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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When you think about Venus ,do you think about Oceans or Mountains? With the new and the old technology they can figure just about anything out. Venus is considered Earths \"Twin\", but should it be\n\nVenus is know to be one of the more dangerous planets, but it should not. In the passage paragraph 4 it says \" Long ago, venus was probably covered largerly with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" This is showing that Venus hasnt always been bad, or dangerous becase it used to be just like Earth. Humans live on Earth so Humans could have lived on Venus, which makes it not dangerous.\n\nAnother reason Venus should not be considered dangerous is becase of the technology they can use to see if it is ok for people to be there. In the 1800s they used to use mechanical computers. This device could do calculations. In the passage in paragraph 7 it says \" These devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all.\" This is showing that technology can help people see if the planet is dangerous or not by using the power and flexible and quick power it has.\n\nIn conclusion Venus should not be considered dangerous. In todays time our technology has improved and its surface has goten to be mountains, valleys, and craters. All in all Earth and Venus are twins.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Chellege of Exploring Venus\n\nAs it mentions Venus is the second planet from our sun. Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to be examine more closely. In the article the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present the chellenging planet for humans to study Venus since it is one of the closest planet to Earth, therefore also Venus can be sometimes can be our neartest option for a planetary visit. Option that Venus has being of planetary option to visit.\n\nOne of the first reason why studying Venus can be worth it but dangerous at the sametime because Venus has been one of the closest planetary neighbour to Earth. In the article of \"The challenge of Exploring Venus.\" mentions that Venus is occasionally has the same denity and sizes like Earth. Although Venus can't be a good place to stay in for many hours. In the article it says \" Each previous mission unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more then a few hours, Maybe this issue explains why not a single speaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\" This connects to the article because its of how humans have send spacecraft on earth to Venus to see what things can they find in common to Earth. As the article mention more about the Venus it explains how humans send spacecraft to land mostly to see what Venus reacts most of the times. How also explains how it been more than three decades that no spacecraft has been send to Venus because high chance you won't survive since it has one the highest density.\n\nAnother explanations of why the author idea of studying Venus can be worth it but dangerous because Venus can be sometimes can be our nearest option for a planetary visit. In other words Venus has been referred to as Earth's \"twin\", because it may well once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system. In the article the it says \"The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options of making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive.\" In the article the author explains how people want to able to visit Venus to visit space to see all kinds of things. Therefore the option getting back safe to Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth which explains how Venus has some relate thing with Earth.\n\nIn my conclusion the article suggest that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present the chellenging planet for humans to study Venus. Since Venus is one of the closest planet as to Earth, therefore because Venus can be sometimes can be our neartest option for a planetary visit. Not only because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. But because many researchers out htere are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been observed that, The majority of thieves have a weak level of education. In fact, many people argued that the most effective method to diminish the crime rate is to educate those people in lockup in order to find a suitable work opportunity after their release. In my perspective, I completely agree with that opinion, since educating a new skill will help them to find a job because it is the most effective solution to earn money in the right way for criminals as well as, teaching will lose their time, as a result, they will spend time of thinking negatively .\r\n\r\nFirst of all, there could be a myriad of reasons why people argued that prison reskilling is beneficial for criminals, to begin with teaching a new skill in lockup may offer the criminals a good job after leaving it. since the person after release has an awful reputation and most ofcompanies will refuse to employ him unless, they guarantee he is good and well-qualified enough in that occupation, Thus, the individual will earn money in the right way as well as the criminal proportion will decrease. For instance, a study conducted by a USA University illustrated that around 90% of criminals returned to crimes as a result of, the money shortage after leaving lockup. So , the prison high authorities should obligate all criminals to teach a new skill. because it will help them in the future.\r\n\r\nOn the second hand, teaching a new craft and education in prison will rise the psychological spirits and morals of imprisoned, this is why, they will learn a new life strategy and how they can survive safely without damage Furthermore, it will help to develop their mental directions. in addition, they will occupy their time while working and learning. which will eliminate them from thinking with negative energy. For example, the person who learned new molars in prison and how to leave without hurting or damaging the surrounded, Thus, will reflect on his lifestyle. For that reason, it is necessary to focus on educating them in prison rather than them punishing.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, In my opinion, I totally agree with educating criminals in lockup because this is the most effective method to find a stunning work after releasing and, and this is due to reducing crimes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, most people have a huge intention to explore the story behind the accommodation they live in. This essay will explain the reason for this phenomenon and describe how the way public finds it out.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, people are looking for the background of the place where they stay due to the recent issues about the land conflicts. This is simply because some citizens are not clever enough to deal with the right area seller, which is sometimes a swindler; as a result, later problems such as building destruction might happen. That is why society starts to search for their house’s natural history. In addition, humans tend to be scared about the myths storey of any place, especially their own house; therefore, they choose to explore the fact behind their place and its surroundings to fulfil their curiosity. \r\n\r\nIn terms of researching history, one of the most common ways to do this is by asking the former residents about the actual past story about the building. They can help to share brief information whether the house is safe or not. Furthermore, we can check out the legality of the documents of the building or the estate we stay on to make sure there will be no controversy regarding the land in the future. These would help us to live peacefully without any doubt or fear.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some people recently have the ambition to find out the history of their house to prevent any problem in the future and live more peacefully. The method usually used for this is asking the previous habitant and checking the essential documents of the building and area.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today excited bounded line walls I wonder bring us looking cat dog I want oh definently this PERSON need patient tomorrow need share help clean tree mother says CAPS I went presents whines You know his father says CAPS arent good santa bring peanat shells gives sets CAPS alright Ill help seemed like many many hours later time go bed He many patient koew would presents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The prevalence of people searching for information about the history of the place where they are living is increasing. I believe there are several reasons and two main ways that help with research about it. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nThe major cause is probably the satisfaction of people’s general curiosity, especially about the origin of their house or building, because for roughly two-thirds of the day they stay at home, so it is understandable if they want to know deeply about it. For example, they may want to know when it was constructed, who the former owners were, or what kind of materials were used for contracting. Furthermore, all this information may assist them in preparing a renovation plan for the future, such as which part of the house or building they should examine or the cost of the remodelling. That can make them feel more secure about their accommodation's condition. Finally, knowing about the history of their house or building may make them feel more appreciative of what they have, and in another situation, if they want to sell it, they can pass the information to the next owner because the purchaser might want to know. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nTurning to the ways to research information, first from the former owner or the landlord. For instance, if they just rent the accommodation, they can ask directly from the landlord. If they brought this place, they should get in touch with the person who was the former owner if they can get the address of her or his. The second way is by going to the local cadastral office. In this place, there will be employees working there to support the information fully. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nTo summarize, the cause of this trend is primarily related to curiosity and the repair plan, and there are two ways to aid them: the landlord, the former owner, or the local cadastral office.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When it comes to deciding wheather or not driverless cars should be used is up to everybody's own opinion. It is a pretty nice idea thoguh, having cars tat can drive for you while you also payattention is a fantasic idea. For example, take from paragragh 2, on how we have been fasintated by driverless cars. There have been at least more then twenty or so movies that have that idea, look at the movie called \"I Robot\". The cars can actually drive itself, but when it can't do that or when the drive wants to drive it shuts off with a smooth transition from one to the other. In addition, having a car that can drive itself but also have the sensors that need a human touch is a great idea, it makes sure that the driver it paying full attention, but also gives the driver some lee-way room when on the road. In addition, it is great that some cars like the BMW's can drive up to 25 mph when the car is in a area where there could be road work or traffic jams.\n\nBut in contrast, paragragh 9 made perfect a statement when saying/asking who will be at fault if the car crashes. If the car has a technology problem, does that mean the manufacurer is to blame or if the car is switching to person driving and it glitches out who is to blame then. In addition, when driverless car start to make advances in the world, does that mean we will no longer need to get driver licences, no longer need to have back ground knowledge on how the roads work and how to operate them if the cars system doesn't work. Will we no longer need to have any background on how to drive and how to operate them. In consculsion, it is a great advancement in are socitiy today, to have driverless cars, but down in the long run it make not ne the advancement that everybody will want to have for the future gernerations to come.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people are wondering why more researchers are concerned about rising carbon emissions around the globe. Carbon emissions are gases that are released into the atmosphere by transportation and other types of industrial manufacturing. Lately, there has been a change evolving in different areas as supported by each source, that is moving toward \"[car- free cities]\". However, most citizens are also wondering what are the advantages of limiting their car usage, and how will it effect the life around their community; There have been ways of doing this as stated in these sources.\n\nIn source 1:\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars , by Elisabeth Rosenthal, it explains how in \"Vauban, Germany, the residents of this upscale community are suburban pioneers, going where few... [people] have gone before: they have given up their cars\" (paragraph 1).\n\nThe statistics show that \"[a]s a result, 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here\"[:] to limit car usage. As it seems economically and environmentally effiecient, people such as Heidrum Walter feel \"when I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" (paragraph 3). The people in this area have noticed that \" all of [their] development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change, said by David Goldberg, an official of Transportation for America, a fast-growing coalition of hundreds of groups in the United States...\" (paragraph 7).\n\nComporable to source 1, source 2:\n\nParis bans driving due to smog , by Robert Duffer, states that \"after days of near- record pollution, Paris [had] enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city\" (paragraph 10). People were \"ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22- euro fine ($31), (paragraph 11), and \"[a]lmost 4,000 drivers were fined, according to Reuters- an international news agency headquartered in London\" (paragraph 12). Most believed that it was a rivalry between Paris, France and \"Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world\" (paragraph 14).\n\nBecause of the tremendous fog, \"[d]elivery companies complained of lost revenue, while exceptions were made for plug- in cars, hybrids, and cars carrying [several] passengers. Also, [p]ublic transit was free of charge from Friday to Monday, according to the BBC (paragrpah 18).\n\nSource 3:\n\nCar- free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota , by Andrew Selsky, states that in Bogota, Colombia \"a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of Colombials hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car- free day...\" (paragraph 20).\n\nThey participated in this special occasion consecutively for three years, banning cars, but allowing taxi cabs, and buses for the \"Day Without Cars\" in the captial city; This promoted other transportation methods, while reducing smog output. Any people who violated this day were issued \" $25 fines\" (paragraph 21). Businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza said, \"[i]t's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution, as he rode a two- seat bicycle with his wife\" (paragraph 24). \"[This] day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota in the mid- 1990s\" (paragraph 27). \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city...\" (paragraph 28).\n\nSource 4:\n\nThe End of Car Culture , (another article) by Elisabeth Rosenthal, provides more information towards this evolving movement nationwide. Not only is change occuring in the previous countries described, but the United States has started to be part of the change. \"... [G]oals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions..., will get a fortuitous assist from an incipient shift in American behavior...\" (paragraph 29).\n\nNumerous researchers are contemplating \"a fundamental question: Has America passed peak driving?\" (paragraph 30). Over the years the United States of America has gained notoriety for \"its broad expanses and suburban ideals, [which has] long been one of the world's prime car cultures. Over the years, there has been an assembly line in Detroit, Michigan during the '40s- '60s and the \"Model T\" gave Americans the way to take a spin in \"Mustang Sally\" during the \"Midnight Hour\", while listening to Wilson Pickett (paragraph 31).\n\nOverall, most countries including America, have seen changes in their economy. [T]he number of miles driven in 2005 dropped...\" and the unemployed weren't going to work anyway, [b]ut by many measures the decrease in driving preceded the downturn and appears to be persisting now that recovery is under way\" (paragraph 32). Rosenthal states that there was a recession, and that the unemployed weren't working, but regardless, the people that were working still couldn't dodge the recession, which ultimately impacted not only the Automotive Industry, but everything else. Car companies like Ford and Mercedes rebranded their businesses (around the world, as it is Ford is an American car and Mercedes is a German car) (paragraph 32).\n\n\"Many sociologists believe it will- it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plants\" (paragraph 34). One thing that most of these people can agree on is that [d]ifferent things are converging which suggest that we are witnessing a long- term cultural shift...\" (paragraph 35). All of this information can help lead citizens to new cures for shifting this change on the right universal pathway to preserving the atmosphere, ridding us of Global Warming and Greenhouse gas effects.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter shortest distance two people I think laughter really important part kind relationship When people laugh get understand better usually people think cool person say something funny laugh say funny stuff It s funner people laughing make laugh There many times throughout life many problems solved telling joke saying something funny even remembering fun memories past I many I love course like friendship ve little fights us I remember one time I went hang mall Two came huge conflict something really weird later became argument Of course always little conflicts time I guess two girls serious mad My friend I looking nt know friend kind scared might hurt I told guys Do nt like looked stopped So started walk I remembered something funny crazy two girls us camp week happened camp I remember saying going CAPS For whole life s would nt forget much fun I started laugh remembering camp looked like I m weird something So I reminded fun stuff looked started laugh really hard Because conflict something little camp forgotten After started talk forgot conflict Sometimes I remind conflict laugh say We dumb make conflict laugh Laughter shortest distance two people I think laughter really imported friendship I think problem solved saying funny memories laugh reminding someone thing forgotten", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The story \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\"\n\nis a story that talks about how many astronauts has visit Venus in about 3 decades. It tells us about how scientists are trying to study on how Venus acts on a human landing on it. It tell us about how Venus tempertures ar eover 800 degrees and 97% of the atmosphere is carbon dioxide and how the pressure os 90 time greater than what we experince in earth. The story tells us how, the last 3 decades an astronauts landed in Venus but he only survived a few hours because it says that Venus could melt any type or melt, it can melt a whole submarine.It explains how the scienctist said that Venus is almost like earth and people might of live there until it was all gone and scienctists believe that Venus could or been a world that was living until it ended or what ever happen to it.Venus also has weather present such as erupting volcanoes, powerful earhquakes, and frequent lighting strikes.People ask saying, why are scientists even discussing further vistis to its surface. Astronomers are fascianted by Venus because it may well once have been the most earth like planet.\n\nNASA is also interested in sending people to venus to study the lanet venus. Venus has a 170 degreews fahrenheit, it would be plentiful, and radiation, not easy condiotions, but well be survivable for humans.In paragraph 7 it says that \" NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus.\" NASA is interested to see how is venus and how it acts. So they are going to use old technology called mechanical computers because those comnputers are used by gears and levers and it enormously pwoerful, flexible, and quick, also more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. They are challenging there self to visit venus and insight to be gained on the planet itself. In paragraph 8 tell us how \"Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\" it tells us about how we should be scared eveytime we travel or should be too dangerous, just expands to meet to the end of the place we are trying to go to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Currently, a great number of people want to reach their goals rapidly and instantly. From my point of view, this phenomenon is mainly affected by the technology advancement and this statement has both positive and negative aspects which I will discuss in this essay.\n\nOn the one hand, due to technological development,people are able to do approximately every type of work or exercise within a few minutes and the impact of smartphones is undeniable. Consequently, the ajority of people are using smartphones or laptops in order to do everyday tasks which phenomenon has made people’s life easier and flexible. For example, people in the past had to go to the theatre in order to buy tickets, however, nowadays it could be done online and it saves a huge amount of time. Thus, currently,people want to get things done instantly.\n\nTurning to the phenomenon of doing everything instantly, it is obvious that due to the evelopment of the technology people want to reach their goals rapidly. Therefore, in some cases,it is a positive development because people try everything to reach their goals and doing it faster is very beneficial. However, sometimes people can do something rapidly with not analyzing the quality of their work that’s why sometimes things done instantly can have bad effects.\n\nTo conclude, if the present generation wants to get everything done instantly, that is because they grew up using internet technology. While this trend is largely positive, in my opinion, over dependence on anything is bad.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "World war ll was hard on all of use. But with this organization is here to help you. You should really join use and help other lives that are in need of help such as humans and animals.\n\nYou should join this organization becuase you get ti travel to a lot of places and see new things. You could see the Eifell tower,go to greece,and other couintries too. Helping others is a great thing to do that makes you and the person you are helping happier. Joining UNRRA will teach you to care for others,be curtious,and to not always focuse on your self. I think that joining use willl make you happy. But there is always hard work to everything .If you love animals this would be good for you too becuase we save animals too and clean them and queck them constintly. There is also fun games such as table tennis,fencing,boxing,reading,whittiling,and games so time will pass faster.\n\nI think that if you jion this organization yu will become happier and less selfish. You will become a harder worker and be more kind to people. This is why you should join the UNRRA.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's point of view convincing people to participate in the seagoin. In the passage it states that you can make nine trips morethan the other seagoing cowboy. In the passage it also states that they had benfits of seeing Europe and China. This kind of proves how Luke's trying to convince.\n\nAnother reason that luke trying to convince you. In the passge it states that Luke torned an excavated castle in crete and marveled at the panama canal on his way to china. Another detail from the passage is that Katie farm as a boy had prepare Luke for hard work but not for the dangers at sea. This also can of proves how Luke trying to convince.\n\nLuke's point of view is first person beacuse he talks about how he got into seagoing cowboys .In the passsage it states that he had bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. Next ,It states that a small strip of metal along the edge stopped his slide ,keep", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When biker listened old folks confidence He biked first town like ghost town A town town soon see anything No cars buildings anything He getting sad dehydrated The old men swore town coming put trust confidence He saw building coming old wore factory He thought let He sure going die right right He saw siga fish comp He overjoyed The place real He thought savior The settings effect cyclist tremendously", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over dad brother I went point It really hot didnt care really wanted ride millennium force We found ride first looked line huge It shaked almost around whole ride twice got end line sat blazing hot sun half hour till found cover selves tent put cool line So waited longer longer till brother started flip yelling screaming top lungs I cant wait longer went My dad told wait line sprinted So I waited hour finnaly time get ride dad brother l decided wait line going front ride When l got still werent well ride took werent best ride ever", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is an undeniable fact that, newspapers are an important source for reporting all the happening in the world. In this situation, they have influenced all the individuals in a living society. Sometimes, it effect created by these. Newspapers are positive while in some situation they are negative.\r\n\r\nThe major reason is that newspapers have been the largest news of information day today happening in the world. In fact it can be used as a guide to hike preventive actions needed. For example, during the time of covid pandemic. This example points out that, related to covid outreach treatment and preventive measures is getting published daily in the newspaper. Therefore, newspaper is the source of information over the globe.\r\n\r\nThe another major reason is that people get jobs through the newspaper. Infant, the individual know about the number of job vacancies available. For example, many people employed through adverse in Newspaper. Example point out that students can get know about jobs and different scholarship schemes available for them. Therefore, it is major source for people to get the jobs. On the other hand, other argue that newspaper can give false information. Infact, they keep the politicians as there major headline. For example, they take money from the politicians and give their false information as their headlines. Therefore, it can be a negative impact on newspaper.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, newspapers are good source getting in formation. I agreeing that it is positie impact to the humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke had graduated college and had two part time jobs at the grociery store and bank when his friend asked him to go to Europe he said yes and later on the UNRRA hired seagoing cowboys to take care of all the animals so Luke and Don signed up. before Luke got to Europe he turned eighteen and while he was in some cities he did some sight seeing. When it was a stormy night he was finishing up with the captain he went down a slippery ladder and fell on his backside and started to slide,but a piece of metal prevented him from going overboard and he coudn't do his job for a while because of his broken ribs so he played some games like tennis to occupi him and later on after he healed he lead his family to host a number of international students and exchange students for many years. He had to do many things like feed the animals and move the hay and oats,but helping at his Aunt Katie's farm helped,but it didn't prepare him for the dangers of the sea. He had to go over the Atlantic Ocean sixteen times and went over the Pacific Ocean two times to help people from World War two. IN 1945 they received orders to go to New Orleans they arrived in August the 14th. after getting their seaman's papers they boarded the SS Charles and the W.Wooster headed for Greece with 335 horses and enough hay and oats to feed them. The cattle boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small town boy so taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water Luke toured a castle in Crete and marveled the Panama Canal on his way to China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special. On the second trip Luke was a watchman checking on the animals every hour. Luke found time to have fun while his ribs were cracked especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys played baseball and volleyball and other games in the empty holds where the animals used to be. They also had table tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling helped pass the time. But being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke. It opened up the world to him. I'm grateful for the opportunity it made him more aware of people in countries and their needs and that awareness stayed with him.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a community, people can work together in order to reach a good quality of life. Many people think that young people’s commitment can give benefits to both parties.\r\n\r\nIn this essay, I will explain the impact of students’ collaboration with the community.\r\n\r\nThrow community work, youngsters have the opportunity to socialize with their peers and learn the work engagement. This kind of job allows young people to meet each other in extra-school time, spend time with friends and build relationships. Furthermore, students face for the first time the work world, indeed, having a commitment in free time teaches the importance of time, respect, and organization. A two-hour job in the afternoon cleaning the street can raise a sense of awareness toward the environment, and, even the sense of organization to have time to spend in favor of leisure things.\r\n\r\nWith respect to the community, the engagement of youngsters has only benefits. Firstly, activities such as garbage removal from the street, have an impact on the environment and on the wellness of the community. The people’s life quality could be increasing, thus, living in a respectful place allows the younger to grow up in a safe and healthy way. In addition, the ideas of the young generation can really be the difference. The organization of an event, festival, or concert could bring to the community more income to destinate to other initiatives.\r\n\r\nIs worthwhile to enhance the skills for the community to the community.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly believe that the commitment of students to the job community is extremely important on both sides. Engagement in this reality could really raise the sense of respect and the importance of others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did know computers number selling electronic device world I think computers making soceity smarter inteligent place Also computers help old time friends family keep touch Finnaly I think helping society computers teach great handeye coordination Studies shown people growing computers home high paying job Computers intelligent pieces equipment know use computer likley hae high paying carreer Also mostly every job doctor police officer casheer store involve computers go jobs must know work computer This one many reasons I think computers benifit soceity Secondly I think price technology benifits soceity keep family friends workers touch Have ever time think back wish could see old high school friends even family living Far away computers one popular ways new websites like twitter even old email website people keeping touch world Another way computers help old time friends keep touch new video camera computer family friends workers actually see different parts world A simple message though one websites make someones day could even make Finnaly I think computers benifit soceity teach hand eye coordination life skills How think people shoot gun quickly think baseball player swing perfect time All things revolve around handeye coordination best learned computers Also people save lives type hurricane tornado anything know work computer many people get injured die These three many reasons I think computers benifit soceity So think twice negative comments people say computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The key long road trip patient This important actuly makes trip go faster Here story I really great patient loading threehour drive water park Everyone ready go except course parents Who went inside check everything got directions call unlce see ready time us kids sitting car waiting Of course brother getting antey could nt stop moving around finaly could nt take anymore That s exclaimed I m going get least patient us Even two little sisters longer patience Which tells lot Tyler comes minutes later tells us coming WRONG They nt come another minutes brother mad CAPS took long asked CAPS make sure uncle ready leave dad awnsered As soon got going everyone fell asleep accept dad driving So one really much At least patient except brother still like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "He greatfull live even racism still found ways fun enjoy life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the dawning age of technology upon the rapidly advancing human race, the replacement of a human with a technological innovation has become nearly commonplace. The essence of evolution has been proven to be highly centralized around the concept of making things easier. This innovation does exactly that, but it is questionable as to whether or not it is meeting all of the criteria more sufficiently than a human would. Although computers have reached a point of heavy advancement, no machine could take into account the myriad of variables that find themselves associated with human behavior, and for that reason, they should not be relied upon in an educational environment.\n\nFirstly, it is important to define the problem and its components in this specific context. An emotion is, in its most basic form, an expression of a reaction to a stimulus. The problem lies not within the detection of emotions, but within the unlimited possibilities of these stimuli. Dr. Eckman separated these reactions into the six categories of \"happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness,\" but he cannot possibly classify all of the derivatives of these reactions. In an educational environment, it is extremely important for a teacher to always understand the situation. Dr. Huang's only claim on this topic is that \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" but that does not even take into account all of the emotions that a student could display, let alone all of the stimuli that could be causing it. A student could be confused or bored simply because the material is going over their head, or perhaps their minds are convoluted as a result of mourning over the loss of a loved one. The software is programmed to analyze the \"action units\" made by muscular movement, but that muscular movement is simply a reaction to something that cannot be accurately predicted or observed, at least not merely through a countenance. Perhaps this computer can accurately collect data on basic emotion, but it is not going to know what to do with the data it collects if it cannot detect specifically what is causing a specific, undesirable result.\n\nSecondly, it is important to consider the limitations of both humans and machines in this context, and weigh the outcomes accordingly. The author of the article states in the fifth paragraph that \"we humans perform this same impressive 'calculation' every day.\" Such is proven to be true, and so the encouragement for a device to do it for us is asinine. Machines are made for efficiency, and so this concept must be evaluated on the change in efficiency. Clearly, based on the afore point on the impossibility of detection of stimuli, there is a limit to the efficiency of the machine with which the limit to the human efficiency must be compared. In order to solve the blockade between the sender and recipient, the recipient must ascertain to the sender that no harm is done in yielding more information, and the sender must, in turn, yield more information. Human interpersonal exchange executes this procedure perfectly, but based on the article alone, Huang's software cannot serve as a sufficient sender, nor a sufficient recipient, for it can neither ask for more information nor interpret information that it gets. A teacher can make the same observational interpretation by reading their students' faces, but the difference is that a teacher can ask what is troubling them and offer support, for it is the stimulus that is causing the problem to arise, for without a stimulus, there is no physical or emotional reaction. \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" admits Dr. Huang. Therefore, this emotional communication should not be treated as something so formulaic; as something that is easily decipherable by anything simpler than the infinitely diverse and complex human brain.\n\nDr. Huang's creation is undoubtedly impressive, and will serve an effective purpose somewhere in the world, but that purpose does not reside in an academic environment. Its properties are accurate, but it lacks the psychological ability to help a student, or a person in general, tackle a problem in the way that it is needed to be handled. This software may be able to accurately observe for humans, but until it can accurately think for them, and communicate for them, and resolve for them, it is the job of none other than the human to make sure that something is being done about any problems that they encounter. Humans are not algorithmic creatures, and no algorithmic software is ever going to provide them with the emotional nor psychological support that they need in order for them to move forward.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I think Computers bad effect people three reasons One really hurt eyes two safe little kids house Finaully three never see family friends computer The first reason computers bad effect people really hurt eyes If always stareing computer screen time go blind And bad eyes get serious head injures hurting eyes The second reason computers bad affects people safe little kids home Like watching adult movie little kids arent aged enough see bad effect And bad effect people little kid house always probaly hear something really really kid like music kid house The reason computers bad effects people always computer never see family always computers miss And never never see nt rent computers look And keep little kid house And last get computer go see family friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez certain mood created This mood mix many things Love generosity greatfulness The Love feeling comes bond friends family To family community friends They would let people stay house untill got back feet often would many people join dinner The feeling generosity comes selflessness parents kids friends family They would kind things They even immigrated Cuba better life children The sence greatfulness friends family since parents generous people greatful author The author says I never forget parents turned simple house home The mood memoir created people family live go", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of Facial Action Coding system and the technology to read the students emotions is quite frankly valuable because it can produce special neeeds to the objective encounter. Imagine being able to detect exactly how others are feeling even when they are hiding their emotions inside. Leanardo da Vinci's Reanaissance painting computer software can recognize hidden emotions. They can caculate emotions like math homwork. In the text i states, \"Computers construct a pure 3-D printed model of the whole human face like the six basic emotions: happiness,suprise,anger,disgust,fear and sadness weighing in on diffrent units in the facial expressions of others. In the text it also states that, \"In fact we humans can detect emotions every single day by simply looking at our friends, family etc.\n\nSay for instance that that your watching a YouTube video right, If you are currently smiling while watching the video then your good it pops up a nice calm smily like ad. And say for Instance your watching a YouTube video while frowning and tensing up, its a likely chance for a mean ad to come up. In the text it states, \"There are these muscles called orbicularis ocuil puris palpabraeus make crow's feet around your eyes. Also According to Facial Feedback Theory Of Emotions, moving ur facial muscles can produce emotions indeedly and fragily.\n\nFinally, I am with the argument that this technology is vaulable because it includes specific, nice and comfortable details that influence my interest.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many reasons you should join the \"Seagoing Cowboys Program\". This program is for people that go out to sea's and gets anything afloat on the sea after place's are in ruins and help clean the place up. This program is very improtant. Here are some examples why you should join.\n\nOne reason why you should join the \"Seagoing Cowboys Program\" is because, not only them but, you could be helping people affected in world war 2. In paragraph 2 it talks about how world war 2 left europe in ruins and the UNRRA need people's help to clean the place up and go out to sea's to get cows or anything that is afloat in the sea. The second reason you should join the \"Seagoing Cowboys Program\" is because you get to have adventure's and go to different countries you have never been to! In paragraph 5 it says\"Besides helping people, I had the benefit of seeing Europe and China.\" It could be a once in a lifetime thing! The third reason you should join this program is because not only do you work all the time, you get to play games with your friends like volleyball and tennis, and much more! In paragraph 8 it says \"The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis turnaments, fencing, boxing,reading,whitting,and games also help pass the time.\" So, over the waiting time to get to the place you are heading you get to have fun.\n\nThe \"Seagoing Cowboys Program\" can be very fun and helpful. Those can be some examples why you would want to join. The \"Seagoing Cowboys Program\" is a very important program you could be helping a country in need of help.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is commonly held that society can operate perfectly by a set of rules. It means that providing total freedom to people undoubtedly results in chaos with the further possibility of total collapse. I strongly agree with this point of view as I am in the opinion that rules play a significant role in creating a stable society. In this essay, this idea will be discussed in detail.\nBasically, a set of rules can be helpful to achieve productive results in such essential areas as medicine and construction. For example, it is necessary to develop common procedures of operations in surgery or traffic rules for public transport. Unless there are not standardized, it might cause a lot of deaths or at least injuries. Constructing also should be based on common processes because comfort and safe accommodation is a necessity for many people. Although there are people who consider rules and laws limiting and imposing, it can be argued that they are critical in the organization of humanity.\nLaws are not obstacles on the way to people's freedom because they are established to regulate formal relationships when it is difficult to find a compromise informally. Moreover, they are vitally important when people face crime and violence. Without any system of justice solving crimes becomes more challenging. All criminal accidents tend to be out of control and spread around the world immediately. Shoplifting, robbery, and even disastrous wars can plunge our world into darkness. This way humanity might face total chaos where morals values and behavioral patterns are neglected. In this context, the word ‘society’ risks becoming totally meaningless, as its main definition is a 'group of people with common traditions and rules.'\nFrom the arguments presented above, one may conclude that any society needs standards, laws, or even moral principles. They form a foundation for safety, a good level of medicine, and science that allows to create a strong society and manage any difficulties or threats that may disturb people’s well-being.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story cyclist affect many features desert The main feature heat I traveling high deserts California June Hes also running low water The water bottles contained tantalizing sips Hes faced extrem heat lack water Hes tired long way go So far towns deserted Finally reaches bait shop water refills water promised stick map future", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nature affect everyone even dont think Expecially cyclist traveling anywhere everywhere In Do exceed Posted Speed Limit Joe Kurmaskie perfect example settings laffect people like cyclist When youre riding bike actually cross country transportation know youre going The cyclist story decided take advice older fellows ends going wrong route cyclist town water werent towns begin anymore atleast If dont water like guy hills could kill And case know example l gathered pebbles struck mouth Id read sucking stones help take mind thrist This guy knew little bit survival tips If hed gone way without standing yo thrist hills probably would kind stroke That way setting could harm", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cutting-edge technology has been adopted more and more in manufacturing currently. Experts assume that robots can replace humans to do some current jobs. In my opinion, there will be advantages and disadvantages to using this new kind of technology. \r\n\r\nConcerning positive aspects, robots can take over good production much more quickly and accurately than workers. Thus, it can help not only enhance labour productivity but also be more economical and profitable. In addition, robots can do some dangerous tasks instead of humans, for example, robots can take over expedition jobs or rescue people. Besides, they can do manual jobs that people are much bored doing such as delivering jobs or collecting trash, even doing housework. \r\n\r\nIn contrast, there will be some disadvantages to using robots. First, it can damage our vulnerable environment. Because robots can consume huge electricity for operation. However, fossil fuels are used to produce electricity. On the other hand, the more fossil fuels are used, the more adverse influence on the environment. Second, the unemployment rate will increase among people with low income and low-level education. Finally, due to heavy dependence on technology, robots demand costly repair and maintenance expenses in order to prevent robots from breaking down. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, the application of robots in production will bring enormous benefits. Besides, it will be concerned about their negative impacts, especially their adverse effect on our environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "one time friends chad justin ding dong ditched old man reason would walk house everyday would turn sprinkler annoying alarm thing like nine ten night walked house banged door ran funny cuz got back running went friend taylors house sittting garage basking glory accomplished ten seconds later heard banging garage door first kinda startled ran taylors room thats happend funniest shit ever old mad started scearming banging door yelled come boys afraind crack laughter well totally knew went front door started banging waking taylors mom wel ended going talking guy said called cops cause said happened time denied us totally couldnt help laugh ugly face seriously looked like turtle crossed eighty year old rapest liver spots face terrible grey combover wasnt fooling anyone time cops showed guy long gone told cop senile didnt know hell talking got scotfree funny awesome", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The prospect of all jobs being performed by artificially intelligent robots is a topic of ongoing debate. While technological advancements have undeniably transformed various industries, leading to increased automation, it is crucial to consider both the potential benefits and drawbacks of such a scenario.\r\n\r\nOn the positive side, the integration of artificial intelligence (AI) and robotics in the workforce has the potential to enhance efficiency and productivity. For example, Tasks that are routine and repetitive could be delegated to machines, allowing human workers to focus on more complex and creative aspects of their jobs. For this reason, AI technologies could contribute to the development of new industries, creating novel employment opportunities that cater to the evolving needs of society.\r\n\r\nHowever, it is essential to acknowledge the challenges associated with widespread automation. The displacement of certain jobs due to the adoption of AI could lead to unemployment and economic inequality. For instance, concerns about job loss may generate resistance to technological advancements, hindering the smooth integration of AI into various sectors. Therefore, striking a balance between embracing innovation and addressing the social and economic consequences is imperative.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the idea that all jobs will eventually be taken over by artificially intelligent robots is a complex and multifaceted issue. While the potential benefits are evident in terms of efficiency and new job opportunities, careful consideration must be given to the societal impact, including potential job displacement and the need for upskilling the workforce. Striking a balance between technological progress and social responsibility is key to navigating the future world of work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I read the article \" Unmasking the Face on Mars.\" This article was about what looked like an outline of a face on Mars. Some people still believe that this is an actual face but others ,like me, believe that this is not a face. Here are a couple reasons why I think this is just a rock formation.\n\nI believe that this is just a rock formation because I think that a big rock or meteor hit it and left an imprint on it that happens to look like a face. I do not think that there was ancient civilization on Mars either.\n\nI think that overall, this was an interesting arguement. I do not think that it will ever be prooved that it was an ancient face or it wasn't and something just hit the planet. I would like to learn more about this arguement and I hope others will to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I can say that i am for this driverless car. I think it's actually a pretty good idea. Alot of technology now, is so much more advanced. Just imagine in 2020 how the technology will be,totally more advanced! They have already created a \"driverless car\", but it's just not smart enough. Toyota Prius put a video camera mounted on the rearview mirror. Also a GPS reciever, four automotive radar sensors, and an inertial motion sensor.\n\nThere sure is alot of positive and negative things about this \"driverless car\". But I sure can see alot of postive things about it. In the passage its says Sergey Brin's cars would use half the fuel than today. We would save so much more fuel with these types of cars! Which fuel has been very expensive over the past couple of years,so it could actually really help alot with these cars. I think it should atleast be legal to test drive a driverless car. How could you know it actually works until you actually try it.\n\nSo yes, I do think this project of driverless cars is a good idea. It could really change the world alot. And I think this world needs somthing new! But like it says in the passage we are growing close to the destination of this car. Hopefully more states agree to this as soon as the car is proven reliably safe!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the technology to read peoples emotions could back fire as well as help people. Many times people want to keep their emotions a secret to keep from concequences, or maybe they just don't want to talk about a certain topic just yet or at all. These machines could be like the next lie detectors if perfected and approved with more facial detections in the muscles to where only the slightest huge twitch of anger or fear would set it off, meaning less inaccurate sentences and more of the right people in jail. Another positive thing would be early school use, to where if the children got in trouble it would begin to sulpt that lying is useless and should just tell the truth straight forwardly. Many times this machine could be used for good purposes rather it's on the youth or older people, this could help out with many situations of the cruelest things in todays world. And with that it would be amazing and usefull tool to use in the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist I talking exceed posted speed limit How speed limit says Never accept travel advice collection oldtimers havent left confines porches since Carter office They trying say say going mesem peoples travel work make right choice right thing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The solar system has many interesting planets and those planets have many interesting landmarks. The Face on Mars just happens to be one of them. The face was found in a region of Mars called Cydonia. I feel as though it is a coincedence that a natural landmark on our neighborring planet looks like a human face. Many people say that The Face on Mars is just a legend, but we have scientifical proof of a face on Mars. The Face on Mars isn't an alien creation, but it is a natural landmark.\n\nThe Face on Mars is a natural landmark. It's a natural landmark because not only has it been there for a long time, but over the years we have found that it is a natural landform not an alien monument(JPL website). Many Hollywood movies have used the term \"that face on Mars,\" but many people think that the face is evidence of life on Mars. Some scientists have compared the face to landmarks in the USA called buttes or a mesa. Many people also say that the face resembles an Egyptian Pharoah.\n\nOn the other hand, some people specifically NASA has used The Face on Mars as a way to show that some things are important for taxpayers to see. Like I mentioned before Hollywood has made many big selling movies about The Face on Mars. Also, many books and magazines have used The Face as a headliner. Some NASA defenders has said that they wish there was some sort of an ancient civilization on Mars to use as a motive.\n\nThe Face on Mars is a cool natural landmark. It was located in Cydonia an area of Mars. The Face isn't a legend at all. There is real scientific proof of a face. The Face on Mars isn't a hoax either. Many people think that it is a legend and a hoax, but it is a real natural landmark. The Face on Mars is not an alien creation, but it is a natural landmark. It deserves some attention.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think this Facial Action Coding System would be very helpful in classroom. Since it can accurately read emotions, I think it will be able to benefit students. I thinks the use of this in a classroom is very valuable in a class room.\n\nI'm for the value of using this technology for reading students' emotional expresseion. In paragraph 6, it saids that \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instuctor. \" If the computer could do that, I think many students would be able to understand lesson and effectively learn more. Since the computer would be modifying the lesson to help you, it would be a lot easier to learn than only being taught one way. I also think that if classrooms had this\n\nstudents will be able to comprehend what they have been taught and do well on test.\n\nIn conclusion, I think that this would a very positive outcome if implemented in the school systems. It would probably help improve many grades and students will have an easy time learning. If FACS (Facial Action Coding System) ever becomes official, it should be introduce to school systems. That is why I think this technology would be valuable in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "NASA has discovered a shape on Mars that appeared to look like a human face. Although some scientists believed the face was an alien artifact. Everyone was not satisfied. Some scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa , which was common enough around Cydonia , that only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh . Authors reasoned it woukd be a good way to emgage the public and attract attention to Mars.\n\nTwenty five years ago NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling Mars snapping photos of possible landing sites foe its sister ship Viking 2. Soon when it spotted a shadowy likeness of a human face. Scientists called the enormous head that was nearly two mlies from\n\nend to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. Some scientists figured it was just another\n\nMartian mesa that was common enough around Cydonia, only this one unusual shadow that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. Soon days later NASA unveiled the image foe all to see , and they caption noted a \"Huge rock information\" , that resembled a human head that was formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes , a nose , and a mouth.\n\nEveryone was not satisfied by the information given. In paragraph eight sentence two it says , \"The face on Mars was located at a 41 degree nort martian latitude where it was in April '98 . This was a cloudy year for the Red Planet. The camera on board on MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face. Perhaps they said skeptics , alien markings were hidden by haze.\n\nScientists soon discovered what the picture showed was actually was the Martian equivalent of butte or mesa. Butte and mesa were landforms coomon around the American west. In paragraph tweleve Garvin says \" It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. This lava dome takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\n\nIn conclusion , scientist beleived the face on Mars was an alien artifact. Some , scientist beleived it was just another Martian mesa. Everyone was not satisfied at first . Come to find out the picture was actually a Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author suggests this because like indicated in the passage that it's a worthy pusuit depite the dangers because the planet Venus it's more like an earth-like planet yet so far from all other planets. But despite the dangers that the author infers that the temperature averages up to 800 degrees Fareheit on the planet which would be very dangerous for humans. In paragraph 4 it indicates the worthy pusuit \"Astonomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered laregely with oceans, and could have supported various forms of life.\" \"This indicates some of the worthy pursuits of studying Venus. In paragraph 3 it indicates the dangers \"On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Farhenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" This incates some danger of why it's not safe to live in. This quote from paragraph 5 inicates both reasons \" Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" This last quote indicates both the worthy pusuit and the dangers it presents. This is why the author suggests studying Venus is both a worthy pusuit and despite the danger it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author created memoir grateful happy The author values relationships grateful family He says Growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative Quite contrary neighborhood made mostly spanish cuban Italian immigrants time overt racism norm segregation prevailed In words saying lucky family Being lucky also synonym grateful meaning mood memoir grateful He also said family kept open door open arms showing would give people showing knew others less grateful Mood means tone feeling mood grateful happy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Compare to the previous years, many individuals now prepare to have kids in their late age. The reason is that they believe that they ought to be financially buoyant before having kids. Despite the fact, the gain of this trend is that they already have the resources to care for them, but this development also come with drawbacks that the kids might still be young when their parent retired as well as the mother having complication during child birth. In my opinion, the setbacks are more than the benefit it may have. \n\nThe reason is that most individuals consider their financial capacity. In fact, the people believe that they must be financially buoyant before considering to start having kids compared to the previous years were some individuals never think of their status before having them. Take for instance, a person who is earning fifty thousand would never give birth to children, because he is not capable to fend for them properly. Hence, individuals ought to acquire more fund to cater for them. \n\nOne major benefit is that the individuals have all the resources and time to care for the kids. This is because the young stars would never lack funds as well as good education because their parents have already worked for it. Take for example, a person that has already worked for money in his early years before having kids would have all what it takes to care for them. As a result of this his child would benefit from it rather than the parents that do not acquire resources before giving birth to them.\n\nThe setback of this trend is that the pupils might still be young while their parents are already at their advanced age. In fact, they may still be schooling at the time when their parents are old, because their parents may not have the strength and the capacity to cater for them anymore. To illustrate, if a seventy year old man has a son of twenty years old in the higher institution, his father might not have the opportunity to further sponsor his education. In addition, parents may not be able to eat the fruit of their labour due to the child's age.\n\nIn conclusion, the reason for this development is that individuals put consideration on their prosperity. Although there are benefits to this trend, but the demerits are more than the gain because parents might not have the opportunity to finish what they have started such as sponsoring their education and also has the chance to acquire the gain of parenting from them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"What to do to enhance the health level of the public?\" This question has been a major concern for many. While certain individuals might think that the most effective way to tackle this problem is to increase the number of sports facilities, I generally tend to believe that more efforts should be made.\r\n\r\nSome people believe the increase in facilities would surely lead to an amelioration in general health standards. Principally they opine that the reason for lack of exercise is because of the unavailability of sports apparatus in their neighbourhood, though people could find a way to exercise without equipment. Moreover, the solution has another vital limitation as it might only be attractive to those who are fit and leading a healthy lifestyle, not those who most need it, those who are not motivated to do sport would not be motivated by the opening of a new gym, as the lack of exercise facilities is mostly just one more excuse, after the opening, they'll just make up another story.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are other better measures to increase the general health standards of society. Firstly advertisements would be incredibly efficient to encourage people to acquire a healthy lifestyle, advertisements could be placed ubiquitously encouraging us from time to time. But seen from another point of view education has even more fruitful results, early school education regarding this subject could be essential in the formation of a healthy lifestyle and habits in the future, if this was done beforehand the general health standard would have risen significantly. Meanwhile, a rising tax on alcohol or food with high fat, high sugar or high calories could add points to improve public health.\r\n\r\nTo conclude just focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach, it would be more rewarding if society focused widely on various methods, then the possibility of succeeding would certainly be greater.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because Venus is closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. This planet has many dangers that humans are harm from. Scientists are discusing further visits to its surface because they are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\n\nNASA has one compelling idea for sending humans to study humans. The possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface would allow scientists to float above the fray. This means flying across the planet with a bimb-like vehicle.\n\nNASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted three weeks in such conditions.\n\nStudying Venus is a worthy pursuit because we can have life in a different planet other than just Earth. Studying Venus will help us examine the thier circumstances and find a way to live in a different planet. This is why studying Venus is a worthy pursuit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. The new software has been developed in accuracy of perceiving the emotions of people. The system has promising applications for many different industries. With this new software a computer in class could make a student focus more on their school work throughout the day. School lessons could change dramatically and get children more interested in their work.\n\nFirst of all, the Facial Action Coding System could be very promising to many schools. Throughout class children would understand the subjects being tought and be less confused. Although, some people may think that the new system would just create more drama and that some computers won't be able to handle the software. However, kids should have the chance to be more concentraited and like what they are learning. The software could help in extracaricular activites at school also. Some schools have theater classes and clubs and the software could help. In the article, paragraph nine, the author states, \"A renowned drama coach... had his actors carfully reproduce smailing and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage.¨ This shows that the software could help throughout school systems.\n\nThe system has been shown to calculate peoples emotions and how they are feeling at that moment. Even people that show ¨fake\" smiles can be proven to made happier just by flexing the muscles in their face. The software could help children through classes where they have to visualy analys facial moments or vedio imagery. Although, people preform the calculation of figuring out how people feel everyday. The system would be helpful if a teacher could tell if a math problem was confusing a student or if the teacher needs to ajust their teaching plan to make it more interesting for students. In the article, paraghraph five, the author states, \"Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, ect.\" This shows that if the software was at schools people would be able to be better at telling how a person was feeling.\n\nIn conclusion, school systems having the new software would make it eaiser for teachers and students. Student would have less problems with learning and unserstanding school. Less students would have to ask for help or be scared to ask for help. Also, teachers would be better at making lesson plans and agusting them to make them interesting. Forthermore, the new software would be very helpful and could change the way children and teachers look at school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today, I will disguse why people should goin in the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" program. I will be talking about, how you could have fun, make friend's, and see place's you've never seen befor.\n\nFirst, You could go place's you'e never been befor, you could try new food's that you neve had tasted.\n\nNext, It also give you chance of to make new friend's. You coould also get a chance to try new food's, why you are there.\n\nLastly, You will get to sail on the ocean, as never befor, you can go site seeing with other peole that you have meet.\n\nIt will be fun because, you will get to see \"Europe, Greece, China, and so many more\". You could make friend's on the ship, as you are working. It will also be good because, you could show other people around just like Luke did. You could\n\ntake \"Gondola\" ride's in Venice, Italy which is a city with streets of water. The claim is that, over all you would have fun and the world could open up to you, as Luke said \" I'm grateful for this opportunity, it made me more aware of people of the other countries, and their need's. In conclusion, this esay explain why you should goin the \"Seagoing Cowboys\", and how you could make friend's, have fun, and see place's you've never seen. It can also, give you an opportunity to open up to the world. Also, if alduts or teenagers want to help, and make a diffrence this program could help.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you believe aliens are on mars? I am a scientist from NASA and I am here to tell you that there are no alien life forms on mars. Recently we have discovered a landform on mars that has the appearance of a human face. Many believe the face is ancient alien artifacts, and some believe it is a landform known as a Mesa or a Butte. This article will explain why this \"Face\" is not an alien artifact.\n\nAbout 25 years ago a spacecraft oribting mars called the viking 1 was searching for landing spots for its sister ship called the viking 2. In 1976 Viking 1 took a picture of something that had the appearnace of a face, NASA could not explain it at first. After some research that mission controllers came to the conclusion that is was another martian mesa, they were common in the region of Cydonia on planet mars. A few days later NASA decided to unveil the image for all to see. The face on mars became a huge hit in pop culture it was featured in movies, books, magazines, and even on radio talk shows. Many people begain to think the face was evidence of aliens on mars and were confused because NASA would want to hid ethe evidence of aliens on mars. \"Some people think the face is bona fide evidence of life on mars.\" Although few scientist believed the face was an alien artifact, Photographing Cydonia became a tp priority. NASA took pictures of the face every chance they had. In 1988 Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time and took good pictures of the face. When the photo was seen it was proof of no alien life it was just a landform on mars. Many were not satisfied and wanted more proof so in 2001 the Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough to take more detailed pictures. When the scientist got the picture it shows a martian butte or mesa and the scientist compared it with the Middle Butte in the snake river plain of idaho in the american west. When it comes down to it there is no alien life on the planet of mars and the face is nothing but a landform with the appearance of a face. I hope this article has helped you decide if you think it is alien or a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers good use tells everything Like need number restaurant get computer sometimes wan na go vacation wan na know much cost go onto computer And computers good wan na travel different places go onto computer look map print But sometimes computer bad people go web sites chat peoples grown ups talking little kids", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, in some countries, many people are interested in the past of their homes or buildings they live in. There are numerous motives why they do this. In the essay, I will analyse the cause of this situation and include some of the methods that people use to discover their accommodation past.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the reason why people are curious about the history of the house consists of a few main things. First of all, they would like to know historical data of the accommodations before they decide to purchase a house. It is common that they will wonder and research such as when it was built, how it was built or who built it. To expand, they should understand the place they will live in the future. Secondly, some people are concerned about the land value before they sell it. The background of some places can generate large income for them.\r\n\r\nThere are many sources that people can learn about the residence's past. Nowadays technology seems to be an easy way to research information. In addition, The internet is a popular method and it is convenient to ask. There is a great deal of data. Moreover, the local library can provide information about the land or house. It might be a chance to make friends with those who live near or around the house.\r\n\r\nTo summarise, It is undeniable that everyone is interested and wonders about their home. The history of these places may change their life in the future. Some people do that for their knowledge, while some people search for the place where they can find peace in their souls.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you see a driverless car in the future? Google is working on a project. A car that can drive on its own. No one will ever need to buy a car again. There would just be driverless taki's everywhere.\n\nRight now in this time, Google made cars that can drive by its self. These cars has senssors. It can detect if theres an object behind it, infront of it, And on the sides. these cars can drive its self to any location, you would just have to put it in the gps. Google cars aren't truly driverless; the person in the car would have to do it is pull in and out. The longest distence a driverless car has driven was half a million miles without crashing.\n\nEvery automakers is trying to make the best of the best. Making a car that can do everything. A car that dosn't need no one to pull in or out. A car that takes half the fuel that any car would be taking in this present time. A car that can detect people when there inside the car. A car that can travel million's of miles without crashing or breaking down. The best car creation built in history.\n\nAutomakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problem ahead will be solved. Tesla has a project a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot for 90 percent of the time. Other automakers such as Mercedes-Benz, Audi, And nissan plan to have cars that can drive them self by 2020.\n\nThere will be so much automakers that will try to make a car thats driverless, but the car is going to end up being so expensive that no one will want to but it. Google is trying to make so many cars that can drive its self, park its self, pull out its self and pick anyone up by its self. Google wants to make so many of these cars, Because google dosn't want people to buy cars anymore. All the driverless google cars will be public-transport taxi system. The taxi's will offer far more flexibility than a bus. Google believes such cars would fundamentally change the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Seting one important neds cyclist terrein weather bad hotter cylist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ends hibiscus means saeng To symbol strength comfort And knows hibiscus survive snow cold weather winter knows fail either To hibiscus symbol survives knows survive She also going take test hibiscud budding since reminds homeland comforts Then even fails still happy since favorite plant budding I also think author concludes story way plant Saeng going overcome obstacles The plant must survive winter come back spring While Saeng must pass drivers test Finally I think author ended way plant means Saeng If survives knows survive life goes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Books form history telling story past history dont block offensive events take place removed books offensive material would wrong strip kids learning tools books important learning tool todays schools somthing new every book kid learn even taking away one book could make kid learn one less thing purpose would aginst everything schools stand many diffrent janras books everybody loves every jonra person likes read young adult books relates culture wich likely offensive language events play take away youngadult school person would missing books nows intersted books libary even think one instance could strip student away learning opertunity shouldnt fact many reasons shouldnt remove literture libary shelves", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Rough Road Ahead excess speed limit reader sees scenery terrain get rougher lonelier cyclist travels limits pushed outlook somewahat grim expects worst The rough road strats water pump finds gives piping brackish water tasted like battery acid Water sense story metaphor life source living In beginning drank regularly gets pump bad like things start turn sour story The cyclist story ware body acknowledges dehydration At one point says and growing realization I could drop heat stroke simply I listened gentlemen hadnt porches decade later said caused laugh sadly hopelessly lack humans technology really broke", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I think of driverless cars, I think of the impact that they can have towards the community. I think of driverless cars driving by night so that its passengers, who need to be somewhere by morning, can get their rest. I also think of driverless cars taking people with ailments that hamper their driving skills to places so that they can be independent.It is because of this that I have\n\nMy position on driverless cars is that even though people can benefit from the positive aspects of driverless cars, laws need to be ironed out before they can be used by the public.\n\nIn the passage explaining the evolution of driveless cars, it is also explained that there are few laws that concern what would happen when driverless cars are on the road and an accident happens. Even then, there are only three states and the district of columbia that allow driverless cars to even be tested. It is stated in paragraph nine of the passage that manufacturers hope that safety will play an important part in making driverless cars legal across the country. However, even though there is always the possibility of a crash, the passage explains that with driverless cars, the chances of having a crash are considerably lower than those of a human driver behind the wheel, which is shown through the half million miles driven by driverless cars.\n\nThough we are not at the point of fully reliable and independent driverless cars, the point that cars are at today proves it is plausible that they will be manufactured for the public within the next ten or twenty years. This is why I stand where I am on driverless cars. The impact on driverless cars can be beneficial towards everybody, but there needs to be a change towards perfecting the conditions for fully autonomous cars on the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many pedagogical experts today are in search of techniques of reforming the educational systems of high schools to raise the quality of education. Though, some of them suggest that allowing students to criticize and make remarks on their teachers could be the optimal solution, it is widely believed that practicing this tactic will lower the standards of conduct in the class. There are strong views on both sides, which I will discuss now.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, some people feel that permitting students to criticize their teachers would allow pedagogues to learn about their mistakes and shortcomings, so that they can rectify them, which would unequivocally enable them to administer students more effective teaching. In addition, it might be said that this would lead to higher levels of satisfaction among students. If they were given more freedom to express their feelings and opinions during classes, students would perhaps feel more contented and respected.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the new approach of teacher appraisal can result in several drawbacks. Firstly, some trouble-making students tend to be inclined to take advantage of the chance to criticize their seniors with profane and negative words. Therefore, such kind of misbehaviour would possibly lead them to lose their respect for the instructors and deteriorate the relationships between the two parties. Secondly, not all students have similar perceptions about educational quality, meaning that they would likely make totally divergent and sometimes even incompatible comments about their teachers which could upset discipline in the classroom.\r\n\r\nOverall, I would tend to side with those who support the idea of encouraging high school students to remark on their teachers because this would make them feel more satisfied and help teachers conduct better lessons. This is provided that, students do not use inappropriate language when evaluating their teachers and maintain high standards of conduct.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advances in the medical field are nothing short of amazing. The fact that a computer can tell us how we are feeling to the exact percent is jaw dropping. Classrooms could definitly benefit from this in the future, and I am sure that they will.\n\nEveryone that has been through school and attended high school has been forced to sit through an hour long lesson that you have no intrest in what so ever. Most of these lessons have homework to follow up what was just taught to you. If you aren't paying attention how are you supposed to figure out the homework? This is when the system could be used extremly effectively.\n\nA teacher that might question weather or not his or her lesson is bring can check the computer and see how much of the class is happy and enjoying the lesson vs. the how many students are angry or upset with the lesson. Knowing this type of information, the teacher can change their lesson plan to accordingly. As stated in the article, you can't fake emotions and trick the system. Therefore, if a teacher notices that a student has been sad for the past 3 days in class, he or she can talk to that student and figure out if the school counselor needs to get involved.\n\nAlthough this type of software can improve classrooms all over the world, teachers can't rely on it completely. An important part of a student's day is interacting with everyone and creating different relationships. A teacher needs to do the same thing and not only figure kids out by looking at a computer monitor but by talking to the children and getting to know them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People that drive often tend to get into car accidents and serious conditions of severe accidents. Certain people in Germany have different residents that upscale their community to suburban pioneers to executives to have ever gone before to have never given up their cars. Like some people in New York they sometimes have to walk or run to certain places to get where they need to get and sometimes without transportion they tend to just not go places. In Florida they have ways of driving and getting where you need to get to like the city bus, friends,walk.\n\nAutomobiles are the linchpin suburbs to everybody where middle-class families from Japan to Washington D.C. Many owners of cars love to have big sales and auntions to expensive cars because those are the ones to bring the most money to the company,business. The most people in the state to bring the most money in is Florida because customers love to go to car shows espcially when they have car auntions the most they made was over $800,000 to campaign to raise for more business to have enough money to build more car shops. While certain people have been effected to make cities denser for suburbs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi im going to tell an argument from lukes point of view using deatails from the artical.\n\nHere are some reasons why you should come. First you should come beacause it might be the only time you will get to go to help other people from World War ll, so that would be a great opportunity to come.\n\nAnother reason is you would get to see out side of you country,and you would get to see other countrys. Also you would see what culture and gods they worship. You might even learn new things like how to grow carrots, or watermelon.\n\nOne more reason is you can even have fun on board. Like when you are coming back the animals would be unloaded and you would get to pet them and maby some animals like fetch. You could even play volleyball, or baseball in the empty hold wear animals had been. They also had tournements like baseball,boxing,reading,whittling,and games also help pass time.\n\nWell that is it I gave you three reasons why you should participate in the seagoing cowboys program. I hope this will make your dicisean easyer. Thankyou.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are some positive and negative aspects of this driverless car but some positives may out weight the negative or some negative may out weight the positives but all together this is a really a great idea. The positive aspects of the driverless cars is that we as a people can relax and enjoy riding in the car. Also we don't need to buy cars because the driverless cars are considered as public transportation for us. We don't have to spend our money all the time on gas because it's a taxi system. We also don't have to worry about the law of texting and driving because we are not operating the car while we text. The negative aspects of the friverless car is that we still have to operate the by pulling in and out of driveways. We also have to deal with traffic jams. Once we get to our destination we have to redo what we just did.The point is that there are some good and bad points about this driverlass car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Citizens of German,\n\nAs you may know that you have to own a car to get around in some cases you may think to your-self that you dont have the money to get a car or the job to keep a roof over your head. Well in French and Swiss borders, Friburg runs a few streets on the adge of the community. More or less Friburg has you paying for a $40,000 car-ownership with space along with a home.\n\n70 percent dont own a car, everyone should have a car and park where ever they want to its not right for them to have to have a $40,000 car-onwer-ship with a house just to have space. Vaubran homes are $5,500 within a rectangular square mile, 80 percent of laws have been gone to highways and the 20 percent have went to another transports.\n\nParis has band driving due to smog they know the amound of license plats that were order to leave their cars at home or fined a $32 fine. It shouldn't matter if ther were to leave their cars at home or park it somewhere they are grown people and if something was to happen to them or the car then thats on them. It's not right to have all of these rules because, if someone was to vist a loved one and they didnt know or understand what was going on or they had gottan a fine then their going to get mad.\n\nDiesel fule makes up at least 67 percent of vehicles in France, 53.3 percent of diesle engines in Western Europe. in the mid-1990s cars without improvement campaign in Bogota. People all over wants to be safe and have nothing to worry about so why on earth would you put out there tha you have to have a car to buy a house or to have more space?. Children that are now coming out to the world that are driving is going to look at the world a different way. Between 2001-09 found that driving by young poeple decreased about 23 percent.\n\nAmerica's love affair with its vehiclse population growth the number that had been driven in the U.S. peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily. April 2013 the number of miles drien is 9 percent below the pea an equal to where the country was in Janurary 1995.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The hiking traffic congestion is a growing concern for many cities nowadays. The main reasons for this includes, decrease use of public transport and a lack of alternative means of travelling or mass transit projects. There are various measures that can prove effective in this regard.\r\n\r\nThe unpopularity of public transportation is one of the main reasons that is causing traffic jams and transportation problems in various metropolitan cities of the world. Either non-availability or substandard public transport encourages public to use their personal vehicles that results in traffic issues, particularly during peak hours. A lack in alternative transportation methods like the underground subways, trams and trains are yet another contributory factor that urges people to use their self owned transports causing a considerable choking of the roads.\r\n\r\nThere are various steps that can be taken at both the government and individual level to fight this growing issue. Firstly, the most instantaneous results can be sought if the government encourages people to use public transport by making it more comfortable, convenient and cost effective. In other words, if the quality public transportation is made available to the citizens that is parallel to their personal cars in comfort, yet at a lower cost, can encourage people to prefer using public transport. For example, the public in the European countries prefers to use public transport rather than using one of their own because it is equally good and more affordable.\r\n\r\n Secondly, another factor that can be of great value in the long term, is to minimize the traffic congestion is by constructing the alternate means of transit. Since cities are expanding due to urbanization, it has resulted in the shrinkage of roads that are not enough to meet the transport requirement of a relatively bigger population. Hence there is a need to build alternate roads, ring roads, subways or rail tracks to divert the influx and avoid traffic jams. For instance, the construction of a new ring road around Lahore, the provincial capital of Punjab, Pakistan has resulted in negligible transport issues that used to be a big problem in the past.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, encouraging public transportation and constructing the alternative transportation methods are the few solutions that can help in solving the growing issue of traffic congestion. It is therefore suggested that the authorities should focus on taking these measures in order to combat the traffic problems effectively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What one important parts relationship Laughter would one important part relationship mind Such relationship We always laughing almost every moment together someones always making joke But together cheering funniest example varsity cheer squad went We got locked bus got kick Last lest funniest night never forgotten When first arrived couch left keys bus locked One girls noticed went get ipod We tried think ways We first tried put window But unfortunately work well could get windows open Our couch call someone bring us another set keys After game cheer squad went Because game promised could go get cookie dough good nt complain sit stands cheer When pulled I ran bus screaming loud could One people worked said could run building We followed rules started cartwheels round offs halls instead We got stopped nt mean cartwheels round offs halls either walking around find music box stumbled onto baby stroller took turns pushing Turns s allowed either We got sent back coach Unfortunate us stumbled another interesting thing short little dresses clothing rack I put cheer uniforms As take picture girl worked came behind us good friend ran telling us decides take picture instead lady saw got kicked The last crazy event night For thous nt know simply bus stops stop light everyone besides driver course gets runs around bus like crazy people We leave light turns red I standing door waiting light turn red beg couch let us soon opened door I ran fast I could Sadly road muddy caused fall straight onto butt Two people behind helped ran around bus But light turned green soon I rounded corner The people behind us passing getting honked good way either Honestly body cared much fun even think people As another girl squad rounded corner fell straight onto face Then everyone back bus light turned red waited bus turn green I covered mud Everyone one taking mud I put self s But since everybody rubbing mud got really dry uncomfortable In conclusion laughter important part relationship With squad would nt half funny memories That night one funniest things happened night humorous Including getting locked bus getting kicked best That night never forgotten people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, having children later has become an increasingly popular trend. There are several reasons for this phenomenon, and I believe it has some obvious drawbacks for each family and our community. \r\n\r\nThere are two main reasons why more young adults are choosing against having children when they are in the beginning stage of their career. Firstly, instead of embarking on parenthood at an early age, modern women are likely to pursue tertiary education and want to move up their career ladder. If they got married and had a baby, the working mothers would find difficulties in splitting their time to devote working and taking care of their offspring. Secondly, the young childless families may have a strong feeling of self-enjoyment. This leads them to prefer enjoying their life rather than raising children. For example, modern women are apt to take care of their bodies and socialize with their friends better than nurture a child. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, delaying giving birth is no longer every family‘s private affair, but also it strongly affects the survival of a whole nation. This tendency negatively influences old parents and their future kids when the wives decide to have pregnancies. In fact, after 35 years of age, the old mothers may tackle the danger of having a miscarriage or delivering the baby difficultly. Moreover, if there is an easy delivery of the mothers, the babies are prone to be at risk of having Down‘s syndrome. As a result, this can negatively affect the shapers of a nation’s tomorrow and the quality of our future productive workforce. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are some reasons that many people tend to delay having a baby in their life. Consequently, this might negatively affect each family and our society at large.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars, what are they excally? Driveless cars are cars that do not need human involvement required. They can drive over half a million miles without a single crash, but they cannot navigate through roadwoek or accidents quite yet. You, the driver, are still responsible for any accidents caused by these cars. You will be much safer without owning a driveless car.\n\nIn this day in age I am sure you are not suprised by this topic. Techonlogy is making the impossible possible; from smart phones and tablets, walking on the moon and seeing space, to saving peoples lives, but this might be getting to our heads. Owning a car that can drive itself might seem cool and fun at first, but what happens when something bad happens? When this car gets into an accident you are responsible for the damages, not the car ownership, and will have to pay the fees required. Thousands of dollars could be spent on repairing this car alone.\n\nSensors are put in thsi car so nothing bad should go wrong. They are placed to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers, they can also stop the car when needed. This is great and all, but one of the sensors could break and may not even know it until it is too late. By relying on these said sensors you are puttnig your life and other peoples lives at risk.\n\nSome people will rely on this car to get them to the places they need to go thinking they do not need to drive, or pay attetion, to the things around them. You stay out too late and cannot drive, so insted of getting a taxi, you get into your car and trust it to be safe and not mess up. You cannot control the outcome of this car when it has a mind of its own.\n\nDriveless cars have many pros and cons. They do not need as much human interaction, but they can also get out of control. You are responsible for any type of damage this car may cause, and for other peoples lives when behind the wheel if this car. At the end of the day, you as a person, will be safer and save thousands if dollars by not owning these type of cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\". The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it might present. Venus is the second planet from our sun, which makes it easier to see from Earth compared to all the other planets. In this article the author uses the dangers and the old projects to prove that Venus is a worthy pursuit.\n\nThe author uses the dangers of studying Venus by using past experiences of traveling to Venus to prove that yes it has its risks, but it is worth it at the end. The author uses past experiences by stating in paragraph two \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for hunams to study, despite its proximity to us.\" This quote helps prove that landing on Venus has been a big challenge, but scientist are willing to overcome these challenges despite the dangers. The authour also states in paragraph six that \" Scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus\". This statement also helps prove the point that exploring Venus more is worth taking the risk because researchers are working on innovations to help the trips be more efficent. Which helps the author support the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.\n\nThe author also uses old projects to help support the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. The author claims in paragraph seven \"Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. The devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II. The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick, but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions.\" This passage suggest that by the use of mechanical parts can be made more resistant or could be adjusted to pressure, heat, and other things. By tweaking this the author suggest that studying Venus is worthy pursit.\n\nIn the article the author uses the dangers and old projects to prove that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. Also by studying Veuns there could be alot more things discoverd by that panet. Yes, it consits of many dangers but their are mutiple things that have been learned from the past experiences that could possibly help us aviod that in the future. The author idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite some of its dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir loving caringness Repeatedly throughout memoir speaker Narciso Rodriguez show family migrating native country Cuba love As said parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would They cared children s future leaving families friends careers country loved All though struggled personally financially braving harsh northern winters yearning native tropics facing cultural hardships thought best children Their simple house best place together family The warmth kitchen humble house Cuban feast always filled air scent music life love This memoir made connect family mines similar Without love nt family thats end word family l stand love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper great concern computers wether people spend much time sitting infront screen I believe people aware time computers Instead ruining eyes exercising enjoying family friends Exercising major part every persons life nt get enough could become obeise Obeisity cause people like think slob Although might say nt care others think long run might mistake think way exercise likely rid almost type discrimination look different even better average person If ever get chance get telescope set spot see stars night Instead keeping eyes glued computer nice sunny joy go walk woods As see nature much beautiful hundreds tiny tots colors forming image nature If find image beautiful plant go see feel plant in person Many programs available computers let see people would nt rather talk real life I sure would I think people would well population said would much rather talk friends relatives person computer screen I feel however possible always talk people person cameras wires I hope I made clear exercising nature people real life much better options front computer rest life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Even though there are dangers in trying to explore another planet, you know there is always good things that you are still able to go do. Some people will risk them selfs to find out what is in our outter world and what we are able to discover. Then you know those others that don't like to take them risks and would rather wait for so long instead of doing it right there right now. Going to another planet like Venus can be really cool to think about because you never be there before or no one really has been there and you are able to discover and find new things to bring back to \"earth\". But on the other hand you have to knwo what you are going to deal with, like how is it over there and what are the bad things that might come your way.\n\nVenus is known to be a very dangers planet for any things or someone to take land of or step foot. The text states, \"While Venis is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\" This text ssays that it might looks and seem easy to explore from a far but going up close is another hand. Venus is a very pleasing planet or even like to be called star to look at. The first paragraph says, \"Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star,\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.\" Like I said above they love too look and explore from a far but going up close to this planet is a big danger zone.\n\nPeople have tried to take land in Venus but all was unsuccesfull. Paragraph 2 states, \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reasons, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more that three decades.\" As you see people have tired and tired but never could properly land and have time to explore and get what they wanted and needed. It was like somethings in that planet does not want anyone to be there or find something on there. The good thing out of this is that venus is like earths \"twin\". So that means people are possible able to survive in venus if we get a chance to land and explore.\n\nThe weather is eveywhere on venus. For humans to be here they would ahve to wear protected suits. In paragraph 3 says, \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of high corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere.\" These conditions can be very hard for us to be going through and and on top of that for us trying to move around it and still explore can be very difficult. \"temprature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" Having to go through this wether and trying to survive I get why people would rather explore it from a far and not uo close. Having one of the hottest surface temperature is a big deal to risk. On this planet many things happen like earthquakes, lightning strikes, and erupting volcanoes. \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth.\" Some people see this as once in a life time and living your life to the fullest but others would take this as a suicid because they would not want to go through all this and possible suffer.\n\n\"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Venus is the only other planet that is like earth and has characteristics like our land and oceans. It was cover largely with oceans and various forms of life just like our earth. In paragraph 4 says, \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogius to those on earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mounatins, and craters.\" This planet is a wonderful planet from the outside and far away but going up close and exploreing, I'd say can be scary. But know that there is another planet kinda like ours makes you think. Can humans really live on another planetn other tham earth itself.\n\nMany many people have tried and tried to find a way to go to Venus with out destroying the ship. So that when it came to mind. When we land somehow it breaks down and doesn't want ti work anymore. But what if we make a spaceship that does not touch the ground and floats. Paragraph 5 states, \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\" This will get us up and away from the unfriendly ground condions. even though it might be toasty but would feel a whole lot better. In paragraph 6 they say, \"More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rocl, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a torough mission to understand Venus would nee to get up close and perosnal despite the risks.\" So as we are above Venus but not on Venus there is a possible way but rather not take anything.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We need to find other ways to limit car usage. We should stop relying on cars so much. In \"\n\nCar-Free Cities\"\n\nit expains and provides examples of people not using the car that much is happier in there life and that we dont need to have cars because you can be more active walking and riding a bike then just driving and when you stop using the car so much you can have a better enviroment. We all have a choice weither or not to use cars but not using a car can makes your life better.\n\nWe all have our perfrences, like maybe you just like to use a car because it gets you from point A to B faster but walking or riding a bike can help you become more fit and active. In \"\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\n\n\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal it states that \" \"when I had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" said Heidrun Walter... as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering childerm drown out the occasional distant motor\". this quote explains how when she gave up her car she seemed much happier and she didn't have to hear the sound of cars, all she could hear is bicycle wheel's turning and just the laughter of children. In \"\n\nThe End of Car Culture\"\n\nit says \" They organize thier summer jobs and social life around where they can walk or take public transportation or car-pool with friends.\" this quote is explaining how teens don't use cars that much they think of other ways to get around then just using their own car. They are trying to be more active in their life life then just using cars for transportation. They walk or car-pool they think of smarter ways to get around.\n\nAlthough, we may think that oh it is faster but do you know what you are doing to the enviroment due to using cars as much as we do? In \"\n\nParis Bans Driving Due To Smog\n\n\" it tells the reader \" After days of near-record- pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city\" This quote is illustrating to us that people are driving so much that they had to ban cars and not permit anyone to drive due to , to much air poulltion. People need to start walking more then use cars a city should'nt be able to ban cars because that means people are using them to much and poullting the air with that. In \"\n\nThe End of Car Culture\"\n\nit claims that \"it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the enviroment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's eissions, just behind power plants.\" this quote explains to us is that if less people use cars , the more beneficial it would be to the enviroment. It would help us to stop poullting air and just help the nviroment out as well.\n\nIn conclusion, if people could limit the usage of cars it would beneficially help us out by us being more active and not using cars because it pollutes air and destroys the enviroment. Their are other ways to move about then cars. i know it is faster and easier but is it worth losing the enviroment because you didnt want to walk a short distance and back?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Someone said Laughter shortest distance two people means since everyone laughs laughter quickest easiest way connect another person I believe one point time older brother I get along well We almost never around would either fighting ignoring one another It nt much problem since five years older I became older brother I began see one another often So decided sit one day talk We nt exactly sure say first ten minutes sat silence Just two guys back porch middle Then fell backwards bush We laughed harder ever laughed lives So family get together nt lot arguing fighting sit tell stories laughFor family friends laughter one important components relationship laughter comes happiness happiness comes love love important component life So I say Laughter shortest distance people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggest that stuying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nVenus sometimes is called \"The Evening Star\", is one of the biggest points in light in the night sky,making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.This nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet.Venus is the second planet from our sun.Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe ventage point of earth,it has proved a very challenging to examine more closely.\n\nVenus is the closest planet on Earth in terms of density and size.Earth,Venus and Mars,orbit the sun at different speeds.This cause that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other to Venus.Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner.Also notable,Venus has the hottest surface temprerature of any planet in our solar system.Beyond high pressure and heat,present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes,and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on it's surface.Nomerous factors contribute to venu's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study,despite its proximity to us.A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\n\nAstornomers are fasinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.Long ago,venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various froms of life,just like Earth.Venus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes features such valleys,mountains,and craters.NASA's possible solution to the hosyile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.NASA is working on other aproaches to studying Venus. For example,some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venu's surface.\n\nResearches cannot take samples of rock,gas, or anything else,from a distance.Therefore,scientist seeking to conduct a trorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite risks.many researches are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute to venus.NASA is working on other aproaches to studying Venus.The challenge presented by the venus has value,not only because of the insight to be gained on the\n\nplanet itself,but also because human curiositu will likely lead us into many equally intidating endeavors.Our travels in Eartg should not be limited by dangers and doubts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone right read listen watch want Sometimes s always For example rated CAPS movies children watch Either law parents made rule Music I think different Some songs bad influence children whether violence cussing certain songs like still give kids wrong message Libraries kind books music movies magazines etc If people want view kind things people find offensive buy time Not everyone great sense humor things people find funny people get offended Even libraries anything would offened someone else would readers choice pick book want read Sometimes better children read articles d save time parents explain later They might ask lot questions parents might even answer For example brother watched rated CAPS movie In brother s younger years always curious asked lot questions time Sometimes mother nt know respond d change subject Well everyone knows old question CAPS babies come That s kind question brother curious My mom never bothered answer question would make story My brother smart enough know told wasnt accurate Finally one day got nosy took one mom s movies without asking It happen answer question He shocked disgusted time yet glad know finally found answer mom wouldnt give In situation I somewhat nuetral I dont object things might offened people removed book shelves hand might good thing put offensive things certain libraries children get Perhaps s makes things boring makes interesting reader Not everyone opinion things It good thing types books whether stating fact stating opinion Everyone right say opinion nothing wrong giving informational facts articles movies either The bad thing offensive things libraries smart idea s children get books Parentscan always say kind book children read kind movies watch Some parents might want go questions children ask give something explain better understanding parents dont want children see know sort things offensive old enough understand better mature things So cases might bad idea things adult know book shelves library child might get ahold The quotation All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But right remove book shelf work I abhor also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us Katherine Paterson opinion The quotation basically saying even parent doesnt want child read something offensive parent reads sometime children right know If child tooken anything like shelf know ask anymore questions", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I know lot patient people I many expierences patience My friend usually impatient Whenever waiting something texts saying CAPS CAPS onnn one day actually patient My family I going zoo one We brought snacks packed everything day We going pick house go zoo But mom slept still take shower She said would pick way zoo around already We running late I thought going get mad Fortunatly wasnt mad She understanding said ok Usually would say something like CAPS Why taking long time didnt say We ended going zoo around noon fun joy I expieriences many patient people expierience turned fun", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are inevitable. Driverless cars are great scientific and technological advancements. It represents our species evolving. In paragraph 1 it proves that when the technology and programming it set right they could very well possibly use only half the fuel we use today, giving us a very healthy for preservant world when it comes to resources.\n\nIn paragraph 5 it is stated that the computers and software used in cars is greatly improving, giving the car the safety precautions needed for the future of their advancement. It also proves that with these advancements the steps are being taken to give the car more and more progression in driving tasks and abilities. In paragraph 7 it says that even though the driverless car may perform most of the time it is still crucial that the driver still remains focused and alert to ensure a better sense of security and safety.\n\nAlthough it says that not many states are on board of the idea in paragraph 9, the benefits far outweigh the insecurities and doubts. As we progress through time the necessary steps are being taken and analyzed thousands of times to ensure that the idea is extremely reliable and very well educated and assured. As automated cars continue to grow into existance the possibilites are endless, including personal, self sufficient, and economical improvements.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The story about \"Unmasking the face on Mars\" was found by NASA in 1976 the reasearch about this \"Mars face\" is still uncovered on what it really is.The research has been going on from 1976,1998, and 2001 the reasearchers are trying their hardest to figure out what it really is and how it was on mars the real question that they should be asking is,is there alien life on Mars?\n\nHere is some textual evidence from the story\"there is a Side by side: a Viking 1 photo from 1976, a Mars Global surveyor (MGS) image from 1998, and the latest MGS image from 2001\". there is a small clue NASA thinks it is but the world highley doughts that Aliens exsist but who knows the universe hasen't been fully discovered.\n\nThe Conclusion of this story is that NASA is hoping to try sending humans to Mars and discovered the planet for any life forms that we could discover. Or we could just explore Mars like we do the moon and how we discovered somethings from there as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is commonly known that many species have gone extinct throughout history, including the dinosaurs. Some argue that preventing extinction is not necessary, as it is a natural process. However, I believe that humans have a moral obligation to protect endangered species and prevent their extinction.\r\n\r\nFirstly, human activities such as deforestation, overfishing, and pollution have caused a rapid decline in animal populations, leading many species to be at risk of extinction. As a result, humans have a responsibility to conserve the environment and prevent further harm to wildlife. It is unfair for humans to cause the extinction of a species due to their actions, particularly when they have the ability to prevent it.\r\n\r\nAnother reason is that many species play a crucial role in maintaining the balance of the ecosystem. For example, bees are essential pollinators that are responsible for pollinating 80% of flowering plants, and thus if bees were to become extinct, it would have a devastating impact on our food supply and ecosystem. Similarly, the loss of predators can cause a ripple effect, leading to overpopulation of other species and causing imbalances in the food chain.\r\n\r\nLastly, preventing extinction is not only a matter of responsibility but also a matter of morality. Species have intrinsic value, and it is not our place to determine which species should exist and which should not. Humans must respect the inherent value of all life forms and do what they can to protect them.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while extinction may be a natural process, it is not a justification for humans to sit idly by and watch as countless species go extinct. By taking action to conserve the environment, humans can ensure that future generations can enjoy the same diversity of life that we have today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What patience Patience act thing understanding tolerate experiencing difficulties without complaining I going tell little story every parent go requires lot patience My baby brother born Since birth mother dreaded day potty training knew would coming soon As know price diapers pullups gotten pretty expensive turned years started potty training Potty training requires alot patience sometimes child go potty go My mom knows still gets pretty mad decides use bathroom At times mom becomes patient knows knew still small child My mom still working patient knows soon olde use bathroom toilet without wearing pullup Many good things come patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Enforcing strict punishments due to road safety is a controversial topic. While some reckon that these tend to be stricter, I strongly disagree that there are a variety of alternative ways to solve this issue and the government tends to be creative actions or guidelines for drivers.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are several points that could support the idea that raising safety on the road is the method of giving stricter punishments. Firstly, the laws that are more serious might impact society. That means if enforcing these kinds of rules such as raising the amount of money is fined or confiscating the driving license, it is more easy-going for the governments to control residents to be law-abiding on the road. Secondly, another reason why administrators should promulgate is because the pain that people have to suffer from a prison sentence or even sophicastors might be related to mortality. Therefore, it goes without saying that giving much stricter punishments can be applied for numerous benefits for society.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I fervently believe that there still exist measures that can effectively enhance road safety. Apparently, it is suitable for the government to install cameras to catch driving offences such as exceeding speed or traffic accidents. As a result, it is more analysable for citizens to lead the public regulation. Moreover, the detailed guidelines could be published for society to follow, including how to know inside out the systems of traffic rules and understand the morals when joining the road. It can be said that easy-going laws make people more rexalxable to lead an exemplary citizen’s life.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it seems to me that it is undeniable that stricter punishments could be ways to keep people in the model for society with safety; however, there are a variety of methods that tend to lead to safe traffic and without driving offences such as installing cameras or setting a guideline.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My best friend probably brother It middle sitting outside top wooden table mother s backyard started telling much wanted done high school done I sat listening attentively maybe thirty minutes poured heart nearly broke mine distressed best friend told went girl liked friendship extremely hurt betrayal added top afraid getting kicked school grades amount pressure coming parents time simply much seventeen year old handle I talked least another half hour I thought end heart heart talk I told CAPS nt get together start geting good grades going kick school Honestly happens I m going really mad becaus person going nag We laughed quietly minute paused laughed cried I nt know day funny maybe serious everything kids simply release stress anxiety us My tiny little lame joke I dropped end talk made seem okay made us think young minor many problems grand scheme life That inital laughter made possible us simply let go After happened I went lives never happened never speaking Except never got bad grade rest high school career chose friend chance girl found another girl approval Was laughter helped get difficult time I could nt say I know laughter needed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driving a car can be a big responsibility because driver have to be alert and causious when ever driving a vehicle. If a driver is careless then they risk getting their lives and the lives of the people in the area. Driveless cars can make a person even more careless. Driveless cars can cause accidents, can cost alot of money and drivers can become independent of driveless cars.\n\nDriveless cars can cause accidents that can harm the driver and nearby pedestrians. If a driveless cars technology fails then careless drivers can crash and injure the driver. If the cars get into a situation that it can't navagte passed than it can cause problems for the driver. The driver has to be aware and alert to ensure that the driver and the people are safe.\n\nDriveless cars can be exespencive as well. Driveless cars can cost alot of money to manufuncture. Driveless cars can also cost money to buy as well as insure. If a driveless cars is damage and needs to be repaired than how much will that cost? Driveless cars in my opinion are way to exespencive to afford.\n\nFinaly people who drive driveless cars can become independent on the cars ability to drive on it's own. If a situation occurs when the driver has to drive than the driver may not know what to do. Driveless cars can make causios drivers careless and careless drivers even more careless. People must not become careless when driving a car and driveless cars don't help make a person a better driver.\n\nIn conclusion Driveless cars are dangerous, exepencive and are not the ideal choice for improving a drivers ability to drive.cc", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" it talks about how different companies are making cars that can be driven with no driver, but some have made ones that are almost driverless. Some companies used different ways to achieve that goal but some failed. In some states you cannot even test out driveless cars. There is an arguement wether people agree or disagree with the car. There are both positive and negatives of driverless cars.\n\nThere is a positive side to having driverless cars and one of them is that it will use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer more flexability than a bus. There are cars with sensors so if you come close to a pole or something it will make a noise so you can stop before you hit it. The sensors will also be able to control the breakes and reduce the power of the engine. That will create a better response and control than a human driver. It will be much more safer if we have driverless cars because if a perosn is texting and forgets to stop the car, it will stop itself not causing any accidents.\n\nThere is always a negative side to everything and the negetive side to this is that if we rely too much on technology to do everthing for us then we will not know what to do once it fails us. Lets say that we finally have driverless cars and there is an accident ahead, but the car does not stop. At that point what will we do? We will not be able to stop the car because we forgot how to use one after all these years relying on the technology. Like it said in the article, if the technology fails and someone gets injured whose fault is it? It said in the article that some cars are partly driveless except when going up or down driveways or going past an accident so at that point the drivers have to take control. We will all still have to learn how drive.\n\nWe should go against the development of these cars because at some point all technology might fail. It may seem safer to have the driveless cars, but I think that if cars have sensors to prevent some things then that will be fine. We cannot rely too much on technoloy even though it is extremely useful. Technology has helped us save lives in the past years. There is more negatives than positives so in that case I believe that we should not allow driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Voluminous traffic in metropolitan cities is a common problem across countries. Rapid increase in the number of automobiles is leading to high traffic jams and congestion in urban areas. However, there are certain ways and measures that power can consider to solve this issue.\r\n\r\nThere are several factors for the increase in traffic in urban areas. Firstly, overcrowded population in metro cities due to high job availability, and this leads to increase in usage of vehicles and automobiles. Secondly, there is no proper limitation for the use of personal vehicles such as cars and vans. For example, in city areas, each person in a family uses their own car for commuting and this increases the density of vehicle in busy roads and result to vehicle congestion. Thirdly, the lack of knowledge and awareness on following traffic rules. To illustrate, most of the people in metro areas, are trying to bypass the traffic signals, which would result in blocking the way of other vehicles.\r\n\r\nOne effective solution to deal with traffic problem is that government should educate and encourage its citizens to use public transports. This will lead to decrease of vehicle density in roads. In parallel, government should also increase the count of public transport vehicles to provide frequent access and availability for people. An alternate solution is, programs about traffic awareness and driving tests can be conducted to reduce traffic snarl. For instance, Singapore government runs the frequent campaign for public regarding driving and traffic.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, increase in automobile usage in metropolitan areas and unawareness about traffic rules is leading to high traffic. And this can be controlled by enabling more public transports and awareness campaign by government for the people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story Saeng telling shell take test draws together overall theme major actions story The theme story get used new environment finding beauty similarities old home Saeng says many things thought strange become quiet repitition season upon season almost familiar like geese And shes greenhouse plants draw back memories Vietnam grandmother Saeng hard time adjusting new things moving determined overcome difficulties like overcome differences Vietnam I think author concluded story talking geese hibiscus retaking test demonstrates ways Saeng adjusting new life shows reader overcome new things She vows fereshadows future sucess adaptation lifestyle", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This new technology of studying emotions via computer can be exploited due to faking faces. When Eckman said that he classified 6 emotions and gave the example of what controls what, the problem arises as in that it maybe false information due to a blank type of facial features that are unreadable. Also, if the person is capabale, they can hide their emotions by faking a different facial feature to put forth a positive type of vibe in such a way machines cant read. This is most likely going to backfire and have mis information due to errors and exploits. Emotions arent an algorith, they reflect us as a human and shouldnt be exploited to some company to make some big bucks.\n\nThe human is a complex entity to study because we are adapting over time so much, we change on a daily basis and thats what is the issue, if we were all like minded, then it would make sense a robot can understand us. This new technology of studying human emotions, isnt going to get us anywhere.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever been to Venus? No, well no human or spacecrafts been able to land on Venus nor have survived. The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents and their right, but their not hundred percent right. See, astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. They think of it as a challenge because they push themselves to work harder, come up with new, more safer ways to get to Venus. But, they have no idea of what their up against.\n\nVenus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus, clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphere, and temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, also the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than Earth. Even if any human could land on Venus, once you seek to land there will be erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes. And, researches cannot get cloth enough to take samples of rocks, gas, or anything else.\n\nNASA's working on something possible; created for humans to land safely. It's not going to be east tho, long working hours, just working and building something like a vehicle hovering over Venus. Making sure the air pressure won't drop, the spacecraft won't over heat. There's just a lot of things they have to worrying about but, all you need is a little confidence and working as a team. Keep believing that humans will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph shows Saeng getting used living new place Towards end text Saeng says many things thought strange become familiar The winter hibiscus comforting reminded Saeng home says In spring snows melt beginning get used the quiet repetition season upon season The geese form distinctive V becoming familiar The last paragraph effective way end story shows saeng becoming accostumed new surroundings hopeful future", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting add dirigible docking station top building As says paragraph The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature Wind could cause serious saftey hazard spinning back docked dirigible around Also dirigibles highly flammable If explosion Hindenburg took place top Empire State Building would catastrophic Attempting moor dirigible top building dangerous It illegal There existing law airships flying low urban areas paragraph fact mooring dirigible illegal extreemely dangerous obstacle builders faced It also daunting task Builders would learn new technologies operating system US Naval Air Station After researching builders reliezed would strenghen frame Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building s framework paragraph The obstacles builders faced proved enough reason never use mooring", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some members argue that increasing fuel costs will help resolve the world environment, while others don't agree. In my opinion, this essay will partially agree with the statement.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, one of the ways of improving the world's atmosphere is by rising the prices of petrol and by doing so, the affordability will be less. That is to say, if the government raise the price of petrol, few people will be able to buy it and this will not only reduce the number of people who will be driving cars, but it will also reduce the gases that will be emitted into the surroundings. For example, the Ugandan state decided to increase the costs of diesel as a way of reducing pollution caused by vehicles and after a year, the analysis showed that gas pollution had dropped by 20% which was a success for them. However, in my opinion, l believe that this is not the only way to fight environmental problems.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, l agree that there are other methods of solving the global atmosphere and this is public education about the surroundings. In other words, if the community members are educated about the effects of pollution, this will make the community become aware of how to stop. it will also save the state a lot of money in terms of trying to clear the polluted area. For instance, in East Africa, the presidents passed a law on aforestation in every area where someone practices deforestation, especially in the forest regions. Therefore,this saved the environment from being destroyed.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite increasing petrol prices as a method of resolving atmosphere issues,in my opinion, I believe that there are other ways of keeping the area safe including public awareness. Therefore, l hope in the future the government will consider other methods", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The following essay claims that parents should encourage their children to do more sports instead of forcing them to spend all their time studying. And I partially agree with this statement. Although, I concur with the idea that education is quite important, too. That's why I concur with the idea that children should spend time doing both of these activities. \r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, I want to mention that education is quite important for the child's future. Good education does not only affect child's future, but also helps them to make their outlook wider. And this ability will be important in their adulthood And they would be able to have their opinion and express it. Because in my opinion, education does not consist only of different kinds of school subjects, it also includes finance, the ability of public speaking and expressing one's mind. \r\n\r\nBut I also agree with the idea that sport is also compulsory for the development of a child. Firstly, regularly doing sport helps a person to be much healthier and makes a person much stronger. Also, it was scientifically proven that doing sport makes your brain work better and age less faster. I think that it is quite important for everyone. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, I concur with the idea that the child should not only study, but also do sport. By combining both of these activities a child would be able healthy, smart and sociable. Also, I would like to mention that habits that are built in person's childhood stick to that person until the end of their life. That's why during that period of time you need to build as much healthy habits as possible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents very well in this writting. Teh author is good at showing the two diffrernent sides to the agument but makes you agree with his stance. He used many diffrent examples and also gae a lot of detail in his writting.\n\nTo start off his essay with some facts and expalined what he was going to be talking about and some things about planets. One fact he used to start his essay off was \" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" ( paragraph 3) This was a great way to start off the writting because he informed his readers about venus before he started to persaude them on a topic.\n\nThe author also displaces the oposing information which is always a good thing to do in a pusasive writting. An example of this is \" Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for human.\" ( Paragraph 5) This is higlighing that yes Venus has some dangerous things but is still worthy. So by doing this he is showing the dangers but then can back them up and say some good things about them.\n\nFollowing this, The author was really good at making the dangerous stuff sound not as bad, one example of this is \"Peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely for above teh planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrated the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" (paragraph 6) This supports that he is a good authour and deplaning his stance on the agurmeny becasue he can make the other side information help his stance in an way.\n\nIn conclusion, the author did a great job at suporting his idea. The diffrent ways of supporting it made it seem more persasive and he got across alot of ideas and information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education is an essential part of everyone's life. The importance of co-educational schools has become controversial in recent times. Some people harbour a belief that parents should enrol their children on co-education due to a plethora of reasons while other people are opposed to this notion. In this essay, I will elaborate on the positive aspect of these trends and thus lead to a logical conclusion.\r\n\r\nThere are adequate reasons to obtainable with the substantial reasons. The top-notch concrete reason is children attending in the co-education school which enable them to performance better by compete with other genders in academic records as well as extra circular activities. Another infamy root is general equality. To probe more deeply, basically men are more arrogant and consider women in the low level. Therefore, studying in the co-educational schools, which help them to treat women with respect and protection.\r\n\r\nThe rearmost coherent factor cannot be neglected is that major of the job fields are co-education jobs. Therefore, fresher easily can colaborate with other gender people without shyness after graduation by attending the co-educational instututions.Another observation in this regard is that children attending the co-educational school, more chance decrease rate of rape and abuse cases.Needless to say that all the points stand in a good stead.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I reiterate that there are innumerable strong factors supporting that parents sending their children to a co-educational school, it's beneficial for individuals as well as for societies. Consequently, I firmly agree with the given statement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A computer software called the Facial Action Coding System has the ability to read facial expressions. One of the professors, Dr. Huang, predicts that this software could potentially be used in classrooms. He says, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored,\" The software could also fit to various learning styles. Using technology to read students' emotional expressions would be a beneficial addition for classroom setting.\n\nThe software would be able to detect emotions quicker than the teacher or fellow classmates can. The Facial Action Coding System is made by two professors who are experts in recognizing human emotions. Dr. Huang states \"Most human communication is nonverbal...\" The software is created to understand human emotions. With that said, the computer would be able to quickly target emotions and find an effective way to deal with it so it fits the student. For example, if a student became distracted, the software could pop a picture on the screen to grab the student's attention.\n\nThe program can provide assisted learning. Because the program can detect emotions, it can recognize if a person fully understands a subject or a problem. The learning style would eventually be recognized and the student's interests could be put to use. The system could try many learning styles, or one could be simply selected. A person with a learning disability could obtain the help they need.\n\nThe software has many other potential uses for a classroom setting. It could have settings for people who have disabilities. It could assist the school guidance counselor with issues a person could be dealing with. It could help a teacher recognize if a student is lying about losing his or her homework. It can even potentially help people understand each other better. It could possibly even have a reward system for the students and make them feel satisfied with themselves. FACS could even possibly help take the stress off future tests.\n\nAdding the Facial Action Coding System to classrooms would be a wonderful addition for everyone. The ability to detect emotions accurately is not available to everyone. But the Facial Action Coding System could help peers connect with it. The ideas are endless with this software! It's brimming with potential, much like every student in a classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How would life be with less usage of cars? Some advantages of limiting car usage would be less congestion, another would be the reducing of smog, and it wil also curb the greenhouse gas emissions. Are cars a danger to the world's enviroment? \"After days of near-record pollution,Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" People are trying to find ways of limiting car usage for the world's sake! People also having communities limit the use of car transportation to have to much car traffic.\n\nTo begin with, an advantange of limited car usage would be less congestion. If there was less congestion citizens could get to places without the risk of a car accident, the verdant streets of cities would be less crowded, and more space would be available for events such as parades, concerts, field days, and etc. A media trainer and mother of two said,\"When i had a car i was always tense.\" \" I'm much happier without the use of it.\" Without cars communities get more a peaceful sound. \"As she walked the verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drawn out the occasional distant motor.\" But less car traffic isn't one of the only advantages to the limited car usage; there would also be less smog.\n\nIn addition to, The reducing of smog would also be another advantage of limiting car usage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today we are going to talk about the study of Venus is worthy.Because Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Sometimes it's called the Evening Star. But I don't think that Venu is a star! It's the nickname that is misleading it's real personality.\n\nIf you\n\ndon't know Venus is the second planet from the Sun.Yes Venus is a planet because in the passage it said that\"Venus is actually a planet\".Venus is closest planet to Earth according to it's size and density.But also sometimes during the rotation it comes close by the distance too.Because sometimes it right around the corner in space\n\nhuman have spent numerours spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each mission was unmanned and none of the spacecraft\n\nlasted\n\nmore that few hours on this surface.\n\nAnd I think that could be danger for Earth in future. Because it is colsest to planet Earth. And if none of the spacecraft lasted long enough on this surface of Venus than it could effect the Earth if it comes more closer to Earth.Humans need Oxygen to survive but on Venus there is a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. And also the average surface temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenhit, and the atmopheric pressure is 90 times greater than humans face on Earth and as I said before it could be dangerous to Eath if in the future Venus comes more closer to Earth.\n\nSo I think we should learn more about Venus and try to protect ourselves from any harm happen in the future from Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that using this kind of technology to see emotional expression would be great. If you think about it most students fail because they dont get something and they just give up but if we use this kind of technology we can help milllions of kids in the U.S. Maybe even in other country. Dr. Huang said it could be like a \"effective human instructor\" by telling us whats wrong with the students , like if they aren't getting something or just bored. This type of technology can be very effective for students and schools, maybe in the next 10 year more students would graduate. Who know? but that doesn't mean we can't try it through out the years because thats how things are created from people new trying thing, some one didnt just magically made something up, it takes time and effort for something to be made and we can do the same by trying this new technology out. I believe that this new technology will dramatically help our society out and i also believe that it'll help the school and students out by using this new technology to read emotional expressions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, by technological progress, the amount of research which conducted by scientists or postgraduate students has increased. In these kind of situations, some individuals believe that the amount of money which is dedicated to professional research is limited, and by notice to this issue, it is better that the financial advocation cover scientific research instead of less valuable one.\n\nThere is common belief that scientific research has more definite benefits for society, such as medical advancement, technological progress, and environmental solutions. By concentrating on scientific research, governments can ensure that limited funding is allocated to endeavors that have merit and positive impact on the world.\n\nFurthermore, investigating on scientific research can contribute to economic growth. On their opinion, this kind of research not only could be beneficial for society but also could be helpful for economic growth. For example, governments can share this research during international collaboration and receive funds or get help from other scientists on other parts of the world.\n\nOn the other hand, some individuals think less common issues such as history, literature, and art could be beneficial too, because they not only foster a sense of belonging and patriotism among people from all walks of life, but broaden horizons.\n\nIn conclusion, I suppose there are more elements that show the significant importance of scientific research such as positive influence on the world and economic growth. While we shouldn't neglect this issue that less common research also are essential for our children's futures.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some obstacles many sharp rods surrounding buildings touched one could pop Another wind blowing hardunsafe dirigibles tied building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting care usage is an advantage because some people were always tense when they had a car and now they're saying they're much happier without it. Vauban is an example of a growing trend in Europe, the United States and elsewhere to seperate suburban life from auto use, as a component of a movement called \"smart planning\". Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai tend to make their homes. And that, experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions tailpipes.. Passenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and 50% in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\n\nIn the United States, the Envirornmental Protection Agency is promoting \"car reduced\" communities and legislatores are starting to act, if cautiously. Congestion was down 60% in the capital of France, after 5 days of intensifying smog... Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up 67% of vehicles in France, compared to a 53.3% average of diesel engines in the rest of Westen Europe. Recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer licenses as each year goes by. When adjusted for population growth, the number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily thereafter, according to an analysis by Doug Short of Advisor Perspectives. As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995.\n\nPart of the explanation certainly lies in the recession, because cash-strapped Americans could not afford new cars, and the unemployed weren't going to work anyway. But by many measures the decrease in driving preceded the downturn and appears to be persisting now that recovery is under way. It will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the envirornment, since transportation is the second largest souce of America's emissions, just behind power plants. Companies like Ford and Mercedes are already rebranding themselves \"mobility\" companies with a broader product range beyond product range beyond the personal vehicle. With all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit..\n\nNew York's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new priorities, as do a proliferation of car-sharing programs across the nation. There has been a large drop in the percentage of 16-to 39 year olds getting a license, while older people are likely to retain their licenses as they age. A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009... Bill Ford proposed partnering with the telecommunications industry to create cities in which pedestiran, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportaion traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\n\nSo in the end with all this information i think that limiting car usage is an advantage. It makes you explore more, get your excercise, try new things instead of always relying on a vehicle to take you somewhere. This information persuaded me and it made me realize what the gas from the car does to the Earth. this is the reason why the Earth and the air we breathe is so polluted because of whats in our cars and we dont even realize it. im definitely going to use it to my advantage i dont know about you....", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With conditions far harsher than on Earth and anything humans have expirenced, one the closes planet to Earth, Venus is increadibly inhosbitable. Dispite those facts scientists are still fascinated by the planet do to it's increadible similarity to Earth, but the conditions have prevented scientists from investigating throughly. With all spacecraft sent to Venus being destroyed it is a suprise that we are still trying to study this planet, and the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" gives very little insight into why scientists are still attempting to study the planet.\n\nTo start off Venus is our sister planet with very similar density and size to Earth with similar features with mountains, valleys, and other rocky structures. The author states that many scientists think that Venus could have supported life long ago and may have been covered in ocean and if this is true we may get much insight as to why Venus would change to become an exteremly inhospitable planet. Though the author gives us very little as to what we will be able to do with this information or what other information we may get. The author also mentions space travel but states only that, \"Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for planetary visit, a crusial consideration given the long time frames of space travel\" (\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" 4). Other than that small mention the author does not go into depth on this idea.\n\nThough the thought of being able to explore and study one of the closes planets to us is great the author of \"The Challenges of Exploring Venus\" does not do to good of a job of informing us as to why we would attempt to weather such harsh conditions. With the temperature going over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the pressure that could liquify metal its hard to reason why we should attempt to send probes to Venus let alone travaling there personaly and the author does not do a very good job covincing us that this is a good idea. They give us very little information as to what they will get from this and give us information that makes this sound crazy to attempt.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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