth. It has the hottest surface temperature of any othe planet in our solar system. Beyond all of that Venusian geology weather present additional impediments like valcanoes, earthquakes, and lightning strikes. Venus has the most Earth like features. It has a rocky surface and it has valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nIn conclution, Humans are still strivind to meet the challenges presented by Venus has no value. This is a couple of reasons why Venus is so worthy but dangerous. This is how the auther supports his idea of \"Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I years old mother sister working cleaning around house I kept asking can go get pizza every time I asked would reply if help us finish dinner go get pizza I didnt want wash windows clean room wash car So I waited playground back yard swinging going slide minutes got boring After thats I knew I would patient I ran hill river waded cold water I still bored I got river ran CAPS done yet I asked Were done house car yet washed answered I walk bike got helmet sitting bike seat The wind face nothing compared eating pizza somehow driving drive way entertaining cleaning I hop bicycle ran house taking two immediate lefts entering house I look clock said My family always dinner dad gets home work cooks dinner I rush see sister done yet Are done I asked rudely You could help want faster answers CAPS fine Ill help I grab hose spray dirt bird poop windows After minutes cleaning done left dad note said lets whole day I waitd hours sister finish end I finished job", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ever thought of a car that drives itself? Seems pretty crazy right? Its been shown in movies and televison and it seems pretty impossible. In reality, people are actually trying to make it happen, there has been proto types of cars that are mostly driveless and testing of many kinds. Whether it happens or not, theres a weighing question of is it a good idea? It is a bad idea, they should not make cars driveless because it cost a lot, may not even ever work, and its dangerous.\n\nMoney is a huge factor to this type of technology, can you imagine the cost of developing thousands and millions of cars that have such an advanced technology to be able to drive, brake, get to a destination all by itself? Its pretty expensive to even to make a proto type or test run these so called \"Diverless Cars\". If a car like such is created how would the world be changed? Not only would the car itself be expensive to create but theres more factors to just creating the cars, its how the cars themslef work. In the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author tells about some proto types or car similar to the \"Driverless car\" image. The authors gives an example about cars that uses sensors or radio signals that are telling the cars what to do. That means, the roads would have to give off certain signals that contribute to the car itself, the roads and lights would also have to have signals and sensors. It would cost tons of money to do things such as rebulid roads or lights so cars like these would properly worl.\n\nThe car that drives themself may never actually be a thing, there is so much to it. The cars may never truly be driveless, technology cannot do everything humans do. There is always going to be times an actual driver may need to come in. Things such as, traffic or crashes or roadwork and there is no way of telling if driverless cars may be able to adapt to that. Not only is adapting a problem but is our technology advanced enough to have driverless cars? We as a society are advanced in the technology area but is it advanced enough to develop cars that are able to know where to go or what to do just like humans are? Technology things do not think like humans, they don't think at all, they have to be programed a certain way and there is always surprises or certain situations that these cars would not be able to do it properly or safely.\n\nSafety. This is quite the biggest concern with a product such as a driverless car. How can you insure that these cars are 100% safe? The cars technology may run into a problem later on that it, itself is not advanced enough to know exactly what to do so it may cause a person danger. The whole car is made of technology and we can not rely on it, things happens, technology may not always work. There has to be certain signals or things such as a battery life, or the technology may just fail altogether. If someone was to be in a driveless car and the system in the car or the technology were to crash was stops the car from doing the same? If the technology messes up and the car doesn't know when to stop it could cause a crash. Technology can never be completely relied on, until it can, there will always be safety issues or concerns and thats enough not to make something that could be very dangerous to someones life.\n\nDriverless cars seem like a huge thing, people are trying to create this dream. People are taking steps to make cars that are so advanced they can drive themselves, but that shouldn't be a thing because of the cost, we are not that advanced in our lifetime, and its a patenually dangerous idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "venus is our twin planet and it has a variety of interesting festures. the author provides us with plenty information of how we could explore mars.\n\nalthough the conditions in venus are different\n\nand far more dangerous than the ones on earth there are some ways we could still study the amazing planet of venus. NASA alredy started these expeditions. so far they have failed due to the conditions of the planet, but as the author said there are some ways we could still study the planet. he gives us ideas and tells us that some of the ideas are alredy in progress. like the silicon carbide electronics have been tested and proven to able to ast up to a week in places like venus with high temperatures. a week could be enough for us to bring a smaple from venus where we could study in our labs. also the idea of bringing back old computers made out of gears is good too because they could be made in a way where they can stand the environment venus has because of its properties. also the fact that an old invention like these computers could hepl us this far into the future compared to when they were made is fascinating and should be given a try.\n\nthe planet that once could have been another \"earth\" is worht studying, it could answer a lot of questions and bring some ideas to our world. like the author said \"our travels on earth should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\" he gave us enough ideas of why we should explore this planet. it will be a challenge but nothing we can't solve.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face of Mars is a landform that looks just like a face. Even though it looks like a face, it has been proven that it is just a landform and if you zoom in on it, you can tell that it isnt manmade. There are landforms on Earth that look just like the face too.\n\nScientists have zoomed in on the picture and have proven that the face of Mars is just a Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. Butte's, or mesa's, are landforms common around the American West and are also on Mars. The face of Mars is just a really odd shaped butte and people have mistaken it for alien structures. The face also kind of looks like a butte called Middle Butte in Idaho. People have also said that the face looks about the same height as the Middle Butte in Idaho.\n\nThe people at NASA had the first pictures of the butte zoomed out enough that it looked like a face. The NASA camera that takes pictures of Mars is in a wierd position so it doesnt pass the face that much and when it does, its not very close so when they zoom in, the pixels are too big to see. When they actually got a good picture of the face, people started to relize that it was just a wierd landform. When they got a good picture, people probably stopped thinking that aliens made it and just ignored it.\n\nEven though scientists have proven that the face of Mars is just a landform, some people probably just think they are trying to cover it up. Landforms can have all kinds of shapes and the face of Mars just has a very unique shape. In conclusion, the face of Mars is just a odd shaped Butte.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These reasons author concluded story way The first reason story written way serious stright forward tone ending story quote riddle Makes reader think conclusion It would ended happened added something made think little normal conclusion The author ended story come back saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test different", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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